Starting from Being a Pirate, I Am a Cultivator and Defy Everything!

I have read a lot of books about "One Piece". Most of the protagonist's positions are black and white, and you will always get bored after reading it for a long time. This book won't. In the words of the book, the protagonist's position is like a "delicate gray". Through a simple and easy-to-understand subjective perspective, it interprets the author's "pirate" world view in a unique way. The author's writing style focuses on the scenes, interactions, exchanges and dialogues between characters. Although the battle scenes are not described too much, they are just right. There will be no embarrassing situation of feeling tired after reading or having no feelings after reading. "Do Confucian things, follow legal principles, practice Taoism, and have compassion." It is vividly reflected in this book. I like!

The protagonist in this book treats the characters as real people and has a very comfortable way of getting along with him. It has been well received.

Nice! I love so much! I won't talk about the plot, I've mentioned spoilers, but the arrangement is very reasonable! And the sudden humor of the protagonist (author) made me laugh!

It's great that the main character is a marine, who is very popular with Sengoku, Garp and other big guys. The daily fights are very interesting. No Sengoku Senbei survived, making up for all the regrets of not having Z brothers, Sengoku's son, grandson (Luo), Robin not wandering, etc. Now the five old stars are also stunned by the tiger.

It's so good. It's a pirate novel worth staying up late to read.

The plot is coherent and super interesting! ! ! ! Only discovered now

The score of the new book is a bit lower, but the story of human affairs is very good, and the writing style is relatively smooth. It is much better than those books that scored 9 points. It has been a long time since I encountered a book that I can read with a smile. I don't go out of my way to describe the characters. The battles are also concise and concise. It is very comfortable to read and contains daily sentences. It's also easy to read, and there are occasional mistakes in the names, but it's harmless and not brainless. It's just that there are too few chapters at the moment, and I don't think it's enough. I originally thought that it would be within a hundred chapters, but I didn't have any hope of reading it. I changed it after reading a few chapters. I didn't expect that there was a surprise.

It's very good. I enjoyed watching it. There are no poisonous points so far. The pirate chapter looks like it will take about a hundred chapters to finish.

It's pretty good. The only pity is that Akainu is a bit black. Personally, I still like Akainu. Although he killed Ace, there is no soldier who wouldn't kill someone, let alone for his own beliefs. Although it is not a masterpiece, it is a fanfic worth recommending. Relaxed and cheerful. Readers who are too demanding about connotation can withdraw it [laughing and crying] What is worthy of praise is that the author's three views are really correct! (Unlike some novels, they care about bounties and military achievements. Those who care about this will start to become anti-social when they feel a little wronged) It's very rigorous. This should be the reason why this book has a high score. It's not subdued, but it's well-founded. I hope I don't have a harem. In fact, it's quite good without a female protagonist. Nowadays, no matter movies, TV series or novels, there are emotional lines. I'm really a bit tired of aesthetics [laughing and crying]

Very good. This is the first time I have seen such a beautiful One Piece fanfic. The writing is also good.

The writing is very good, without skipping a beat, has content, and the writing style is relaxed and personalized. Except for slow updates and a small number of words, everything else is pretty good.

Not bad, not bad, the selection system is much better looking than those fishing navies. Lighthearted, humorous, and funny. It's just that Brother Ming's character set up is not good. He is a lunatic who wants to subvert the world. How could he restrain himself after being beaten up by the protagonist? But overall it's still very good, please come on the author and the updates are not enough.

To be honest, let's take fan fiction as an example. It's a really good book. The plot is not too smooth and it gives people a very relaxing feeling. The more you read, the more you want to read. I have read 200 chapters so far. I hope the author can continue to read. The first chapter of the Pirates chapter of Samsung Bar is really good, but the last few chapters have been hastily concluded, but the Naruto chapter is really watery and a little poisonous➕The word water is the word, the more I read, the more poisonous I abandon it.

This fanfic is very well written. The three views are very correct. The author's own speculation also fills in a lot of pitfalls. The ending is perfect.

It can be quite interesting and heartwarming. Just don't turn it into a fight.

Fun, no awkward emotional drama. Very good story. I hope I can keep writing and there will be no particularly obvious bugs. I personally feel that the Qi training period should just start with the simple use of elements and physical power, but this level is not as high as the Yonko of the General, and is almost the same as that of the Lieutenant General. It is more reasonable to be able to skillfully use earth, fire, feng shui to benchmark against generals during the foundation building period. The peak red-haired Roger and Whitebeard are almost at the late stage of foundation building or even the core formation stage. After all, the battle power in the novels about cultivating immortals can be roughly determined to destroy the island effortlessly, which is when the pill formation stage begins. During the Qi training stage, a mountain has almost no means. At the beginning of the foundation building stage, mana can support a lot of skills. After all, in so many years of novels, the villains who can be called natural disasters all started at the lowest level of pill formation. No matter how you say it, you can be a protagonist at this age, from thirty to forty years old. Only when you are in the alchemy stage can you be compared to a genius monk.

This book is a clean book. He really wrote about the changes of the protagonist. It is really well written. I even think that his 9.2 Is low because he is really well written and I can't describe it. The plot is well handled, the writing is also very good, and there is basically no difference in the ability setting. Although the protagonist's combat power looks a bit weird, in fact, if you think about it carefully, you will find it. That's right, because Pirates is actually just a middle-class world, and if you want to compare him with Immortal Cultivators, there is absolutely no way to compare with that, so there is no problem. Of course, there are still some minor problems, but the impact is not that big. There are a few missing words, and there are too many words, but the impact is not that big. The author's writing style is also very good, and the ending is also good. Because it is a fan, what is important is innovation, and as long as it is not too outrageous, it will be fine. The above is my evaluation after reading the One Piece chapter. Because I don't know what the world behind it is like and I haven't read it yet, so this review is only for the Pirates chapter. Generally speaking, the Naruto chapter is okay. It is relatively bland and similar to the retirement life of a master who cultivates immortality. The ending is a bit hasty. It can be seen that the author is not very good at writing, but it is true that even the author himself said that his writing skills have declined [face covering], but it is a newcomer. The author is very good at writing like this. If you recommend it, it's okay. If you like the dull one, you can read it. If you don't like it, I suggest you just finish it after reading the pirate chapter [facepalm] and then read the ending speech of the last chapter. That's about it. [Facepalm]

Now this book is very good, it seems smoother, and the protagonist has a better personality, a bit domineering, but also a bit funny and rogue. Some of the difficult changes in the original book are more reasonable and not abrupt! Very good, come on!

The plot is reasonable and reasonable, so I won't comment too much on the combat description. After all, the fighting plot is just an embellishment for the plot. As long as you don't write any more operations that make you unconscious after using your ultimate move, the previous description of the fighting plot is indeed a bit low.

Originally I just watched it for fun, but I didn't expect the protagonist to do this later. I was really amazed by the principles the protagonist taught Luo and Robin or others after each battle. He interspersed some very interesting and interesting stories with very positive principles. I felt that he taught me a lot. The author is really amazing. I know how to do it. I have been reading the author's books all the time. This book is really the best among the novels of the same type that I have read. Moreover, this book brought me a lot of fun and filled Oda's pitfalls. It made me feel very satisfied. The Devil Fruit and Luffy in the end really scared me. The sense of immersion was very strong. As said, the author is really awesome [Blow kiss]

I think the first volume is pretty good, and the second volume is pretty good too.

Not bad, very beautiful. I hope the author will work harder. Although there is nothing interesting in the early stage, as long as you stick to the middle and later stages, you will find that this book has a lot of room for improvement. Moreover, the things written by the author are also very interesting. Let everyone find more fun in reading books. Even I couldn't help but smile. Although some of the content feels awkward, and the content with girls feels awkward, but overall it can be said to be very good. Some four-character idioms have been added appropriately. There are also some allusions in ancient books. The author is very good at writing this. I would like to give it five stars for support.

Not to mention funny, this is a great book with so many pirate stories.

Finished reading. I think the Pirates and Naruto chapters should be reviewed separately. The pirate chapter is the best among the best, with smooth logic + relaxed writing style + a master of realizing dreams. The two most valuable points are that, first, the background arranged for the pirate world can basically justify itself; second, the characters are well created, and they basically have a three-dimensional image, with very few cerebral palsy. (Celestial Dragons are originally suffering from cerebral palsy, so this does not count). To sum up, it is one of the best pirate fanfics I have read on Tomato, and the one about Akainu is also good. The Naruto chapter is a bit worse than the Pirates chapter. Mainly in terms of conception, it may also be because Naruto is over. The overall style is still very relaxed. It's a pity, in fact, the adaptability of the relaxed style to the Naruto world is not as good as that of One Piece. Danzo Obito was born, and the ending arranged for them was a little too easy. Overall it's pretty good, definitely at Tomato level 9+

I haven't seen such a good Pirates fanfic in a long time. I hope the author will continue to work hard. You must take care of the quality, I gave it five stars.

The author said that this is his first novel, and it is an essay. I think it is very good. As a bookworm of 20 years, I must give this book a thumbs up. First, the logic is self-consistent, and all kinds of laughter and curses can be turned into articles. All kinds of poems, songs, and songs can be picked up at your fingertips, and you can find them occasionally with good hands; second, the length is appropriate, not deliberately irritating, not procrastinating at will, and can satisfy the reader's preferences. In summary, I hope the author will continue his efforts and provide more high-quality wines [Like]

Comment first after reading the pirate part. Nice! ! Basically, everyone is happy. Although it can be said to be an invincible novel, it is written very happily and there is no heroine. Because the protagonist is interesting and good at doing things, he has a good relationship with the three generals, the elderly F4, and even the five old stars. The writing angle is quite good, and it is a very joyful article. It is very interesting for the protagonist to manage the Shichibukai as the fourth general, and everyone is managed obediently, hahaha. Maginot and Robin (who were picked up and raised by the protagonist) are both younger sisters. Luo and Ace Luffy call the protagonist uncle. Luo became the navy and is the one who appears the most among the new generation. Not bad, not bad I'll review it after reading the Naruto chapter. I don't know much about Naruto's story, but this volume doesn't stop me from reading it. It's just an invincible and piercing comic book. You can read it. I have five stars for Pirates and four stars for Naruto [I understand]

Let's talk about the conclusion first. The Pirates chapter is the first volume. I personally can give it a 9.5! It is one of the top three or even number one among all the Pirates fics I have read so far. This time it was my second brush and I saw no comments. Whether it's manslaughter or just want to retire, what should I say? Maybe I'm older, but I like this kind of thing. The whole thing is very consistent with Chinese baby watching [face covering]. It contains traditional Chinese thoughts and modern red thoughts, as well as human feelings and sophistication. The characters in it are not simply facial makeup. Since they have traveled to a different world, the other world is no longer a procedural facial makeup, but a living and three-dimensional person! This is very good. I stopped following the Naruto chapter because I didn't really like it. If you are like me and just love pirates, I strongly recommend that you just read the first volume. Really, if the author had written about pirates and then stopped, I think this book should have received a 9.5 Rating! But because the depiction of pirates is so successful, even if the second volume is okay, it will give people a feeling that the level has dropped. Come on, author!

I finished reading Chapter 321 of the first volume. Personally, I think the novel is very good. It doesn't have a lot of hostility. The author has very upright views and there are no obvious errors in thinking and logic. The author's first volume mainly writes about the world of pirates. Although this Novice Village has 500,000 words, the author's writing style is still good. There is no obvious water, but the protagonist's actions in traveling to another world are interspersed with laughter and scolding. In my opinion, the protagonist's thinking is relatively normal. He does not have the character of a virgin who travels to the past and wants to save the world. It doesn't have that preachy feel. The author has made a certain degree of secondary creation to fill in the gaps, but in my opinion, this is exactly the meaning of fan fiction. Everyone comes to read fan fiction to relax and make up for the regrets in the original work. If you insist on asking me to say that this novel has any shortcomings - it would be that it doesn't accept beautiful women [smiles]

Nice to watch, love to read, urge for updates I wanted to publish a long speech, but I am uneducated and one sentence is enough to make the world go by. I really like Mo Xingchen, as it says in the book, you can be lazy, but you can't be incapable, you can be lazy, you can fish, but when you get to that position, you have to be patient and conscientious. Read thousands of books and travel thousands of miles. For me personally, a good book should not only be enjoyable to read, but also learn a lot from it, and Mo Xingchen is the brightest star in the endless sky in this book. [Praise]