Dismantle my cp. Thunder strikes
What the hell is this? It's so irritating.
Hmm... How to put it, maybe this author wants to be a Mary Sue heroine, so the heroine's aura is particularly strong. Not only Lan Zhan likes her, but also Wei Wuxian likes her. Lan Xichen dotes on her, and even Lan Qiren dotes on her. As long as they see the heroine, everyone is attracted by her appearance. It's like they have never seen a woman before. I have heard others say that the protagonist's halo is too strong and others seem to have never seen a female novel before. Today I finally saw it. As long as it is an original character, I think this book is seriously OOC. Maybe it's because I am a Cheng fan. I think the author wrote Cheng Cheng after Cheng Cheng transformed into Dan. What should I say? It's like writing a novel when I was a child. It feels like something written by someone I hate is super bad (I personally think don't scold me, scold me for kissing this author) and I personally think the author deleted some plots that shouldn't have been deleted, such as why Chengcheng transformed into an elixir, and Sun Shooting seems to have been abbreviated. There are some plots that I think are good, but the author didn't write them or just It is an abbreviation. He focuses his writing on the relationship between the male and female protagonists. I think writing too much emotional drama will bring visual fatigue to the readers (of course, if the writing is good, it will only cause fatigue if his writing style is like shit). No one is perfect, whether it is the protagonist or the supporting role, it is precisely because of their own advantages and disadvantages that it makes people feel very alive.
Summary: The book is ugly and not recommended [smile]
Oh, he not only focuses on the relationship between the male and female protagonists, he also focuses on describing the appearance of the heroine. From the first chapter onwards, the description of the heroine's appearance accounts for a large part. It gives me the feeling that the heroine has nothing to praise except her face. Like a vase, other than the face is visible, everything else is not qualified. It's just... It's really hard to comment.
The author of this fanfic is probably pretending to be himself, so he puts extra emphasis on the appearance of the heroine.
Lightning protection! ! ! It doesn't look good! ! ! Lightning protection! ! !
It was so well written and so sweet [send heartfelt message] I just clicked [like] on the upper right corner
No thanks for sending it to you [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]
There is simply nothing to say
Are you here to take revenge on society?
6 Pack of invincible
Speechless………………………………………………
This schoolbag is rotten
I kind of want to die🥲
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--The writing is quite good [laughs awkwardly]
Absolutely amazing, absolutely amazing
This thing was definitely written to take revenge on society.
Written to take revenge on society?
Dismantle my cp. Thunder strikes What the hell is this? It's so irritating.
Hmm... How to put it, maybe this author wants to be a Mary Sue heroine, so the heroine's aura is particularly strong. Not only Lan Zhan likes her, but also Wei Wuxian likes her. Lan Xichen dotes on her, and even Lan Qiren dotes on her. As long as they see the heroine, everyone is attracted by her appearance. It's like they have never seen a woman before. I have heard others say that the protagonist's halo is too strong and others seem to have never seen a female novel before. Today I finally saw it. As long as it is an original character, I think this book is seriously OOC. Maybe it's because I am a Cheng fan. I think the author wrote Cheng Cheng after Cheng Cheng transformed into Dan. What should I say? It's like writing a novel when I was a child. It feels like something written by someone I hate is super bad (I personally think don't scold me, scold me for kissing this author) and I personally think the author deleted some plots that shouldn't have been deleted, such as why Chengcheng transformed into an elixir, and Sun Shooting seems to have been abbreviated. There are some plots that I think are good, but the author didn't write them or just It is an abbreviation. He focuses his writing on the relationship between the male and female protagonists. I think writing too much emotional drama will bring visual fatigue to the readers (of course, if the writing is good, it will only cause fatigue if his writing style is like shit). No one is perfect, whether it is the protagonist or the supporting role, it is precisely because of their own advantages and disadvantages that it makes people feel very alive. Summary: The book is ugly and not recommended [smile] Oh, he not only focuses on the relationship between the male and female protagonists, he also focuses on describing the appearance of the heroine. From the first chapter onwards, the description of the heroine's appearance accounts for a large part. It gives me the feeling that the heroine has nothing to praise except her face. Like a vase, other than the face is visible, everything else is not qualified. It's just... It's really hard to comment. The author of this fanfic is probably pretending to be himself, so he puts extra emphasis on the appearance of the heroine. Lightning protection! ! ! It doesn't look good! ! ! Lightning protection! ! !
It was so well written and so sweet [send heartfelt message] I just clicked [like] on the upper right corner
No thanks for sending it to you [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]
There is simply nothing to say
Are you here to take revenge on society?
6 Pack of invincible
Speechless………………………………………………
This schoolbag is rotten I kind of want to die🥲
……………………………… --The writing is quite good [laughs awkwardly]
Absolutely amazing, absolutely amazing
This thing was definitely written to take revenge on society.
Good 4, I hope you can do the same in real life 7
Speechless…………
Why are there so many dreams [exploration]