Third-Rate Novelist Surrounded by Yokohama Forces

A book with no flaws, it is quite eye-catching among the many toilet papers in Tomato. Whether it is the text style or the Chinese text, it makes people want to read it. It's obviously not a new author, maybe he has works elsewhere? From time to time, you can see some particularly well-written sentences, and the control of the characters is also very good (except for Mr. Mori's description, which is too short to be seen). What is more outstanding is the setting of Odasaku's original content. Odasaku's original appearances are relatively few, and his character is naturally difficult to grasp. In fact, most of Fumino's fans don't write much about Odasaku (some write puppets wearing Odasaku's skin, it is better not to write at all) There are many places where the words and sentences are not fluent. Generally speaking, having two ""s in a sentence is already the limit. If there are more, it can only be said that the person's language organization ability is not good. It is obvious that the wife uses a lot of words, and many typos can be found, cough The settings related to the heroine's "beauty" are well written. She is beautiful, but there is not much description on her face. There is a plot related to beauty, but there is no detailed description of the heroine's face (I still don't know the color of the heroine's eyes). I have rarely seen this kind of setting that indicates beauty but does not describe it in detail, but it is really good. I also like the dialogue between the heroine, Dazai, and Rando. They are really "communicating". The readers are discussing the content of the book with the author, not arguing, let alone preaching. It is great to see this kind of exchange of ideas. Well, my own language organization is not good either. Come on, madam, hurry up, I want to see the daily ε(*･ω･)_/ﾟ:･☆

Oh My God! What treasure trove was discovered! It's rare to see a Chinese novel that appeals to me so much. I was so shocked when I read it that I read it all in one go. I don't know how to praise my wife, I can only say, come on, madam! ! ! It's really super pretty! It's the type that can be used over and over again. This style is really rare.

Okay, okay, look! The Chinese writing is also very good. To be honest, I have seen the kind of Chinese writing that is very ordinary and pretentious, and passers-by have told me to nourish my stomach on the spot. If you are not good at it, why do you have to challenge this genre? Is it endless fun to fight against the sky? If you don't really want to be a great writer who is enlightening with every word, at least don't be too exaggerated, right? The teacher's writing in Chinese is really comfortable (sobs), very smooth, not exaggerated to the point of lacking content and connotation. At the same time, it is short and catchy, giving people a rich emotional experience. I like it very much! In addition, I can smell a strong light novel flavor from the extras and main content. This comfortable feeling that fits the background setting of the novel is like eating local roasted birds in Japan, authentic pork knuckles in Germany, and authentic pizza in Italy. I am satisfied (leaving with hands behind my back)

He's very good-looking, and the rare thing is that he's not awkward. God knows that I am so awkward that I even managed to dig out four bedrooms and one living room😱. I also really like the Chinese version of the text😍😍If you like it, don't miss it😘

I admit, my vision was too low. I didn't expect the author to be so great at first, so I tried it with the attitude of giving it a try, but the result was unexpectedly shocking to my soul. Let's not talk about how good Da Da's writing is. Let's just talk about her use of very obvious truths and incomparable descriptions to bring the apparently cardboard-like characters to life. Secondly, the thrilling reasoning and plot climax. All of this fascinates readers. The fandoms I read before were all read with the attitude of not complaining, and I never expected that the fanfics would be of such high quality. …So I was really shocked.

I recently read "Strange Stories from a Chinese Studio" and read the book through other people's words. It has different themes but the same purpose: there are criticisms of the ugly human nature, beautiful artistic images, and heart-tugging, twists and turns and bizarre stories that will leave you overwhelmed. Using seemingly absurd stories to express one's dreams and pursuits, this tragic creation method constitutes its unique romanticism.

It is exquisite. Whether it is the author's writing level or the rationality of the plot, the characters are full and rich in layers, the literary world's criticism of writing, the tit-for-tat confrontation between brain-power factions, and the chaotic reasoning construction all show the author's extraordinary strength, excellent qualities that are rare in Tomato and even the novel world. The author is really well-rounded! I particularly like it, the spiritual food that I dream of, and the unforgettable text [love]

This novel is very abrupt among a bunch of easy-to-understand vernacular texts. However, this does not mean that he is difficult to understand. Compared to the sentence "hard to read". I think he is actually more suitable for the sentence: "thought-provoking". The writing method in the teacher's book is very strange when I see it for the first time! But there is something inexplicably suitable for the theme of Fumino's comic. Moreover, the character's personality, the use of various description methods, the game between them, the mentality and actions, etc.... Are all handled very, very, very well! ! ! Excites me! ! ! The teacher's novels in this novel are also very good (maybe because I have little experience.) Will the stories and sentences in the article make me think deeply? And I feel that my teacher's novels have an inexplicable... Attraction to me. It feels like I've been mentally attacked by seeing something indescribable - a bit addictive - like eating chocolate, I always want to eat another piece... I'm not excited anymore, hehehehehehehehehehehe😈

The books I read are very messy, and I have no problem with this kind of novel written in Chinese. The author's large Chinese text is very nice, and the writing is 10 points good.

The language is fluent and the vocabulary is gorgeous, but it looks very relaxed. I have seen the Chinese writing method before, but the author's Chinese writing is really like that kind of literary work. It's a pity that wild boars can't eat fine chaff. I still feel that the daily life of the protagonist is more to my appetite. I just can't read anything with depth. This level is just right for me. It's good-looking and I love reading it. Great support for the author! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Holy shit, it's really good. I love this book so much. I hope the author won't stop updating it.

The writing is good, but there are too many descriptions of the novel, and sometimes I read the wrong thing all of a sudden [Thoughts]

Hmm. A good book with magnificent language. I like the human nature and language displayed in it. This is the writing style that Xiao Ke has been pursuing. It is not difficult to imagine the dilemma of people like Mr. Oda in reality. I do not want this hidden gem to be silently labeled as ordinary by an audience that is obviously not suitable for it. Cheers, author (maybe you are also an inspiration contestant?) Your works are humorous and thought-provoking. I am always looking forward to your next chapter. Changfeng

God. Even so, it seems like I am expecting too much. But. . So cool. . Very good at controlling the details of the characters, and very good at Hei Ni (Hey The core of the protagonist is very firm. . She is a very cute little girla The description of the stream of consciousness is refreshing. . It feels like it can really be called a "masterpiece" (forgive me for not accurately describing this style of writing (hey) Are all the things in the article original? Gives me a celebrity-like edge. . But even if it's completely borrowed, it's terrifyingly powerful. . ( (I don't mean to belittle the author orz In fact, it is a thought-provoking philosophy book disguised as a literary scholar (

This book involves a lot of knowledge in fields that I have never touched before, such as UNIX, but it is generally in line with the author's ideas. It's really, really great. I finally came across this kind of knowledge. How should I put it? It's the same as what I read before. Man, other authors and I rarely have the same frequency with their characters Tazai and Ranpo Sama. This book is the only novel I have seen that can be roughly on the same page with the author, Ranpo Sama and Tazai throughout the whole process. This is what a script team should be like! ! ! Rather than "Super reasoning! Master Ranpo knows!" Or Dazai who couldn't think of the third way and only found out the truth after n chapters, this kind of ghost is even worse than me! I was so moved that I almost cried (Ｔ▽Ｔ) I haven't experienced this kind of enjoyable feeling for a long time. The last time I experienced it was when I took my friends to play two-player reasoning several years ago. My mind that had been idle for a long time finally started to work again! ! ! ! The logical chain is really clear. Every event is interconnected and seemingly unrelated, but in fact it is inextricably linked. The plot development of each story is logical. It is really exciting! Now my head is still a little dizzy. It has been rusty for too long and I feel a little uncomfortable when I suddenly spin. It seems that I am also a little lack of oxygen due to excitement. All in all, this is really a masterpiece.

It's a novel that I personally like very much, it's really good! ! ! I found this book by chance. Looking at the ratings, I didn't have much expectations for the content of this book, but after reading more than 30 chapters, it was really delicious. After reading more than 30 chapters, it gave me a lot of inspiration. I personally like to explore people's thoughts and behaviors. After reading this novel and combining it with my own environment, I found many different perspectives of thinking. For example, what should we rely on to judge the self we insist on? Or is what we spiritually yearn for another kind of desire? The author's writing style is very delicate, so the author must work hard ଘ(੭*ˊvˋ)੭* ੈ♡‧₊˚

It feels great, and the Chinese language is also good. I like Odasaku in it, which is rare among many fan fictions, and I understand why so many people like him. The writing style is not like that of a first-time writer, and the flowing flow makes people feel that there is no harm in reading it a few times. Wenye really feels that he is very suitable for writing Chinese. , Good writing will make people feel super amazing.

It is a very unique and high-quality literary fandom, which is very enjoyable to watch. What's rare is that the Chinese language level of the text is also very high, full of very pure Japanese flavor, extremely delicate and sensitive, and keen on describing pain. The level is so high that it's not like a book written by Tomato… However, the gorgeous and delicate writing style also makes the novel look cumbersome and cumbersome. The perspective descriptions of other characters in the later period dilute the heroine's appearance time, and their plots have no direct connection with the heroine, making it look boring. I am just a pure earth-dog lover who comes to watch the group's doting literary heroine. The description of so many power struggles from multiple angles seems really laborious, so I skipped to read the rest😥

A very detailed fanfic. Whether the characters in the book are original heroines or second-generation characters, their character creation and writing logic are relatively complete and smooth. Sometimes there is even a feeling that "if he/she really existed, he/she would definitely do this". But at the same time, this book will also screen some audiences, because the descriptions in some places are actually a bit lengthy, but if you can read it, these descriptions will provide a very realistic picture. (It feels like many places even feel like a movie) All in all, this is a pretty good fanfic. Although the author has updated it intermittently before, he is still updating it now. You can give it a try. ദ്ദി˶•̀֊•́)✧

It's beautiful. I love Chinese writing the most. The writing style doesn't look like a newcomer's.

Mature writing style, appropriate Chinese language, parallel main and branch lines, clues and plots interspersed, no lengthy descriptions, text with a unique Japanese sense of "humor", author, are you really not some big boss's trumpet in foreign persimmons?

It's tied, so awesome. The Chinese language is also very good. This is a great article from all angles. Seriously, would you consider giving your sister superpowers?

Listening to the lemon pie section with pure music is really a visual and auditory enjoyment. For the first time, I felt the impact of words from an online article, especially the scene where Haiyue confronts the prisoner. It was so brave, my treasure. Come on, author! As long as you don't give up, this book has a bright future! ! !

Super super pretty! Although I have only read the first 20 chapters now, the plot is full of ups and downs! The writing style of the text is also very good. The writing style, plot and themes are very close to real Japanese literary works. I feel like I could publish a novel with these texts alone! The ones with Oda Tsukuru made me cry. [Crying] The character of the protagonist is also quite full! At least there is nothing illogical so far! I hope that future articles will be better for the protagonist and Oda Tsukuru! At the very least, let the temporary guardian become a guardian. I hope that the two protagonists can meet and live together again later!

Sure enough, Li Wenye's novels still need to have a collision of ideas to be enjoyable. Some of the same type of novels are relatively shallow, but this one is very enjoyable to read. Among them, I especially liked the ravings of the heroine and Dazai, and I felt that Dazai's black mud was analyzed in a deeper way. Moreover, this is the first time I have seen a novel that describes Ranpo's reasoning process in such a specific way (in fact, it should be said that it is animated), which is quite novel.

I really like the author's writing in Chinese! It feels very meaningful! My favorite is Mai's book ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑Has the author thought about what to write in the next book? (っ˘зʕ•̫͡•ʔ

Ahhhhh This book is by far the best among literary fanfics. It's fine chaff, fine chaff. It's absolutely a good article.

From a rational point of view, this book is a well-deserved masterpiece. The characters are very accurate, and the Chinese text is also very exciting. It makes me feel that this book should not appear here. It can stand on a higher stage. To be honest, don't think I am exaggerating. You will know after reading it, especially every sentence in the text is a golden sentence, especially he vividly expresses the evil, good, and desire of human nature. But from a perceptual point of view, this book is good to read, but I really feel uncomfortable in my heart. Maybe I am more perceptual, and it is easy to fall into the plot. The use, falsehood, and everything were nakedly unfolded in front of me, which made me feel really uncomfortable. But at the same time, it is really a movie. It's a very interesting novel. The characters are really in line with their own personalities. They are people who do these things because of profit. Even saving people from the "flower shop" in the beginning is because it is profitable, but I have to say that it is very accurate because they are that kind of people. After that, I can clearly say some unpleasant things. If you are here for an unusual group pet, you can leave. Where did this group favorite come from? I just saw a poor little girl who was involved in a bigger conspiracy due to her own affairs. It was just a little bit in the middle. It didn't even last more than one page. But this book is really good. Reason tells me that it deserves five stars. My sensibility tells me that it deserves four stars. But please read it because this book is really good

The main character is quite cute and his character is not OOC. Odasaku is really a very good male mother [sending heart] The heroine is quite weak, she doesn't even know about supernatural powers, she doesn't count as a group pet, and she's been tricked a lot.

Very powerful. . . The logic is clear and the literary color is strong (? It's a fanfic. I really like it. The author is so awesome. Although I can't understand it, I was shocked.