Elf: the Fourth Natural Disaster, Get Away!

I've read Chapter 51. Overall, it's a good Pokémon novel, with a brand new self-created plot, a heartthrob heroine who is the group's favorite, and a non-traditional animated game plot. I originally came here because I wanted to become a girl, but after actually reading it, I still read it as a normal novel. The protagonist is thoughtful and delicate, not like a holy mother, but has a loving heart and a heart-warming personality. He may become a trainer in the later stage, not a powerful dog, but an invincible little one. The plot is written a little quickly, the plot is a bit sketchy, the battle descriptions are average, and the meticulous writing needs to be strengthened; the several events written so far are a bit too hasty; the combination of the fourth natural disaster with Pokemon is indeed a bit strange, but surprisingly not very disturbing. When writing about the fourth natural disaster later, it seems that there is a lack of stamina. It is undeniable that he is an author with ideas. There are few descriptions of battles, focusing on daily life, so you can relax and relax by watching it. The update rate is normally 4,000 a day, but the pace is a bit slow, as if it has forgotten to evolve. It's worth a read for Pokémon lovers, and I look forward to the author making great progress!

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This book is very well written and suits my taste. I hope the author can keep writing.

It's very good-looking. It's not like other Pokémon that have a harem every day. It's relatively good-looking at the moment. I just hope that the author won't delay the update, and that the talent of the protagonist can be improved a little. This is also the first time I've read it. I recommend readers to come and take a look at the author's article about Pokémon.

The writing is good, but there are a lot of foreshadowings. I hope it can be filled in, and the protagonist can stop being the God of Plague. How come he suffers disaster every time he goes to one place?

You can give it a try I have always liked Pokémon before, but after reading Pokémon-type novels I can only shake my head. It's not that the writing is not good. Some of them are good in writing and have good combat descriptions. But like fairy tales, there is death, but it feels pretentious (maybe I haven't read some of the good ones). The villain can't die for a long time, and the elf fighting seems to have unlocked blood (actually, some are not like this, but this is generally what I see, and I haven't read the recent Pokémon articles). I have been keeping my breath. Although the anime is like this, I still don't like it (after all, it is for children) Personally, I like that this kind of character exits the scene more simply. The villain doesn't have to recite his lines for a long time without taking action (maybe? This is a Pokémon novel that surprised me. It certainly has many shortcomings, such as weak combat descriptions, etc. (I personally rarely review books, and I don't know much about it. But I hope the author will work hard and write better and better. I look forward to seeing the ending.

This book is super good-looking and very appetizing. Even if it's unfinished at the back, I can't say that it's unfinished. The author just cut off the update when the protagonist just evolved into Gardevoir. Please hurry up and continue writing because I'm going to deduct a star for this. Everything else is very nice [Adore][Adore][Adore] I boldly made up the ending, but suddenly there was a roar, and a space-time crack appeared in the sky. Arceus came out of it and took Gardevoir as his wife. Finally, the two gave birth to a child, and this article is over. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

A very good story, with a kind of daily warmth, noble, sacred beauty, a wonderful feeling that I can't describe in any words. Bai Yan blows gently through my soul like a breeze, washing away the mediocrity of the world for me. Bathing in this spring breeze, how beautiful it is... I want to sink in it forever... It's a pity that everything is like an out-of-reach fairy tale, how do I get there...

After changing the part about Jugelas, there are no major bad points. It's a pretty good Pokémon story. The protagonist and the protagonist's elf teammates have no cp, so there is no need to worry about messing around. And the author still owes 23 chapters. It's very interesting to see the author collapse because of so many gifts~

There is a lot of foreshadowing, which lays a solid foundation for the subsequent description. It is not difficult without a clear outline. It is very confident to write down. Such a huge world view makes people want to read it eagerly. It can last for at least two or three hundred chapters. There is nothing the author can do if he does not update it. Every time I see it, it is so good The novels are always interrupted, which always makes me very sad, but as a reader, I have nothing to do. Maybe reality can never let fantasy take the upper hand. Fantasy is always charming, tempting, magnificent and great, but reality often cannot give it and always hits. It doesn't matter, enjoy life and accept reality. Sometimes Being in a daze is also a good choice. At least you won't feel sad until you notice him. I hope that every reader can encounter many beautiful novels that he likes. I also hope that every author can write his favorite novels, the protagonists he expects, and the endings he expects (I am Gardevoir xp Normal, the kind of person who protects his master and gives him a sense of security and warmth in his daily life is really good👍It's a pity that there are too few outstanding ones. If I have the ability, I will definitely draw short comics and novels about Gardevoir, which are full of daily life and warmth and sweetness. Who doesn't like this?) Another piece of dust that will soon become a masterpiece

Well, the writing is good, and the author's true words are quite interesting. I'll give it five stars. I just want to play another game. The old rules are: 100 five-stars, 100 gifts, and one more chapter. (ω< )★

Really, really, really, really, really, really good looking, but there is no trainer or cp Suddenly I felt it was so good. To be honest, I thought it was good when I just watched it, but after watching it, I saw many problems. One is that the protagonist is too subdued. All the elves are voluntarily subjugated. In addition, the protagonist also set himself a poke ball to avoid being subdued. There are really many problems.

It's very beautiful. Come on, author [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it]

The writing is good, the plot and characters are well created, but it would be bad if you stop updating it! (●｀∧´)Ψ. °*． °

The amateur author can write so well, which is beyond people's expectations. He is very responsible. I just don't know when the author will do another reward and update activity, and 99 love letters will start [making faces]

Damn, can you please give me more? It's too short, come on, it's really beautiful [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration]

It's so beautiful. ヽ(￣д￣;)ノ I've never seen such a good article about a female Pokémon Gardevoir in my life. "I am bored reading this article tonight. There are three million famous quotes in the book. Who knew that the author did not update enough, which made me dream today!" The author will update quickly, and I also wish you a happy New Year!

The plot of this book is compact, the characters are vivid, and every detail foreshadows the subsequent plot, keeping people excited and looking forward to it. It can make reasonable imagination, reflects meaningful philosophy, the writing is smooth and concise, and gives full play to one's imagination. It is a good article that is elegant, graceful, smooth and coherent, especially the character's language is humorous, coupled with the use of some exquisite words, it invisibly adds a lot of interest to the article ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

The subject matter is very novel, and the current content is not too toxic. Come on! Very nice

I feel that both the cover of this book and the author's writing style maintain a style - refreshing and concise. It looks very comfortable. This is the first time I've seen the content and subject matter (I'm not sure about others), and the content is okay. However, some people may not be able to stand one point: The protagonist (an adult) dressed as La Ruelas, his behavior gradually became childish, and his thinking gradually became childish, so I saw some people questioning it in the comments later. In fact, I think it's okay. The flaws are obvious, but the impact is not big (if you really can't bear it, forget it). However, it is still recommended to take a look [note][note][note]

The plot is very good, and it's a favorite of the group, but the updates are too slow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's beautiful (♥∀♥) and the plot is very good! I am here to announce that Bai Yan is my wife! But when will the ugly fish evolve? And when will Bai Yan evolve into Gardevoir [Thinking] I really like Gardevoir so much [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]

It's a super, super, super good-looking novel. I really like the characters. The protagonist is semi-invincible and evolves all the way, maybe becoming a mythical beast. The characters are also very easy to like, but the content is a bit too little. I hope the author will work hard! !

Super super pretty! ! ! Regardless of the setting or plot, I like it very much. To be honest, I didn't really like the setting of male to female before, but this book successfully made me like this setting. No matter what others think, to me, this book is really well written! ! ! I hope the author can complete this book, come on!

It's so good 😍 The last time I saw such a good-looking book was the last time. It's worth it, brothers. It's neither long nor short. The content is really great [laughing] Highly recommended!

It's pretty good to watch, although I don't like some of the plot in the middle, but overall it's okay. When I saw the latest chapter, I suddenly didn't want to read it anymore. It feels like the protagonist is like a disaster star. People die because of her wherever she goes, and she has gained a partner. After all, the partner will hinder her escape route to some extent. I don't understand what she is trying to do. Isn't it good to run alone? When the time comes, just fight back through growth through combat. When I saw the death of the Charizard leader, I felt so disgusted with the protagonist that I felt empathy. The role of the companion is to fight Renata with her after she grows up in the later stage. I think that if there is no protagonist, her companion will live a good life, stable and ordinary, and become very strong because of their high talent. It's not because the protagonist is always involved in various dangerous worlds, and even the family is destroyed, that is, the Pokémon is innocent, and someone else would definitely hate her.

The author is great, and I am a reader. I really like reading it but I can't get enough of it. Please update it quickly. I, a reader, can't find the novel about the reincarnation of Pokémon. The author is great, the book you wrote about the reincarnation of Pokémon is so good.

It's okay, it's a high-quality product, there are definitely some minor flaws, but its excellence is really dazzling. (Mainly because I think participating in the quartz competition is a bit like that. It seems that I have to do it in order to promote the plot)

It's a nice plot with lots of ideas.

Support, support, the time of accumulation has passed, this book full of potential has begun to explode [Like] and all we have to do is to improve the rating, don't let those black men take the opportunity to sneak in [Like] [Like] [Like]