Immortal Orion: I Have an Arrow That Can Kill Immortals

Why does the protagonist want to be the sixth child? ? The protagonist said that even if he failed, he was afraid of dying.

It looks good, but there are no good people in the village! There is no one even close to him! In my hometown, at least half of the people are close to my house. They give me food and drink, and introduce people to me. It's pretty good.

Isn't the protagonist's talent in the mountains and forests? Why did you go to the city?

The subject matter is good, but it feels off topic. Patrolling the mountains to obtain fortune

I really haven't seen many popular books of this type. People who play games also form teams, and this place is dedicated to single-player map running.

As long as you keep at it, it will be a masterpiece. Slow-burning works are like this on Tomato. Any slow-burning works will inevitably have negative reviews in the early stage.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's pretty good, except that some of the plot is a bit cliche.

Keep it up, it looks great Don't care about other people's comments, keep writing and don't send it.

It's okay, but there's a little problem with the plot progression.

We should have reached the bottleneck now. It's okay. Just think about it carefully and don't let the power system collapse.

Yes, the plot progress is very smooth.

Not bad, not bad, okay

Not bad, worth watching

Okay, ok, ok

Not bad, a very enjoyable book.

Let me dream back to the bright moon of Qin Dynasty

I don't read much, so I don't know what to say. Anyway, I like it very much.

I like it, the plot is clear and not too draggy

It's great and rich in content. The more you watch it, the more exciting it becomes. It's bound to become popular.

Yes, I never tire of reading this kind of novel, come on. I will also write something like this in the next one