Pirate: the Strongest Experimental Subject at the Beginning

Overall not bad. The protagonist's personality is also relatively distinct. That is, in terms of details, the understanding of Bawang color and domineering energy should not be so rigid and can only be based on "bloodline qualifications." May I ask how the first generation "King" with the domineering color of the overlord came to have the overlord color? Domineering energy is the potential within the human body. If the heart is strong enough and the courage is large enough, it can also produce the domineering color.

The setting of the protagonist is very good, but the hook is a bit big. I'm afraid it will be difficult to write a long article. However, the author's writing is getting better and better, which is very exciting!

Now that I have seen the main plot clearly, I still have some brains. Although he sometimes goes crazy, his IQ is usually on the line. I don't know why the equal share is not higher?

Not bad, pretty interesting fanfic

The author has finally opened a new book and I just finished reading it. It's really attractive! Very good! Finished spreading flowers!

It's okay. It's a cool article worth reading, but it's not mindless. The setting of the experimental subjects makes it reasonable to have special talents. It's also reasonable to rely on the advantages of the plot to develop power. There's nothing poisonous about the protagonist's character.

Overall, it's good. The author seems to be in a state of excitement after writing [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] The following dozens of chapters feel weird. It's one of the better pirate novels I've read [smirk] [smirk]

I have read the author's other pirate novels and they have not disappointed, and this book is no exception. This book is definitely at the top level among pirate novels. Whether it's imagination, plot or fighting scenes, it's not at the same level as other novels. Those who are interested can read it carefully. I recommend it.

Emmaye, this protagonist makes me excited and excited to watch.

One of the few good books in One Piece. The author's strength is still as good as ever. The protagonist will do whatever he doesn't want. The pace is also fast. It's very enjoyable to read. The combat power is not jumpy. The plot direction is also reasonable. It doesn't lick the protagonist's group or fly on the road. It's worth reading.

I finished reading it in one go. It's great. This talent must have surpassed Teacher Kai's. Now he still lacks a good weapon.

It's perfect and completely suits my taste. From this novel, it's easy to see that the author's understanding of One Piece is far deeper than others. Many details of One Piece have been perfectly captured by the author. As a Pirates fan, I feel particularly comfortable reading it. Many characters in it who have little presence in the original work or who are of average strength are often not noticed, but the author has dug them out one by one. Their personal characteristics and inner connotations have been well understood by the author, and various devil fruits are also real. The strength they deserve has been discovered. It can be concluded that this is written by a super senior pirate fan. The various plots that follow can be accepted and even refreshing by readers. The previous plots are also basically explosive throughout, making people feel passionate about it. I even admire you a little, author. I am very grateful to see such a One Piece fan novel. Such a good novel should not be buried. Come on [Top post][Top post][Top post] @

The best pirate fanfic I have seen so far. The writing style is not pretentious, and the plot recommendation is smooth and fast. It basically conforms to the original setting. I can't accept the fact that the protagonist's overlord color is restrained and elemental. I can just set more abilities for other protagonists. I can barely accept it.

Cool! Nice! The most important thing is that the author has always adhered to the non-systematic style of pirate writing, and this aspect is worthy of praise! There are no poison points, no bugs, and the development ideas are clear. The protagonist has the ability of the Green Dragon Fruit and various rare bloodlines. He has now mastered the three-color domineering + domineering entanglement, and the emperor-level combat power is at full strength! They also cloned the six-path seraphs based on the blood of the protagonist. Each seraph has very strong superpowers and is full of attractions [heartfelt] I have read more than 100 Pirates fanfics, and I am very picky. No more than 5 books have been rated five stars. The author's other book Barrier and this one are both worthy of five stars. Recommended [Please update] The author will update quickly!

Ok, I've read another book. This is the third one I've read. I don't have much to say about this one. Although it has the highest rating among your books, it doesn't feel as good as the debut novel with the lowest rating. What I mean is that in terms of relationships, there have been breakthroughs in other aspects and some original plot characters and new concepts. However, it really disappointed me in terms of relationships, so I deducted one star.

Advantages: The protagonist's personality is quite distinct, and the battle plots are relatively well-written, many of which are big scenes and multi-party battles. Personal disadvantages: It seems that the female characters are a bit underwritten, and they basically just go around "drawing blood" and fighting [laughing and crying], and the overall feeling is okay.

Several of the author's pirate works are to my liking, they are beautiful.

The writing is quite good. It breaks away from the original plot and develops various war plots on its own. However, the original power and other transcendent abilities, and the various green bloods seem awkward. It can be written with only Haki and Devil Fruit, which is very interesting! On the contrary, it reduces the characteristics of pirates.

I finished reading it all in a short time. It's really exciting. Five stars is not your limit, it's just the limit of tomatoes. All the plots are perfect. You are also a veteran. I have basically read all the books you wrote, especially The Six Paths of the Wild Dragon. I hope it will shine in the future. It kidnaps the world's chief scientist and has money and R&D talents. It is very exciting.

It is a rare masterpiece among pirate fans. This author's novel is still very good. The protagonist is strong, never subservient, capable of submission and submission, and very strategic, leaving the navy and the world government to play.

241, Many, After reading two hundred and forty chapters, I felt quite happy. It's something he does just because he doesn't accept it, but he's not reckless either. There are many girls, but not all of them are accepted, and the admission of girls is very slow. Currently, I only have baby-5, and the empress. Because the male protagonist is either fighting or on the way to fight. The rest of the time, the male protagonist is used to improve his strength and prepare for a fight. [Face covering]. This novel is basically a slap in the face, so if you like this genre, you can read it. [Laughing out loud]

I watched a small part and thought it was quite interesting. Slightly better than other One Pieces. Cool writing type. In the early stage, he was all about crushing, not fighting opponents who were stronger than him. At the same time, the heroine was not seen. There are female supporting characters, but there are relatively few descriptions. Unlike other pirate stories, you have to include some love and romance. This is just for plot. (First of all, One Piece in the anime is definitely not popular because of falling in love.)

It started to drag a bit from the middle on, but it didn't affect the viewing very much. Around the end, it felt like the plot was being pushed forward a bit, which was very rushed and didn't feel like it was handled very well, but overall it's still a good One Piece novel.

I've finished reading it. It's a great pirate fanfic. The biggest mastermind behind the scenes is Vegapunk [laughing]. The author has a lot of imagination and gives a complete ending reasonably. However, the fighting section is too long and makes me very tired to read. I skipped through the last dozens of chapters.

The author's writing style improves bit by bit. Among Tomato One Piece, they are already considered to be the top ones. But the protagonist improves his strength too quickly. But it's still okay to not hide the flaws.

The plot is compact and the content is reasonable. Overall, it is a very good book. It is very interesting to read. However, judging from the content, the author Tie Huangchui hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha)it you. Several of the Four Emperors can easily defeat three or four generals, so we are not dissatisfied. Overall, it is good. 5-Star arrangement

It's a very good pirate story, with a tight rhythm, clear logic, and not too many poisonous points. Because it is a semi-invincible story, the combat power has not collapsed, but the protagonist is still invincible when he should be invincible, and he is still very powerful when he hangs up. It is definitely fun.

It's quite interesting, I hope it won't be discontinued or unfinished (can we bring back Blackbeard's special physique in the future, and directly eat three Devil Fruits or directly mutate cells, one fruit per cell? [Sneaky laugh][Sneaky laugh][Sneaky laugh])

It's good, it's very strong, and the protagonist's strength is also very abnormal. At least the combat power is very good, just right.

I think this is the only one that really uses brains to time travel through pirates. This is the real ability to predict future development.