Seizing Fortune to Investiture the Gods

I have read fifty-six chapters so far. To sum up, it is well written. There are no big logical problems. The description of human nature is okay. Various characters and supporting roles are a bit of a hodgepodge, but the jokes are well integrated. Overall, it is quite interesting for the time being.

4.9 Stars for plot Super Stitch Monster, you thought it was the world, but it turned out to be a martial arts grudge, you thought it was an open world, but it turned out to be destiny, three sons of destiny, and a reborn person who defied the will of heaven, had the beginning of Little Swallow, and the idea of a civet cat replacing a prince. There is force to explode, and there is also the power to plot. Anyway, there are a lot of elements to look at, and you can always make up for the pitfalls. 4.6 Stars for writing After all, he is an online writer. I don't know if he is a newbie, so he should be encouraged more. Besides, he is a tomato? Taking such a big step, it is inevitable that it will be a bit overwhelming. However, there are too many facts and jokes that I can't stand, so it's quite interesting to read. Overall, it is still recommended

The writing is exquisite. In the tomato environment, you are undoubtedly a piece of gold. Come on. Or you can add something like "Supreme" at the end, but don't add "Lord"! ! !

It makes my eyes bright, keep it up💪[Like][Like][Like]

For now, it's pretty good. [Learned] [Learned] Regarding the names of the characters in the comments and their hodgepodge of martial arts, it actually doesn't matter. I personally accept it well [laughs]. Of course, this only represents my personal opinion. As for the protagonist's character and other aspects, I quite like it [laughs]. There are not so many emotional lines, the writing is delicate, and the protagonist is unprofitable [laughing], haha. The foreshadowing in the article will be revealed later. Well, there may be some foreshadowing that I don't know about. I listen to books, sometimes at 3.0X speed, and I don't have a comprehensive understanding of the plot. At over ninety chapters so far, it's still pretty good. Personal preferences vary. The book "Tomato" is very good for me, but I don't know what it is like for other readers. Therefore, the above comments are only personal opinions. If you are different, I will not refute it, but please be merciful. [Send heart][Send heart] Regarding the author, I definitely hope that he can be updated more. I will do my best and don't force it. The author must persist. If you think you can adopt the suggestions from readers, just take them. Of course, your own ideas are also very important. You must balance the relationship between the two. [Hold] [Hold] Okay, I'm done commenting. If you don't like it, don't comment [Send your heart]

The whole book is a hodgepodge, but I think the author is very successful in stitching it together. It is not a fantasy, and the infinite flow has not been released yet. It is said that it is the first world that combines historical martial arts. All the characters in it are very consistent with the dynasty and time. I read it smoothly. The three views of the protagonist are good, and I really like it. I just thought for a while how the author stitched together Jin Yong's martial arts, historical fantasy, infinite flow, conspiracy, conspiracy, character story background... Frog, there are too many interesting things.

I like this book very much. It's really well written, especially the descriptions of the pig's feet and the beggar at the beginning are very good later on. I recommend Wall Crack

The writing process, the characters are full of flesh and blood, and the short stories are explosive. Don't write about cultivating immortals. Is this something that a mere mortal like me can imagine?

The plot is smooth, the writing is very good, and the stitching is very good. Some people say that this book likes to force a 50-50 split. Isn't this ridiculous? The enemy of the protagonist is originally the child of destiny. If you don't say anything else, it would be outrageous to have such luck in real history. The author's plot design and description are not obtrusive. I highly recommend it. The word count is small now and I have put it on the bookshelf. I haven't seen any poisonous points since Chapter 69. The protagonist's character is also very likable and has avoided many poisonous points.

Not bad! Although the Tomato author's writing skills are up and down, this book can already be called a masterpiece. Anyway, it kept me on the Tomato platform again. Of course, as long as there are no mistakes in the subsequent world. Also, I personally like the harem very much. If possible, the main world The author can write the protagonists like Little Dragon Girl, Jin Yong, etc. In the main world, and the longevity style, which is behind-the-scenes buffs, apprenticeships, etc. They can be written however they look good. Of course, these are all suggestions. The author's inspiration is the most important, so you must stick to it.