Lelouch: "I heard that you are the intellectual ceiling of the practical school. Let me see your strength, Ayanokouji."
Horikita: "Are you confident about facing Lelouch?"
Ayanokouji: "If his intelligence, magic, and memory are all sealed."
Horikita: "Will you lose?"
Ayanokouji: "No, I will win."
Reader comments
In chapters with different perspectives, adding whose perspective can better enhance the reading experience. Everything else is fine. After all, those who don't want to watch the realistic version of the movie are mostly those who have read the original work or animation and have an understanding of the plot.
The content of this article is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable. The language of the full text is fluent, the writing is relaxed and natural, and it can be regarded as a relatively successful fan work. The first person of the article is really a clear pen, the summary is short and powerful, and the switching between the third person and the first person is pleasant. The tone of the story is endlessly evocative. The sentences are fluent and the writing ideas are clear. The article narrates the events in the order of their development. At the same time, the language is relatively fluent and the levels are clear. It seems enjoyable from beginning to end. Okay, the author will update it soon [laughing evilly]
The plot is well written, but the perspective change is a bit hard. You can add your name in front of it when changing the perspective, keep up the good work!
It's well written and one of the better ones I've read. That's common sense. It's really uncomfortable if it's broken. I hope it doesn't break.
What is this new chapter about? I sent Ichinose away... Why don't you write it in the first place?
The update is too slow. When can I collect 20 million and get all the abilities?
The author updates every other day, do you still want to write [rolls eyes]
Nice! [Sending Hearts] Is the setting really Lu Dian himself? If so, what should C. C do if she has a harem? And as a top girl control, how will His Highness live in the future without a younger sister! [Crying] I hope Lu Dian can be reunited with his family, maybe make a side story! I'm begging you [I'm about to cry]
After reading these chapters, I looked solemn, bowed my head deeply, silently turned off my phone, stood up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of 1982 collector's edition Sprite, held it tightly in my hand, and slowly walked to the window. The scenery outside the window was a bit dim, just like my current mood, heavy, very heavy, gradually Gradually, it started to rain lightly in the gray sky outside. Why, my vision was blurred. I don't know whether it was me crying or the rain was getting heavier. It might be both. My mood became even more melancholy. I could no longer suppress the emotions in my heart. I opened the window and shouted to the outside: Who am I looking down on in just a few chapters?
It's not bad, it's pretty good-looking, but there's too little of it. The author can just follow his own ideas! !
It's pretty good. A few people can watch it from the first-person perspective, but there's a reason why so few people watch it. Lulu and Shijiao are in many fanfics, emmm. I can only say that it's normal that there are not many people.
For the perspective of person, you can refer to Toka, there is foreshadowing and the format is similar, it will not be so abrupt [eat melon], it is mainly about the back and forth substitutions, and the monologue, I don't even know who the character I am bringing in now. Of course, there are many personal subjective factors, which do not represent the specific reality. In addition, I mainly listened to the book and missed many details, so the comments are different from my own. Overall, it's very healthy and has the style of an old thief in Kinugasa. [Laughing evilly] Update soon! ! !
This is a very good series, and it ranks among the top two among all the practical fics I have read. The problem may be the first-person perspective, which many people are not used to seeing. Author, you have to persevere. There are really not many good fan fiction writers out there. Your book currently ranks very high in my heart. [Please update]
The author's writing is very good, but can he write more [smile][smile][smile]
I hope you don't have a harem
There is an old saying in China, Wei Junjie is the master of Western things. I think the various torture instruments now can definitely be updated by the author. Therefore, if the author does not want to experience the punishment of the torture instruments, he should update more, otherwise he will die [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]
There are multiple perspectives narrated, very interesting
It's good-looking. Considering that the male protagonist is a fan of Daai Xianzun, it's enough to catch him [laughing evilly]
The protagonist is a sunny and cheerful boy who does whatever it takes to achieve his goals and is very charming.
Why are so few people so beautiful? [Angry][angry]
Not bragging, but it really feels like it surpasses 90% of practical teaching books.
I think this writing perspective is quite novel and good (˵¯͒¯͒˵)
Very pretentious, I like it very much
Come on, the author is very good-looking
Come on, the author is so good! ! ! !
Very logical, I like it very much
Good looking, good luck, author! !
Big cheers for the author!
Super pretty, but a bit short [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
Come on! I hope you don't want a eunuch!
It feels good to watch
They are all awakened and invincible, so what else can there be to the story? Will there really be a reversal?
I was attracted by the title of the book and the writing is good😄
In chapters with different perspectives, adding whose perspective can better enhance the reading experience. Everything else is fine. After all, those who don't want to watch the realistic version of the movie are mostly those who have read the original work or animation and have an understanding of the plot.
The content of this article is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable. The language of the full text is fluent, the writing is relaxed and natural, and it can be regarded as a relatively successful fan work. The first person of the article is really a clear pen, the summary is short and powerful, and the switching between the third person and the first person is pleasant. The tone of the story is endlessly evocative. The sentences are fluent and the writing ideas are clear. The article narrates the events in the order of their development. At the same time, the language is relatively fluent and the levels are clear. It seems enjoyable from beginning to end. Okay, the author will update it soon [laughing evilly]
The plot is well written, but the perspective change is a bit hard. You can add your name in front of it when changing the perspective, keep up the good work!
It's well written and one of the better ones I've read. That's common sense. It's really uncomfortable if it's broken. I hope it doesn't break. What is this new chapter about? I sent Ichinose away... Why don't you write it in the first place?
The update is too slow. When can I collect 20 million and get all the abilities?
The author updates every other day, do you still want to write [rolls eyes]
Nice! [Sending Hearts] Is the setting really Lu Dian himself? If so, what should C. C do if she has a harem? And as a top girl control, how will His Highness live in the future without a younger sister! [Crying] I hope Lu Dian can be reunited with his family, maybe make a side story! I'm begging you [I'm about to cry]
After reading these chapters, I looked solemn, bowed my head deeply, silently turned off my phone, stood up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of 1982 collector's edition Sprite, held it tightly in my hand, and slowly walked to the window. The scenery outside the window was a bit dim, just like my current mood, heavy, very heavy, gradually Gradually, it started to rain lightly in the gray sky outside. Why, my vision was blurred. I don't know whether it was me crying or the rain was getting heavier. It might be both. My mood became even more melancholy. I could no longer suppress the emotions in my heart. I opened the window and shouted to the outside: Who am I looking down on in just a few chapters?
It's not bad, it's pretty good-looking, but there's too little of it. The author can just follow his own ideas! !
It's pretty good. A few people can watch it from the first-person perspective, but there's a reason why so few people watch it. Lulu and Shijiao are in many fanfics, emmm. I can only say that it's normal that there are not many people.
For the perspective of person, you can refer to Toka, there is foreshadowing and the format is similar, it will not be so abrupt [eat melon], it is mainly about the back and forth substitutions, and the monologue, I don't even know who the character I am bringing in now. Of course, there are many personal subjective factors, which do not represent the specific reality. In addition, I mainly listened to the book and missed many details, so the comments are different from my own. Overall, it's very healthy and has the style of an old thief in Kinugasa. [Laughing evilly] Update soon! ! !
This is a very good series, and it ranks among the top two among all the practical fics I have read. The problem may be the first-person perspective, which many people are not used to seeing. Author, you have to persevere. There are really not many good fan fiction writers out there. Your book currently ranks very high in my heart. [Please update]
The author's writing is very good, but can he write more [smile][smile][smile]
I hope you don't have a harem
There is an old saying in China, Wei Junjie is the master of Western things. I think the various torture instruments now can definitely be updated by the author. Therefore, if the author does not want to experience the punishment of the torture instruments, he should update more, otherwise he will die [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]
There are multiple perspectives narrated, very interesting
It's good-looking. Considering that the male protagonist is a fan of Daai Xianzun, it's enough to catch him [laughing evilly] The protagonist is a sunny and cheerful boy who does whatever it takes to achieve his goals and is very charming.
Why are so few people so beautiful? [Angry][angry]
Not bragging, but it really feels like it surpasses 90% of practical teaching books.
I think this writing perspective is quite novel and good (˵¯͒¯͒˵)
Very pretentious, I like it very much
Come on, the author is very good-looking Come on, the author is so good! ! ! !
Very logical, I like it very much
Good looking, good luck, author! !
Big cheers for the author!
Super pretty, but a bit short [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
Come on! I hope you don't want a eunuch!
It feels good to watch
They are all awakened and invincible, so what else can there be to the story? Will there really be a reversal?
I was attracted by the title of the book and the writing is good😄