Rebirth***********

It always feels familiar. This novel is very similar to another novel.

The new book is released for the first time. I hope you will comment more and actively correct any shortcomings. In addition, when setting up a supporting building, you can enter the name and character, and I will arrange the plot.

I think it was well written, but it was a bit too depressing and made me feel a little uncomfortable. Furthermore, I didn't feel very good about the scene where the elder sister lost her virginity. Also, the heroine had too few scenes. Other than that, I liked everything else.

Can the male protagonist save the eldest sister and the second sister?

Very interesting, hope to continue writing

Well written, keep up the good work uncle [laughing]

I came across this book in a few years. It is a new system and it is very good.

Don't be fooled by the cover of this book, this book is beautiful

The writing style is relaxed and the plot is bright

You can't disgust me alone

Really beautiful

That's right, don't torture the male protagonist's sister to death. You should increase the male protagonist's opponents, the male protagonist's biological father's opponents, and some other opponents appropriately.

Very good, can recommend

The plot is good, could use a little emotional drama

Not bad, good looking, but the rating is a bit low

It's really beautiful. Very beautiful