[The Qings’ fine wine intoxicates the beauty; the bright moon has no heart, yet calls Chenqing] Everyone says the demoness of the Qing Clan, dressed in red, could topple a city with her beauty. She enters the game alone. Can she return with her beloved?
A certain Xian: “One glance from you is all it took for me to think of you day and night. Lotus flowers bloom together, so let’s stop fighting and let me take you home.”
A certain Zhan: “Whatever you need, if I have it, I’ll do everything I can and give you everything I own.”
A-Yao: “I’ve spent my life lying and hurting people. What terrible thing in this world haven’t I done? Taking your eyes was an accident. You’re the one person I never meant to hurt!”
The little rogue: “I used to think I did everything for you just to repay a debt of gratitude. But it turns out gratitude and love are so hard to tell apart. Just like love and hate, fate and ill-starred ties, they’re only a step apart, yet they grow from opposite directions.”
A-Qing: “I’m a little demoness, free and carefree. I kill without batting an eye and eat people without adding salt~ They say smiling girls have the best luck, but do you know how many joys and sorrows one smile, beautiful enough to topple a city, can bring beneath this bright sky?”
In Qing’s lifetime, her mortal heart stirred.
How can I put it? I just saw it from the beginning. The writing style is still good, but the personal description of the plot would be better. When listening to the book, it is a bit awkward to hear the names of people every time I talk. The character creation can be not too rigid, but it needs to be remembered because it conflicts with Wei Wuxian's personality and needs more prominent characteristics. Let's look at it later. Being able to keep writing is also a sign of love 👍
I think it's good, but there are some places that look a bit awkward hahahaha, such as reciting poems with Meng Yao and singing in front of the bastard hahahaha