When People Reach Middle Age, They Start to Rise from Working Part-Time in Life.

I've only read the first two chapters, and I can already give it 5 stars. At the beginning, a wave of readers were screened out with a purely romantic setting, but in the end, a few women were inserted in to engage in ambiguity. Are you afraid that you won't die quickly enough? But there is still a way to save it. Change the first few chapters so that the wife is dead, or changed to single. If one of your parents is terminally ill, it won't affect your harem. Otherwise, if you continue writing like this now, the readers will all run out.

It's well written, and it's rare to see a different feeling. It's not a mindless, slap-in-the-face, cool article, but the part about borrowing money is a bit stupid, which is very toxic in the eyes of readers. It can be changed appropriately. Don't write about kidnapping and borrowing money. Write about being deceived and borrowing money, so that it is easier to accept.

From the beginning, I was moved. I admired the male protagonist for never leaving me. I also felt that the male protagonist was very tired, but he could not fall down or rest. He was the guardian of the whole family. I admired the male protagonist. From the back, the male protagonist had a little bit of a golden finger. He was much better than ordinary people in reality. In reality, many ordinary people worked hard, but there was no result. In the middle, I felt that he was somewhat liked by women. I feel like the woman likes him a little bit and appreciates him, but she wants me to start a harem. Otherwise, I really like his wife at the beginning, but then I will just watch the harem and not want to watch it. If his wife is a vicious person, I don't think it would matter if he started a harem and left. It's already good that he can persist in treating this disease. If not, I hope never to have a harem. The other things written are okay. Take a look and see for yourself [cover face][cover face]

It's good. When you reach middle age, you always have to have some hope.

Deafening silence. . .

It looks great, good luck to the author!

What happened to the eunuch?

I'm just worried about whether his wife will get better and where their relationship will go...

Doesn't the hero's wife have a name? [Thinking]

After reading books for more than 20 years, I know that it would be too painful to read a book with such a small number of words. It would be too painful to read and follow up. Could the author please add more updates?

It almost made me depressed at first! ! ! Come on and update! ! !

I think it's very interesting and I hope the author can update it more. [Laughing]

So far, the entire novel has smooth language and relaxed writing, which is good.

Very good, very exciting!

Chapter 21 made me cry

Well! It disrupted my biological clock again... I read this book in the middle of the night and couldn't sleep. I read it in one sitting and it was already dawn. Five stars...

Hurry up and get one, I like Jia Ting