"Why seek immortality?"
"For great freedom, great freedom, and also for eternal life!"
"What if the world is limited and even an immortal cannot live forever?"
"Then break this world to pieces!"
"Good!"
Reader comments
The writing style is good, the writing is beautiful, and the structure is compact. It is much better than the average mindless fairy tales. But the character's characterization is not particularly fleshed out. You can change it a little bit.
The writing style is good, the writing is beautiful, and the structure is compact. It is much better than the average mindless fairy tales. But the character's characterization is not particularly fleshed out. You can change it a little bit.