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It's beautiful, don't forget to envy it. Although they are not the protagonists, they are pretty good. Jin Ziluo and Lan Xichen are a couple, and this is probably their story. Jin Guangyao is called Jin Ziyao here, and he has an older brother who loves and protects him. There are also people who like it, it's pretty good-looking. Xue Yang's ending is not bad either.

It's super beautiful, and it didn't break my CP(◠枫◠) He is given to everyone, Lan Xichen Jinluo, Lan Wangji Wei Wuxian, Jin Ziyao Nie Huaisang, Xiao Xingchen Song Zichen... I love it so much, even Jin Guangyao, who is attached to Hensheng, also feels the love and affection of being cared for by his brother (o((*^▽^*))o

Well written, with delicate handling of emotions CP is Lan Xichen and Jin Ziluo (original characters)

It's so beautiful, it's hard to find such high-quality Demon Dao fanfics! [Crying] Original character, teamed up with Lan Xichen, met when they were young, and fell in love Wei Ying was protected by his uncle, and he was forced to be buried in a mass grave without giving any pills to Jiang Cheng. He was still the young man with bright clothes, angry horses, and high spirits. He could have been three years old; Lan Zhan knew his intention long ago and did not wait for thirteen years; Jiang Cheng has never lost his golden elixir, his parents and sister are still alive, and the two heroes of Yunmeng have not parted ways; Meng Yao had to be invited into the Jin family as an elder brother who loved him, doted on him, and thought about him, and became "Jin Ziyao"; (I really cried about this) Xue Yang got his wish and was accompanied by his star, erasing the haze of his childhood little by little. Those feelings that are difficult to calm down... Are filled in! (In the extra story, why did the author take Yao Mei's knife to me? Woo woo woo [crying])

Although it is a Dangai novel, the author really writes the characters in it in a very feminine way, and the characters are all very OOC. Every time I read the description of the characters in it acting coquettishly, hugging their waists and crying, their ears turn red, my scalp goes numb and I slip away.

This book is the one I have read so far that perfectly resolves the top ten regrets. The tasks and personalities are very good and they do not go too far. Everyone has their own bright future.

It's beautiful, the characters are well-developed, and the plot is not confusing. It's a rare book. Ayao also has a brother who cares for him, loves him, and believes in him, which is great

This is my most satisfying Demonic fanfic. Originally, the ones I read before were mostly about romance, and even if they were about fan fiction, it would be a bad article. This is the five-star review I am most satisfied with, and I must give it. I originally planned to write a fanfic myself, because I either wrote romance or the fanfics I wrote were terrible. This one is well written, slow-paced, and reasonable. It's so good-looking that it's to die for!

It's really exciting. I finished reading it today. The fanfics I read before were either changed to romance or the characters were very OOC. Now I finally found a good fanfic. The protagonist Jin Luo has a gentle personality, one step counts for ten steps, wisdom, cares about the people around him and feelings, and he is transparent and rational. Moreover, this book has smoothed over many regrets in the Demonic Way. Shuangze Junzi is also particularly easy to criticize. Wangji and Xianxian are not like in the original work. Jin Guangyao and Xue Yang are both saved by the protagonist Jin Luo, and nothing like the original work happened. All in all, this book is really good. It is the best fanfic I have read so far.

Hehe, come on, come on [Blow a kiss] I've finished reading this book. This book is a fan novel about two male protagonists of Demonic Way. First of all, I haven't read the original work. Most of it is based on anime and changed TV series. First of all, this book has really solved a lot of regrets, and no one died (hehe~ [blowing kiss]). The protagonist is really gentle. The love story between two kind brothers is just a daily life, and then the main line is followed. Ahem, Xiaoqing Shuiwen, it has some neinei features~ [laughing evilly] Oh, by the way, there are brackets at the end of some words in this book (actually it is my first time to read this kind of book, it is quite novel and very vivid, hehe) If you like magic, I don't recommend it, you can take a look [Blowing Kisses] It's very interesting~ ps: I actually don't want to write a book review, but I'm too lazy to divide the books into groups for review, so I'll just review them♪(´ε｀ )

Five stars, my second five-star Tomato fanfic!

This is the only Demonic Way fanfic that I have read for the second time. It is really good-looking. The protagonist perfectly meets my requirements. There is nothing wrong with it. It is very good. It is very good. The character design of the protagonist is exactly what I have in mind. I never thought that I could find such a Demonic Way fanfic. Among all the Demonic Way fanfics on my bookshelf, this one is my favorite.

I was moved by the emotional description of this novel, which made me feel the complex emotions and deep bonds between the characters. In the author's writing, every character is vivid and their emotions are vividly expressed. I love this book and look forward to meeting you next time.

Everyone's ending is good, it's so good o(^▽^)oThere are no regrets [laughing] It's so well written o(^▽^)o

This book is better than reading, and it satisfied my regrets about Chen Qingling. The author keeps up the good work! Take good care of you!

I really like this novel. It's really good-looking. The emotional lines are also very delicate and not sudden. It just doesn't feel too abrupt when you read this novel. Everyone here has a happy ending, and they have overcome the regrets of the demonic path. It is really beautiful to see everyone [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It's a great magic fanfic that really fills a lot of gaps, and there are no OOC characters in the book. All the changes are based on the characters' personalities and styles in the original book. Well worth seeing

Inside, everyone felt that the dialogue was a bit like reading a script. I was persuaded to quit at first, but actually I felt that I got used to it after reading a few chapters. The emotional line of this book is still very sweet, the writing is also good, and the ending is very good. It is difficult to let go without any intention. Yunmeng Shuangjie is real , Xue Yang's broken finger has recovered, and some people will feel sorry for Yaomei. Lotus Pier is still there, and the warmth has not been crushed. Jin Ling is also the happiest child. The only thing is that when Jin Guangyao in the previous life envied Jin Ziyao in this life, he was still a little sad😭

It's really nice to see how each character has been created. Lan Xichen is taciturn, Lan Wangji is lively and wanton, Wei Wuxian is arrogant, Jiang Cheng is gentle and tender... Each character has his own story and his own highlight moment. This is really a good book. I recommend everyone to read it.

This can be regarded as a disguised rescue of Yi Nanping in the Demonic Path. If the Demonic Path really has Jin Luo, the ending will be as happy and without regrets as here. Everyone is happy. Senior Sister and Jin Zixuan are happily together, Jin Ling has become the happiest child, Wei Wuxian has not been shouted at by everyone, Lan Wangji has not been asking for help for thirteen years, Jiang Cheng has not fallen into despair, and Jiang and his wife are not saying goodbye when they say goodbye. They understood each other's feelings, Nie Huaisang didn't bother to play tricks because of Nie Mingjue's death, Xiao Xingchen wasn't blind, Xue Yang didn't force Xiao Xingchen to kill himself, Song Lan didn't take Shuanghua around the world, and Jin Ziyao finally didn't need to use all his tricks to get safe. This is the ending it should have.

It's very beautiful and fills my regrets.

Very beautiful, I followed it for three days I like Jin Luo's character very much. Everyone's character in it is very vivid. I like [shy][shy][shy][shy] very much. The author greatly [like][like][like][like]

The writing is super good. Zhang made up for all my regrets. Wu Yao has a brother who loves Zi Yi and has great plans for himself. He is really clean and has become an immortal governor that everyone respects. A Xian and Jiang Cheng have really become the two heroes of Yunmeng. Although there are always people who gossip about it, this time A Xian has Brother Luo to protect him, so Lan Zhan doesn't have to wait any longer. Senior sisters, Wen Qing, and Wen Ning are all alive and very happy.

It's super, super good-looking. Why isn't it popular? ? ?

Gentle as water, as delicate as wind, it is the best fanfic about "The Patriarch of the Demonic Way" I have ever read. Highly recommended (mainly because I heard that if the fan fiction score in Tomato is too high, it will be forcibly removed from the shelves, so I'm sorry, [send heart] to reduce the score)

It's good to watch, it's good to watch, and the story is wonderful. No matter how bad things are, there is always someone who treats you with kindness. Whether he is an elder brother, a senior uncle or a senior brother, the hero is a very gentle person. Fortunately, Arizawa Wujun relies on each other, and everyone has a better ending.

I watched it on and off, but finally I finished watching it. I really liked it. All the regrets and regrets I had were smooth, and all the wishes of the young boy came true. Very good(づ ●─● )づ

The writing is really good, the characters are super good, the plot is very good, the connection is very smooth, the writing style is very good, the imagery is superb, it just makes all my regrets come true. Why is there no Xiluo wedding, and no sweet love in Wangxian? Where are my other deputy CPs? Come back and write the second part, it is not enough to read. It is written so well, it should be the unfinished story developed by them.

Wencai continues to use Mo Xiang's original text, and the etiquette and etiquette are not obtrusive. The logical details of the story are well added. I am a long-time fan of the original work! There are some gaps in the timeline, but it's understandable, after all, there are a lot of cuts and changes in the storyline. Overall, this is a pretty good piece of demonic fan fiction, I like it!

It's beautiful and logical. Jin Guangyao is really heart-wrenching, but with an older brother, he is also hurt, so he is different. The protagonist is really a gentle person! Xue Yang also became different because of sugar! I really love it!