Luck to Become a God

I have read fifty-six chapters so far. To sum up, it is well written. There are no big logical problems. The description of human nature is okay. Various characters and supporting roles are a bit of a hodgepodge, but the jokes are well integrated. Overall, it is quite interesting for the time being.

4.9 Stars for plot Super Stitch Monster, you thought it was the world, but it turned out to be a martial arts grudge, you thought it was an open world, but it turned out to be destiny, three sons of destiny, and a reborn person who defied the will of heaven, had the beginning of Little Swallow, and the idea of a civet cat replacing a prince. There is force to explode, and there is also the power to plot. Anyway, there are a lot of elements to look at, and you can always make up for the pitfalls. 4.6 Stars for writing After all, he is an online writer. I don't know if he is a newbie, so he should be encouraged more. Besides, he is a tomato? Taking such a big step, it is inevitable that it will be a bit overwhelming. However, there are too many facts and jokes that I can't stand, so it's quite interesting to read. Overall, it is still recommended

The writing is exquisite. In the tomato environment, you are undoubtedly a piece of gold. Come on. Or you can add something like "Supreme" at the end, but don't add "Lord"! ! !

It makes my eyes bright, keep it up💪[Like][Like][Like]

For now, it's pretty good. [Learned] [Learned] Regarding the names of the characters in the comments and their hodgepodge of martial arts, it actually doesn't matter. I personally accept it well [laughs]. Of course, this only represents my personal opinion. As for the protagonist's character and other aspects, I quite like it [laughs]. There are not so many emotional lines, the writing is delicate, and the protagonist is unprofitable [laughing], haha. The foreshadowing in the article will be revealed later. Well, there may be some foreshadowing that I don't know about. I listen to books, sometimes at 3.0X speed, and I don't have a comprehensive understanding of the plot. At over ninety chapters so far, it's still pretty good. Personal preferences vary. The book "Tomato" is very good for me, but I don't know what it is like for other readers. Therefore, the above comments are only personal opinions. If you are different, I will not refute it, but please be merciful. [Send heart][Send heart] Regarding the author, I definitely hope that he can be updated more. I will do my best and don't force it. The author must persist. If you think you can adopt the suggestions from readers, just take them. Of course, your own ideas are also very important. You must balance the relationship between the two. [Hold] [Hold] Okay, I'm done commenting. If you don't like it, don't comment [Send your heart]

I like this book very much. It's really well written, especially the descriptions of the pig's feet and the beggar at the beginning are very good later on. I recommend Wall Crack

The whole book is a hodgepodge, but I think the author is very successful in stitching it together. It is not a fantasy, and the infinite flow has not been released yet. It is said that it is the first world that combines historical martial arts. All the characters in it are very consistent with the dynasty and time. I read it smoothly. The three views of the protagonist are good, and I really like it. I just thought for a while how the author stitched together Jin Yong's martial arts, historical fantasy, infinite flow, conspiracy, conspiracy, character story background... Frog, there are too many interesting things.

The writing process, the characters are full of flesh and blood, and the short stories are explosive. Don't write about cultivating immortals. Is this something that a mere mortal like me can imagine?

The plot is smooth, the writing is very good, and the stitching is very good. Some people say that this book likes to force a 50-50 split. Isn't this ridiculous? The enemy of the protagonist is originally the child of destiny. If you don't say anything else, it would be outrageous to have such luck in real history. The author's plot design and description are not obtrusive. I highly recommend it. The word count is small now and I have put it on the bookshelf. I haven't seen any poisonous points since Chapter 69. The protagonist's character is also very likable and has avoided many poisonous points.

Not bad! Although the Tomato author's writing skills are up and down, this book can already be called a masterpiece. Anyway, it kept me on the Tomato platform again. Of course, as long as there are no mistakes in the subsequent world. Also, I personally like the harem very much. If possible, the main world The author can write the protagonists like Little Dragon Girl, Jin Yong, etc. In the main world, and the longevity style, which is behind-the-scenes buffs, apprenticeships, etc. They can be written however they look good. Of course, these are all suggestions. The author's inspiration is the most important, so you must stick to it.

It's great to watch, the plot is exciting, the variety of martial arts is not messy, the protagonist has a good personality, please come on the author 6. Even if Zhao Muchen could fight the protagonist back and forth, he almost killed the protagonist and escaped. In the end, when he activated the earth sword, he couldn't even kill Xiao Yanyang, who was protecting Zhao Muchen. It doesn't have the same flavor as the previous version. It also says that the protagonist's skills will automatically increase and he will have that level of strength at the age of 5. Now he can't kill anyone. Writing and writing turned into gs.

The writing is okay, and I can read it if I'm afraid of it, but I would like to make some comments! First, if you are writing about the heavens, you must grade the plot well! You can't waste too much pen and ink on one world, especially on the small worlds in the early stages. You can focus on the pen and ink for the larger world in the middle and later stages! Second, the suspense, branch plot, and foreshadowing are a bit stiff and unsmooth. It's not that the foreshadowing is bad, but the concept is very clever and the integration is okay, especially Zhao Wuli's guidance on Zhao Fan's true identity. What is it without supporting characters! But the writing style is a bit stiff! If you don't have Shunhua, you won't have that hearty feeling! The book is a good book, and I can clearly feel the author's intentions! Come on!

A very good novel, from the beginning of conquering the small local world with low martial arts to the exploration of a new world after becoming a god. The content is complex and the stitch monster is still alive. Link by link, you can see many similar cameos from movies and classics. I had a great time watching the part where the world of peak technology invades the world of gods. The description of the collision of technology and magic in team battles was so written that I really liked it. There is also a passage that appears frequently in this book and is more attractive to me: ''Everything that passes by leaves its mark. ''

The protagonist is decisive in killing and is the perfect choice to be the villain! This book is well written, and I have read more than 100 chapters, but the content is a bit too exaggerated, and I can't stand it anymore. It's still good to pass the time. I hope the author will keep up the good work! If you don't agree with the above personal remarks, please ignore [love] [love] [love]

It's very good-looking. The male protagonist is the kind of person who kills decisively. The whole writing is not muddled. The plot design is also very good. The author is really attentive. There are also some foreshadowings that I won't spoil in detail [shy][shy]

It looks good. No poisonous points. The overall expression is clear. I can only comment in one word, great! ! ! !

Overall, it's good. The writing is fluent, the main plot is clear in the early stage, the plot has no poisonous points, the male protagonist acts decisively, has high force value, and other characters are also made of flesh and blood. However, in the later stage, the writing of other world lines is not as good as that in the early stage, and the ending is broken.

The writing is very good and the logic is clear, but I can't accept this kind of stitched book. It's a matter of personal taste. After all, I haven't read the original book in detail, and I have almost forgotten the plot, so it will be more uncomfortable to read it. I also have a question: Is this book related to the villain or something? I was attracted by the title, but it felt different from what I thought, more like a novel about Jianghu [Chigua]. But back to the novel, this book is really good-looking, the writing and pace are good, and it has received five-star praise ~ [Love] I hope the author will work hard ^0^~

It looks good. The author's writing skills are good. The character of the protagonist is not much different from the introduction. The IQ is online. Emmmm so far it's okay. I recommend it. I hope it won't collapse later. There are still some minor flaws, but it's not a big problem. It's just that it's a bit slow. It's a pain for my sister-in-law.

The layout is reasonable, the methods are decisive, and the setting is novel. This is the character of the protagonist I imagined. It is a pity that it is not finished, otherwise I would have read it in one sitting. In addition, there are too few positive protagonists, and it is a bit uncomfortable to delay the plot in order not to be killed. If you put more effort into strategy and scheming, it will definitely be a fine book.

I have just finished reading the first large copy. The logic of the book is self-consistent and the writing style is in line with my taste. The most important thing is that so far, the protagonist has not appeared to be trying to sell others because he fits a few keywords in the introduction. Recommendation index 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 After returning to Earth, I called it the "Return of the Dragon King". It was a million points, and it was too disconnected from the characters I created earlier. I'll watch it later.

The author's writing style is not bad, and the subject matter is quite novel. Anyway, it is particularly to my liking. [Laughing evilly] It's just too little. I hope the rest of it will be as exciting. The author looks forward to your follow-up. [Laughing]

The writing is quite good. Although there are many places where the writing is quite weird, the rhythm, characters, etc. Are all described very well. Moreover, I think this book does have a refreshing feeling of the villain killing the protagonist, so it is considered well written.

It took nearly four hours to see the newly updated place. Hahahahaha, it's very beautiful. I think a new map will be opened. I hope the author will speed up the update and go to the upper realm soon. I want to see the content of the upper realm. Come on.

Very good-looking, clear logic, tight rhythm, very good-looking, highly recommended [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post]

There is no mindless killing of the protagonist in this book. Luck can kill the protagonist at will, so why do we need the protagonist? Each book has its own settings. Don't substitute the settings of other books. It's very comfortable to read this way.

I think it's one out of five. I've seen a lot of naysayers in the comment section, but it's the opposite for me. The protagonist seems ruthless and decisive so far, which is my favorite character. As long as the follow-up is still a CP-free book, this book can be considered a high-quality book for me.

This book is very good. The main character is not a virgin. He is decisive in killing and has an online IQ. It is very good. I hope the author will never fail to finish it. He must be careful and write more than 1 million words. And it is not enough to read now. I can only put it on the bookshelf to wait for the completion.

Very good, I'm looking forward to the story of the fight for the throne. Nice looking, love watching

I watched it a long time ago and I still have an impression. I came across it accidentally and wanted to give it a good review. Unfortunately, the author stopped updating due to some reasons. However, I still hope that the author can live a good life. Maybe I don't know when I will think of this book forgotten in the corner again? [Laughing out loud]