Broken! I Have Become an Immortal!

Awesome behind-the-scenes video, I just go up and lick the girl whenever I don't see her, it's basically a 9.5

The flood of bad reviews in the long book review section almost made me quit, but it didn't seem to offend me. I couldn't help but open the book and read it. I couldn't help but read the latest chapter in one breath. Emmm, wasn't this well written? I almost missed a good book. There is no female mainstream behind the scenes. The characters who have the closest relationship with the protagonist are pets and relatives. There are no other unnecessary interpersonal relationships. The rest are just chess pieces. It really depicts the character of the mastermind behind the scenes, a truly worldly master who is far away from the mortal world. The plot of the relationship with the country's top officials? This problem is also handled well. The protagonist has no actual contact with them at all, and relies entirely on the chess pieces to perform on their own. There is no disgusting and disgusting plot of ending up as a clown snatching food. Always remember that the end is only for extraordinary performances to obtain gold finger rewards. It is worthy of praise for not forgetting your true heart. It's over. I don't know what to write next, so I ended it suddenly, which is barely a smooth landing. There is no eunuch, there is no bad ending, and there is no frivolity at the end that makes people sick. It just writes about the future development, the protagonist looks at the future, and then it ends suddenly. In the later period, there really was nothing to write about. The protagonist has been in seclusion. Occasionally, when he comes out of seclusion, he chooses a world, chooses a child of luck, gives him a golden finger, and then allows him to develop for the protagonist's enjoyment. After the plot of this world is over, the protagonist goes into seclusion again, and then repeats the above actions. If nothing new can be written about these worlds, it's really better to end them as soon as possible. It was a very satisfying read. There were no plots that were inappropriate or disgusting. At most, there were some logical problems, but they were not major problems. For me, they did not seriously affect my reading experience. I have a pretty upright outlook on things. I saw a lot of people talking about Our Lady in the comment section, but if the protagonist doesn't hold up the chess piece with a golden finger and some benefits, why is he stirring up trouble and harvesting leeks behind the scenes? The protagonist has always been a selfish person. If you give others a golden finger, you only give it to achieve your own goals. Repay kindness with kindness and repay hatred with evil. Bad people will be rewarded with evil and good people will help them. With such a righteous outlook on life, I don't know who the protagonist is.

This is a really good book. Practicing falsehoods comes true and sparks spiritual revival. I like this kind of book the most. Unfortunately, there are not many well-written books.

Not bad, kind of like guiding the revival of mythology. The protagonist has no female protagonist, no ambiguity, and no disgusting female supporting character. This is a truly novel without a female protagonist, which makes it more comfortable to read. It's just that the protagonist's character is a bit unsatisfactory. He is the only one in the world who cultivates immortality. He lacks immortality, and Bigger also lacks it. The key is that he can obviously write a bigger and more grand plot, which can gain more plot points. He likes to make small fights, so he doesn't feel happy. The protagonist is also quite nosy, not a saint, so she can be said to be kind.

It's okay, I just want to know that you won't cut it like I did last time.

It's a great book about group sex that makes fakes come true. It's like rain upon me when you encounter this book, and you can't put it down. Unfortunately, it's a little short and not enough to read. Dear author, you don't want to be locked up in a dark room and whipped with a small leather whip, right?

Come on, author, update. I think it looks really good. If you keep at it, you might become a great master.

It's really worth reading, recommended by a 30-year-old bookworm! The score is really too low, it's definitely above 8 points. As long as the later authors don't mess around, the system construction and the overall view don't collapse.

I think that there is no training world at all in that other world, it is just a martial arts world. The training secrets obtained by the protagonist are all modified by Chi Jiutian based on the original martial arts and some secret techniques through imagination, so others cannot practice it, and the protagonist cannot practice it at the beginning, but the protagonist's golden finger training fake becomes real [laughter]

Good book, good book [laughs] The plot design is particularly good [like] [like] The author's writing is getting better and better [like] [like], I hope it won't end badly

I have read Chapter 53, and I feel pretty good so far. The protagonist is a qualified mastermind, which is more in line with my taste. Come on, don't be a eunuch.

I can still give this a five-star rating because there is nothing toxic about it. In fact, I personally thought that the base price for this theme was at least 3.9 Million, but in the end, he finished it at 390,000. The author is really at a loss for blood. It would be good to stick to this book and write slowly and carefully. There is no need to pursue the interests and comments at the time. And it can be divided into unit dramas. Each planet can have several protagonists. Originally, the battle between the two groups of Fortune Palace and the players could be a climax. However, the author stopped playing, which is very embarrassing.

How to say it? I have reservations about some comments. For example, the protagonist is a little irrational and often does things that are not in line with his interests. But, you have to look at the title of the book for this. The protagonist is cultivating to be an immortal, not a god. Isn't the purpose of cultivating an immortal to be free and easy? It's not something that insults the brain. I think what the protagonist does seems understandable. After all, there are times when the protagonist does things that I really want to do.

I can only say that it is quite good. The author knew how to stop when he was at his peak and ended it when he was at his peak. Moreover, the group portraits are pretty much the same. There are quite a few highlights. My favorite is the part in the game where the protagonist becomes a Chunyang Taoist after becoming invincible. It is really worth watching.

It's very good. It's a rare article about cultivating immortals. It's not the usual fighting and killing. You get the plot through attention, and then practice the fake to make it real. It's a very good idea. The speed of completion in the later stage is also normal, there are no poisonous points, it can be regarded as an immortal and an ancestor, and it also leads the whole people to cultivate immortality.

Hey, the writing is okay. It would be better if you change the small world. There is a big gap between ancient and modern times. It's a bit of a minefield, which is understandable. However, it feels better to change the small world into a portable small world. You can run in the two worlds, but they can't merge.

The writing is very good and popular. Good luck to the author.

It's really good, a standard behind-the-scenes novel

That's okay, I don't think there's anything particularly bad about it.

Yes, it is a very novel book for me! Just a little bit less [laughing][laughing]

Okay, so far it looks pretty good, very good, five-star praise

Very interesting novel worth reading

Not to mention other things, the most amazing thing about this book is that for me, it is that cultivating immortals is really so powerful that you can use all kinds of magical powers in the Qi-eating stage. This is what cultivating immortals is, rather than practicing Qi in other people's books, which is not much different from ordinary people.

It's so well written. We are the immortals of the people and resolutely oppose individual heroism [Like]

The subject matter is novel and the author's writing style is also good. It is a novel worth reading on Tomato

It's cool, well written, captivating, and a masterpiece behind the scenes.

I really like this kind of behind-the-scenes story. The protagonist is above everything, looking down on everything in the world, as if the world only exists to provide the protagonist with fun.

I actually finished reading it, so it deserves praise. The creativity is pretty good, but the writing may be a little lacking.

Even though there are a few minor flaws, it still makes my eyes shine. I haven't found a novel that makes me feel addicted like this for a long time [Send my heart][Send my heart]

This type is rare in tomatoes and highly recommended