Listen to Advice: I, Sasuke, Why Should I Defect to Konoha?

Very good, very good Naruto fanfic! I don't know why other fans reject Sakura. In the original novel, Sakura is really nice to Sasuke, and she's not green tea either. It's really a pity for Sasuke. In the original work, except for Sharingan and Raiduna's attacks.

The protagonist of most Naruto fanfics is either Naruto, or a character from the same period as Kakashi or Namikaze Minato. It's rare to see Sasuke written in such a good way. This one is pretty good so far. As long as Sasuke's character doesn't collapse and doesn't act erratically, then I think it's fine [Like] I liked Naruto when I was a student, but I liked Sasuke when I grew up.

Sasuke is well written and won't make people feel uncomfortable. I'm still looking forward to Sasuke starting a harem, as long as he doesn't take it in carelessly.

It's very comfortable to watch, and the combat power doesn't collapse too quickly like some Naruto fans. The descriptions of Naruto and other characters are also very consistent with the original work. Although the pace is slower, it is more conducive to shaping the characters. The protagonist Sasuke is neither a virgin nor an indiscriminate killer. He is not ambiguous when he should be happy, and he is not awkward when he shouldn't be happy. However, this series I hope the rewards distributed by the system can be balanced, so that the protagonist's combat power is not too high, which will lead to direct crushing of powerful enemies such as Obito and Madara in the later stages. I hope that teamwork and the protagonist's resourcefulness can be reflected in the battle, instead of mindlessly crushing the opponent with powerful ninjutsu. I hope the author will continue to maintain this style.

After changing his perspective and mentality, Sasuke's life immediately changed from a sad story to a fun story.

It's the rhythm I prefer, no darkness, no brainless harem. The subject matter is novel.

It's great, it would be best as long as there are no plots with multiple female protagonists

Although the setting of the system is not good, it is really good to be able to hold up the content, and the system is not too outrageous and does not give out super powers at the beginning. It is really good. As for why the score is not high, it may be because there are relatively few chapters. It will gradually increase in the future.

The rhythm is very good, there is no harem, and there is no brainlessness

I can only say that it's not good enough. The emotional line develops a bit slowly. Not only is the strength suddenly invincible, but it is also growing slowly. It would be great if Hinata can be taken over. According to this sign, Hinata should still be Naruto's [thoughts]

Just because you respect the original work, I must give you a five-star review. In short, it feels like seeing the egg-fried rice creation of the Naruto world again. Make reasonable use of plug-ins and prophets.

I think this book is good. The good thing is that it fits Sasuke's character very well. Some of the author's original plots are also very interesting. They are really good and have a ninja flavor. They are not mindless wood escape or kaleidoscope crushing. Moreover, some details are also very consistent with the original work, and the settings are very rigorous. After talking about the advantages, let me talk about some points that I think are not so good. To be honest, I think the original plot is a bit dragging down the author. This is more obvious when Sasuke awakens the double Magatama Sharingan in the Land of Waves. However, I can also understand that as a time traveler, it is not easy to write because of the eyes opened by his companions. Moreover, the emotional line is a bit confusing, and Sasuke seems to be jumping around repeatedly. It would be better to write it more clearly. Oh, yes, let's talk about one more thing. The plot where Dansa and Boruto traveled through time was a bit too... Down-to-earth. Although it was obvious that they wanted to bring Naru Hina together, it was a bit stiff. I still prefer the natural relationship and the emotions that come naturally. This is too stiff. Just write the emotional line slowly, there is no need to finalize it directly in a few chapters. Another little regret is that there is no content from the theatrical version, because the original theatrical version has Naruto as the protagonist. In fact, I really want to see the theatrical version with Sasuke as the protagonist, such as Yukihime Ninjutsu, which I think is also very interesting. However, it is a pity that the author did not write it. I feel that the author's writing power is enough. If possible, it can be written as a spin-off. I can look forward to it a little bit.

It's good to watch, and although the plot is cool, it's very smooth. There is no special awkwardness. In terms of plot creation, although it is very close to the original work, it has also been adapted to a certain extent. It can be regarded as above average among Naruto novels.

It's a good Naruto fanfic. The setting is relatively reasonable and popular, and it doesn't have the kind of scornful, hysterical slander of certain characters. Although there are many flaws and some holes that have not been filled in, and the later part is relatively rushed, it is still a Naruto fan that can be watched, and it is better than most [face covering]

I have read Chapter 449 so far (the author has stopped updating). This book is quite satisfactory and above average. The writing style is average. The two pillars in this book are more pretentious than in the original book. It is also a bit awkward. It is a little bit harem style (the early stage is okay, but in the later stage, Mizukage and Uchiha Hikaru are included). If you like to see the two pillars pretentious, you can try this book (you can read it as a cool novel). The pace is not very fast and it is a bit routine. As for the plot, Suzuo and Boruto traveled through parallel time and space and came to Konoha (the second pillar also gained Urashiki's power). The second pillar was the examiner for the new chuunin examination. The second pillar practiced Ryūchi Cave Senjutsu (the author also drew a picture. It's really cool). The Akatsuki organization invaded Konoha (the seventh generation of Naruto and Suzuo returned to parallel time and space). The second pillar became the captain of the ninja coalition (the author stopped updating it later when he was reincarnated in the dirty land. I was really looking forward to this plot, but I didn't expect it to be discontinued [crying][crying][crying]) Of course, the author also added some original content based on the original work (the early stage is not much different from the original work). For example, he noticed that the Sharingan is the eye of the mind, changed the appearance of the Sharingan, the Rinnegan of the two pillars was also changed, and the color of Susanoo was also changed to red (but I still think the original Sharingan, Rinnegan, and Susanoo look better) However, when Erzhu practiced the Dragon Earth Cave Immortal Technique, his dragon transformation state was pretty good at that time, mainly because he was so handsome [Adored][Admired][Admired][Admired][Admired] @Looking Up at the Stars Children I really like the two pillars acting cool and pretentious, but at the same time, I also hope that the later author will not write about the harem (it will make me feel broken). The most important thing is that the author does not stop updating ah ah ah ah [Asking for more explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] @ The Children Looking Up at the Stars

Although it is a cool article, it is not mindlessly cool. It's refreshing and silky smooth.

It was more comfortable to watch at the beginning, but there were too many girls licking Sasuke in the scene. Although there was no emphasis on developing emotional scenes, it was still poisonous. And Sasuke's character is a bit out of character, but it's not a big problem [Blowing Kiss] is watchable

This is a very good book about Sasuke not defecting to Konoha. The content is also good. However, the final battle was too chaotic. I had no idea what the protagonist wanted to do. He was often invisible and had no idea where the plan was going.

Not bad, the logic is clear, consistent with the original work, and the protagonist is also sober in the world.

Now a summary can be seen. There are really many Naruto fans. Thanks to the original work. Therefore, the combat power background view and world view are basically complete. This book is generally reasonable, and the combat power has not collapsed, but the hang-up is too great. In the first chuunin exam, the protagonist already has the strength of the shadow because of the system. When the original Sasuke defected, good guy, he directly sealed the Otsutsuki Ura Shiki (because of the system, he only has the power of Kage). Has strength and will not be taken away). At this time, I can actually pass the level, but the novel is only a little more than 1/3. In order for Naruto to keep up with the combat power, it is probably because I will not write this gap period (the original novel also jumped three years, and Naruto is learning from Jiraiya Returning three years ago and starting Shippuden), the author can only start to suppress the fighting power, transform a perfect immortal into a dragon, and directly skip two years to the beginning of the original work Shippuden. Then because the protagonist is too strong, and the author probably doesn't want to write it, the later progress is even faster and has not changed. The original work Probably Pain. In this book, Pain, Obito, Madara, Kaguya, and Otsutsuki from Boruto's time travel are all packaged together. In the end, the source of the system is not explained (this is okay, there are not many Naruto fan fiction books that explain where the cheats come from) So overall it can be seen

I finally understand why the rating is only over 8 points. After learning the senjutsu, Sasuke felt like he was dead. He kept suppressing it. The rest of the writing was okay. I suggest skipping the part about Hikaru.

Preferably a harem story, a single female protagonist is not suitable for Uchiha Sasuke. Sasuke in this movie must have a harem, otherwise it won't look good.

Although Sasuke in this book is much stronger than in the original work, his strength is limited. Moreover, judging from the current pace, this book is not a good read. Although the pace is a bit slow, it is good. Slow-burning books can be longer.

Unlike most Naruto novels, there is no deliberate effort to lower the IQ of other supporting characters, and the relationship between the characters and partners is very delicate and not inexplicable. There are also scenes between Broken Arm Sasuke and Boruto, I'm kind of looking forward to it, hahahahahaha

The data written by veteran authors is logical and clear. This book is full of interesting points, and there are no pointers. It also has a lot of author's understanding of Naruto. It is very good whether it is used to supplement the knowledge of Naruto or to pass the time. I highly recommend it directly

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Humph, I have never seen such an attractive Naruto fan fiction! It's more to my liking than Twin Kamui and Rinnegan Naruto. They used to be sacred books, but now I prefer the protagonist in this book - Sasuke.

There are less systems and more about the author's understanding of Naruto. The plot extension is very comfortable to watch. The combat power has always been very average, and there are corresponding and reasonable opponents at each stage, making the protagonist particularly stable, not to mention that this protagonist is still a second pillar. There are also many clips from the theatrical version. The most impressive one is that in the later period, when facing the village of Hidden Ame that was about to be besieged by the five major powers, Obito used intelligence to unlock the unknown Uchiha (Uchiha Hikari) who was sealed during the Warring States Period. Using the effect of her eight thousand spears of the eyes of the soul, she was able to bring back the one-sided combat situation. There are many similar theatrical versions, which are particularly rich in content. And because the plot is tight, it extends where it needs to be extended, and reduces where it needs to be reduced, without leaving any trace. When you come back to your senses and it's the next chapter, it really answers the saying that as long as the appearance time is short, there is basically nothing to complain about. If we really talk about the shortcomings, it may be that the chapters are relatively short, but this is also the biggest advantage of this book, at least it is not redundant at all. Overall, this book has a compact plot and rich content, without any sloppiness and few flaws. Maybe I haven't read enough books, but it seems that this book deserves a full review so far. (The five-star rating is because it only has five stars)

The early part is particularly good. People who like to watch the growth series can come and see the protagonist. Although the growth of the protagonist is very slow, it is all enjoyable. Although there is no joy in becoming stronger in one second, there is no boring feeling in becoming stronger in one second. The author's writing is very good. I feel that it should be extended to about 500 chapters.

The Naruto fanfic is very well written. It contains the important bonds and regrets in Naruto. The most important thing is to become stronger together with the partners. Although the protagonist is still the strongest, it is really great. When I saw the subject matter, I didn't want to read it and thought it was another harem stallion novel. But the reality is that I have read more than 270 chapters and still haven't eaten. There is no big age difference and the protagonist doesn't lick women. Finally, I wish the author to write better novels.