I Have a Miscarriage at the Beginning, I Am the Golden Wheel Dharma King in the World of Cultivating Immortals

The heroine who is above the standard level has no cp to cultivate immortality. It seems to be a long novel, so some minor flaws are normal, and the writing style is not awkward. The small bright spot is that the heroine does not have any bloody plot that will raise blood pressure, and there are no brain-related consequences in her actions. It can be regarded as a pretty good novel in the traditional upgrade stream. It is said that the heroine is an alchemist and is very good at fighting. She is different, but she has been caught and trapped many times. Can there be less frustration like this? Or don't write a character who is good at fighting. It is contradictory. As the most powerful alchemist in the continent, he couldn't even kill the gods with his resourceful magic weapon, and he escaped with a charm after being sealed. Where did your mustard space go? You had to talk to the villain for a few words. You couldn't beat him with this skill, but you still didn't run away. He was sucked out of luck by the fat guy named Jin several times, but he didn't get rid of the trouble. He was so weak in cultivation and joined in the fun of big boss fights twice. I was really disappointed with the recently updated chapters. It was obvious that I had lowered my intelligence and didn't understand why. It's a pity that although the previous article has flaws, it is overall good. Recently, there are signs of unfinished work. It seems that it is still difficult to control the long story.

It's still okay, I can watch it. The heroine has talent and a golden finger, but it's not a very exaggerated one. It's not a cool novel, it's a normal growth-oriented heroine. I like it very much. I hope the author will keep updating it and not stop updating it! !

It's good-looking. The characters in it are not black and white, but complex individuals. There are no absolute good people, but there are absolutely bad shadow monsters. For me, the character creation is successful. The plot is more traditional fairy tales, but it is very interesting. When I was about to get tired of the heroine in Shen Yuan Continent, I opened a new dungeon, Fusheng Continent, which rekindled my interest. I quite like the heroine opening a new dungeon, but I didn't expect the extra story about the fairy world. It ended so soon. I still have some unfinished thoughts, but I feel that it is just right. The road ahead is unknown. It is okay to stay in this happy moment, but I still feel a little regretful. Wanjun has just broken through the Mahayana but has to rush to death. It is a straight line. Wen Qing, who was unable to break through even when his lifespan was exhausted, was a younger brother and younger sister who were both born and died, Yun Qingxi, who was a master of alchemy but was killed by his best friend, Jin Ying, who was born twins but was absorbed and said to be a monster... And everyone who sacrificed their lives to suppress it. I always feel shocked when I see the deaths of people around the heroine. According to the halo of the heroine, they should all be alive and well. However, the journey of cultivating immortality is inherently fast-changing and partings are common. The heroine's cultivation is not as rapid as the geniuses in other novels. But in my opinion, this is good and not too exaggerated. I never question sincerity, but there is a good explanation for the rapid changes of sincerity. Even brothers can be killed for a Yuanying Pill, and even dear children can give up for a pill. When I see the ups and downs of the two continents suppressing monsters, tears always appear, and I always think of the lyrics "It's not easy for us, we can't help ourselves." We have cultivated to the top with great difficulty, but the way to ascension is blocked. We have cultivated to the top with great difficulty, but we have to die. It's really sad that the character side story has ended before it's written. I want to know if Qing Wu has found a way to resurrect Wan Jun and Xi Chen. I want to see the heroine practice to the top, and I want to see Kunpeng's follow-up. This novel also has many interesting sub-plots, such as Xiaoma literature, Long Aotian, the ambitions of the harem, the empress, the female general, etc. Finally, I like this book very much and the characters written by the author. I hope that everyone who ascends will become bigger and stronger in the fairy world, and I hope that the heroine will become stronger. Ignoring some minor issues, I still highly recommend this book.

I saw the update. It is an orthodox fairy tale. This novel is the best novel about fairy tales I have read in recent years. It is completely comparable to Slowly and Mortal Girl Xianhu. The plot is exciting and not procrastinating. The background of fairy cultivation is grand. The sect is also well described. The heroine is decisive in killing externally, but also warm and interesting internally. The character, Golden Finger is just right, and they all grow up step by step. There is no love brain in it, there is no stupid plot where you can easily defeat the golden elixir or even challenge the god in the foundation stage, and there is no plot where the whole world revolves around the heroine. It is so rare to see such a wonderful orthodox immortal cultivation novel in Tomato.

Like it very much! The rating of this article is a bit low, at least 9.3 Or above. The heroine is my favorite. She is not a brainless pet. The heroine has a distinct personality, perseverance, hard work, tact, and sophistication. She has risen step by step from the world of immortals to the top, and after her ascension, she was reduced to the bottom of the fairy world, showing weakness. With the help of self-preservation and self-improvement step by step, the change of mentality is very stable, the three views are correct, and it is not the heart of the Holy Mother. The description of the text is also hearty and vivid, without any sloppy writing. I very much hope that the author can continue to write about Ling Hua's journey to becoming a god in the immortal world.

Is it so easy to live forever? They all go against the will of nature. Everyone has his or her own chance and destiny. People with names who have appeared around the protagonist have good results. Most of them died in accidents, which makes it more real. No wonder everyone commented most on it as a rare orthodox fairy tale. The introduction did not attract me at first. So it does not mean a perfect protagonist. He is decisive but not ruthless. He has his own direction and bottom line. The protagonist who retains the softness is more rich. I am used to the online style of immortality novels, which are orthodox and cruel and real. The daily life of immortality is more attractive. After reading it for a day, I stayed up late to read. The closer I get to the ending, the more excited I am. I am not sleepy at all. It has been a long time since I read a novel with such excitement and involvement. It is now six o'clock in the morning. I just want to say that the new author is so scary.

Nice! ! ! Looks great! ! ! ! The heroine is so beautiful! ! A particularly traditional article on cultivating immortality! ! ! Finally, there are no such inexplicable advancements from Qi training to golden elixir to divine transformation! I'm really fed up with these bking advancements! And there is no so-called destiny for the heroine to save the world! No! ! There is no reason why the heroine should be saddled with the responsibility of saving the world when she was just a qi-training brat! ! ! No! ! Marvelous! ! ! I really like this kind of story. It is a normal female protagonist who is reincarnated into the world of immortal cultivation, and then becomes a disciple. She dreams of defeating all kinds of magic with one sword, but she has no talent for sword cultivation, so she chooses magic cultivation and alchemy! Of course, the main plot is definitely for ascension, and the author stopped at the end of the story, so he probably didn't plan to write a long story about the immortal world, so he had to write about something that hinders the ascension. In order to break this situation, all hope was not put on the heroine alone, but the entire world of immortality was making sacrifices and efforts for the sake of ascension, and the entire world of immortality and the heroine paid a heavy price for this! This arrangement is so logical! Moreover, the experience of the heroine is worthy of her achievements, which has shaped her character. The various supporting characters are also very vivid, but not perfect. I really like the second senior brother Fusheng, but even some of the plots of the second senior brother Fusheng surprised me, but it is indeed what his character can do. Overall, it looks great! Highly recommended!

In traditional immortal cultivation novels, the heroine is extremely talented and has space, and her practice and alchemy are smooth sailing (the upgrade time is very reasonable, not the kind of one night of practicing Qi for three days to build the foundation and one month of golden elixir), but this world of cultivation is very real and cruel, no matter how talented she is, her growth is stumbling, but the heroine can always grow in adversity. Whether she is kidnapped to refine alchemy or trapped in the floating continent, she can learn a lot from her enemies to improve her alchemy skills. Moreover, the world view is very real, people are always dying, and people die in secret realms when their lifespan is over. There are various ways of death, good or bad, unlike other stories where no one dies around the heroine. The plot of the catastrophe is also very touching.

Very nice! ! I really like the heroine's character - she shows no mercy to the bad guys! ! This is one of the better articles on immortality that I have read recently! Moreover, there are no cheats in the book, and the opportunities are obtained by the heroine step by step, which makes it feel like watching your own children grow up. The supporting characters in it are also very vividly described. I really like the female supporting characters and the second senior brother! Alas, I didn't expect it to end so soon. I'm a little reluctant to finish it. The heroine's journey has not been smooth sailing. She has gone through many hardships to become the powerful person she is today. From the grassroots at the beginning to the immortal later, we have all seen the hardships. [Almost crying] I hope I can see the continuation of this book in my lifetime! ! I really love her so much [crying] [crying] I particularly like this kind of long-lasting immortality writing. Not only was the perseverance of the girls moved me, but the supporting characters' spirit of sacrifice for all sentient beings made me cry. Several supporting characters that I liked very much in the book were also very vivid (Sister Qin, Master, Grandmaster, and the round contracted beasts). The relationship between them and the heroine moved me, and I understood the meaning of family and partners. The tragic life story of the third master who appeared later made me use tissues to wipe my tears when I was in the toilet. I reluctantly finished reading the extra chapter after watching it for more than a week, and stopped at the end of the full text with unfinished content. Ahhhh, I don't think I've finished writing yet! ! The author still has a lot of pitfalls to fill, please continue writing a second book, woo woo woo

How should I put it, this is my favorite of all the fairy novels I have read. Many of the characters here are a bit uneasy, such as the recent third senior brother and his Taoist companion, as well as Ya Qinglian and Fairy Lianyi. Each character has a beginning and an end, some evil and some good, and they are vivid. The overall story is also very coherent and interesting, but the updates are too slow. The author needs to update more.

This article is very long and has a lot of extras. It belongs to the traditional type of immortality. The law of the jungle is more realistic. Is the heroine's sect or another sect? Just like a modern big company, there are all kinds of people in a big dye vat. You can't specifically define this sect as bad. Normally speaking, the heroine's sect is pretty reliable. There are good people and bad people. It's normal and normal. I have met people who are related to each other, and no one can help anyone for some reason. The writing is very real. Some old bookworms have read the big IP Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. The heroine's character is similar to Han Lao Mowen in some places. Of course, this book is not as strong as the big IP, but it is still very interesting. The heroine's character has been stupid and noob in the early stage. Behind the scenes, she is smart, smooth, greedy and funny, cold and decisive. She is very capable of surviving and escaping. She is cautious and egoistic. There is no plot to help others. She will ignore the weak and in danger. She uses the rules of the world of immortality very well, so I said that she is a bit like Han Laomo in some places. The female protagonist in this book is a growth type and has dual cultivation of alchemy and magic. I also train my body, and upgrade step by step. It is a perennial first level. I don't have CP and I have facial control. I prefer to watch beautiful women who have no resistance to fluffy hair. There are still a lot of female characters around me. Some comments say that there are some, so you have to ask and make sure you read the article carefully. Let's be more to the point in our comments, here It's money that buys off the relationship. The heroine was picked up from a village in the mortal world when she was 5 years old. She seems to have forgotten that she has been cultivating immortals for more than 20 years. She was almost busy and finally remembered to look at her hometown. The heroine's parents still love their children. Some comments can't bear that the heroine thinks of her parents too late. After watching too much cultivating immortals, I feel that she has bought off the relationship regardless of her father. The mother is good or bad, always thinking about running back and forth in the mortal world and worrying about so many things. The heart of cultivating immortals is still very influential. It is normal for the heroine not to go back, but the heroine is more adapted to cultivating immortals. The subtle indifference of a monk is more obvious. The heroine herself cannot feel it. The heroine here spends most of her time practicing and sometimes gets injured a lot. The opportunity to rob is very smooth, but there are also times when greed and judgment are wrong. With the mustard space and various face-changing and identity-changing, the game is very smooth and stable. [Laughing and crying] She is always running away and being chased by too many people who are stronger than her. It is very difficult to be in the Gou space. The supporting characters here are still very flesh-and-blood. It is obvious that she is the heroine among all living beings. It may not be the most dazzling one, but it is also a powerful one. There are many protagonists around who are having their own stories. Although the article has flaws and shortcomings, it is still very good to read overall. I have an anxious temper and like to read refreshing articles. I have a glassy heart and pay attention to three views. I do not recommend this book to those who are filial to their parents and want to be benevolent. I look forward to new books in the future~~

Very nice. The heroine is tenacious, cautious and smart, and she is also very understanding of people and the world. Moreover, she is a very powerful girl who repays hatred and repays kindness. When I first read it, there were three senior brothers and one master above the heroine, and I thought it was a story about all men doting on one girl. But later on, five junior sisters and junior brothers (siblings) were included. The heroine has a very good relationship with her second senior brother, fifth junior sister, and younger junior brother. The heroine is also very filial to her master and will think of giving good things to her master. The master also loves the heroine and generously gives her life-saving cards, contribution points, etc. Of course, Master also loves and protects other disciples. The heroine also has a female friend who has been with her for many years, and she is also a smart and powerful girl. The author's plot is quite good and his writing style is also very good. The author loves boys as well as girls. There are positive male characters and there are positive female characters. There are negative male characters and there are negative female characters. Highly recommended to watch

There are no major problems, but there are quite a lot of minor ones. I'll just highlight the topic. The heroine is a practitioner with outstanding spiritual qualifications and an average mind. Often her ideas are immature and her actions are crude. She can read, but cannot help thinking deeply. She can really kill time with books.

It took me a few days to read it in one go. It is really interesting. I really like the relationship between the heroine and her master and her brothers. There are very few cultivation books that I can finish reading. This is one of the few. Of course, there are still many shortcomings. For example, there are a lot of typos.

It is a very real novel about cultivating immortals. The heroine meets many people on her journey to cultivating immortals. Things are unpredictable and many people are gone, especially the ancestors! I really cried to death when I saw that chapter [crying] [crying] [crying] He finally got the Mahayana with a lot of hard work, but as soon as he came out of seclusion, he had to sacrifice himself for the two mainland creatures. It was very painful to watch, and there were many supporting characters too. The road to becoming an immortal was so difficult. Our heroine is also brave and resourceful, decisive in killing, and will not let the enemy stay for a long time. Unlike other novels where one or two villains write hundreds of chapters and dance around in front of the heroine! Overall, the author's writing style is also very good and highly recommended [blowing kiss]

It's good to read. There are very few novels nowadays that have talents and ordinary golden fingers [Old Ancestors (you'll lose them once you meet them) + Mustard Seed Space (the aura is low, the heroine needs to work hard to upgrade)]. It's no exaggeration, it's within the acceptable range, and there are no big surprises. There is no such thing as the heroine supporting her master and brothers in the later period. It is all mutual and there is no unilateral contribution. The most important point is that the heroine does not have the ability to destroy the world and destroy the world. Everything is within the acceptable range. I like it😍 and will continue to follow up with more updates. Good luck💪

One of my favorite novels recently, the heroine is decisive and smart. Cautious, the kind that gets stronger slowly and never relaxes. Immortal cultivators can also have very good elders, who may engage in intrigues, intrigues, and the destruction of corpses and traces. There are friends and companions but no love. The heroine also has small flaws but no one is perfect. It's really not the kind of super cool article that kills everyone. Grow step by step. The beginning of the book was really good. There was a section in the middle where I almost gave up, but I still finished reading it without missing a chapter. The plot has ups and downs. I thought it was over, but I really don't want it to be over. I will continue to pay attention to the author's next book.

This book is the normal non-CP fairy tale that I have been looking for for a long time. You must know that these days, if a novel can be called "normal", it is already an extremely high evaluation from me. There are no inexplicable emotional entanglements, only the desire to keep getting stronger. The heroine has met noble people and encountered setbacks along the way, but no matter what, the heroine has always been improving. And the author's writing style is extremely comfortable for me to read. I like this heroine very much. She is talented, lucky, and kind. There are principles and bottom lines in doing things. Moreover, the author has also created many successful characters and arranged a good friendship for the heroine, that is, Xi Qin. God knows how moved I was to see this friendship. Really, the protagonist has a very good friendship, which is really not found in many fairy tales. Another point I want to highlight is that the author will arrange positive feedback for the heroine. This is really important to me. Because when I was shopping for books before, I was really fooled many times. Some novels would describe the abuse of female protagonists in extremely detailed ways, but the female protagonists never got positive feedback. Even if there is positive feedback, it will be brushed off, which makes people feel heartbroken. But this novel is very good. The heroine has both opportunities and setbacks. After encountering setbacks, the author will arrange positive feedback for her in a timely manner. If the heroine is not tortured thousands of times, there will be no satisfaction at all. Moreover, the heroine's frustrations are conveyed in a relaxed writing style, which eases the atmosphere and prevents people from thinking that the protagonist is always suffering. Along the way, I saw the growth of the heroine and was moved by her strong character. At the same time, I also remembered this immortal cultivator named Liu Linghua. Overall, this novel is a solid one for me.

It's very good-looking. The heroine has just entered the sect from the mortal world. She is not a genius, but she has a sincere master who teaches her carefully. The family and friendship lines are particularly comfortable and will not make people feel disgusted. Moreover, the heroine's character is never procrastinating, she has revenge, and she has no conscience. The characters in it also have their own little stories. There is no absolute villain, they are all opponents from their own perspectives. Of course, those who have friendships will also fall because of the intrigues, cruel competition, and difficulties of cultivation in the world of immortality. It seems to be a true story that really exists in another world. I give it a big five-hearted review and my own praise! ! !

Is the author a stand-in for Teacher Yu Hua? I was so blown away by the sacrifice array [smile] The advantage of this novel is that it is realistic, as if you are really cultivating immortality. There is the cruelty of cultivating immortals and the badness of human nature, but there is also the goodness of human nature. Too many people died in that catastrophe. No matter who they were, humans, demons, or even monsters that were hostile to humans, they had only one goal: to resist together, survive the catastrophe, and cry while watching. It seems like I saw the Anti-Japanese War a long time ago, when countless ordinary people fought against the Japanese. The heroine is not a perfect character, but she is a real heroine. She eventually becomes the master of the Medicine God Cauldron and will definitely become a ninth-grade elixir master. Each character is vividly drawn, including the master's incompetent skills as a swordsman, and the master's concern for the heroine. It's not as exciting as other novels. The heroine is not invincible, and if she disappears, the clan can't find her. (I've always felt that in other novels, the heroine would be hunted down by the clan to seek revenge or search for something wrong. It's too outrageous, because there are tens of millions of people in the world of immortality, and the heroine is not the only genius). The heroine is not the most powerful, but her luck is particularly good. She can escape smoothly even if she encounters difficulties, and she also gets opportunities. Note: If you like fast-paced and refreshing articles, you can read other articles. This is not the case. This article is a micro-group portrait.

It's the only traditional fairy tale that I insisted on reading. It's not long, but it took me a long time to read it. I felt a little regretful after reading it, but it was also satisfying. I missed many people in the lower world, those ancestors who died, people in the sect, the days of struggle in the mainland, and everyone I met, including the heroine's family, the ordinary, passionate, and united days. There is no cruelty in the front. I really like the part in the Rong family on the floating continent. It is very interesting. The subsequent battle was also filled with tears. After ascending, I always missed the lower world and everyone. We experienced a journey of cultivating immortality from the perspective of the heroine. We met and made friends with many people, but the encounters were short-lived. Therefore, we understood that we should cherish the people around us very much. People who have been enemies in the past will never be seen again, no matter whether it is good or bad. Goodbye, everyone of this book.

I have read more than 300 chapters so far. This is a relatively realistic non-refreshing novel. The plot is smooth and logical, but the rhythm is a bit flat. But it may be due to poor writing skills. When describing the characters, I did not feel the author's emotions for the characters. Like the recorder, sometimes the words were not accurate, the details were not enough, and there was a bit too much nonsense, so the characters were not fully reflected. I can feel the complexity of the characters that the author wanted to write, and it was not straightforward black and white of good and evil. Let's wait and see later and try to tie it up.

It is a traditional fairy cultivating video, with no CP (the best thing!! There is no man in the heart, the god of nature draws the sword!) Everyone in the book has flesh and blood. The book is not perfect, but in general it is in line with what you want. There is no rigid depiction, and there is a little humor. What can I say, not everyone likes it, but I like it. Like this, she is a growth-type heroine. Some people may think that the heroine of this book has bad views. I don't think she is a cultivator. She respects strength and is not a modern society that talks about laws and ethics. The heroine also has a bottom line. She actively strives for what she wants. Is there any problem in confiscating her property when she encounters someone with ill intentions who wants to rob her? No problem! She is respectful and filial to her teachers and elders, and friendly to her brothers, sisters, and brothers (except for the senior brother who fails to live up to his expectations later on!) She must repay kindness and revenge to those who helped her. Well, this is the type I like! But Grandmaster Wanjun is very upset. [Crying] [Crying] It's a pity that the heroine didn't really accept any disciples to pass on. One of her great disciples, Xiao Ran, died and became a weapon spirit before she could take him back to practice immortality. But that was her fate. She had no choice but to regain consciousness at the end of the extra episode. It's great! When we finally reached the top, the master was there, the second senior brother was also there, the mother-child bracelet was repaired and became an immortal device, with the help and inheritance of the Medicine God Cauldron, my best friend was also there, and Xiaoran also regained consciousness. It was great! (It's just that occasionally a knife falls and makes people cry, woo woo woo! It's not much better, but it's more real this way. In life, you are either experiencing possession or losing)

This book is written very realistically. The heroine climbs up step by step. All the characters are very real. Many people in it can be the protagonists. The characters are very three-dimensional. Just like in life, there will be regrets. No one who cares about the heroine will die. The heroine has no Have a damn Holy Mother's heart (I feel that the world of cultivation is a very cruel world, and overflowing with sympathy is really not suitable for survival). You don't kill people casually and don't leave troubles for yourself. Time travel doesn't mean that you will explode directly, but it will just be like a normal person with good talents.

I feel that the writing is very real. It is impossible for everything to be without regrets. Many novels are too idealistic and have no real feeling. However, this novel makes people feel closer to real life. I like the ups and downs. I like it very much. 👍🏻. Others will create great works again [Blow kiss]

It's a very interesting novel about cultivating immortals, but if you keep following the updates, the plot will become boring after just one episode. It's finished now, and I recommend it to all those who like to read powerful stories about cultivating fairies. At the beginning, I worked step by step, gradually maxing out my talent points, thinking that I would be able to assist alchemy. As a result, my force points were maxed out, and the plot twist was quite unexpected. I was also surprised when I changed the map in the later stage. It's just that the ending was a bit smooth. The master's sacrifice was something I didn't expect. I thought there would be a reversal. The ending was a bit real. Aunt Tong would also take action when faced with Ascension. Looking forward to the author's next book

It's very beautiful, not exaggerated, not frivolous, and not a running account. Highly recommended by people who have been reading for 20 years [like] [like] [like], but it feels a bit unsatisfying and the number of words written is too few [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

Finished reading! Five-star praise! It's been a long time since I've read an entire novel in its entirety. The heroine and supporting characters are all very charming and fleshed out! It attracted me a little bit and I couldn't help but want to understand them and experience their lives! As the author's first novel, it is so well written! The author is really awesome! Thank you to the author for taking me on a journey through this fantastic and unknown world! I really like your novels! Looking forward to seeing more of your work! [Love][love][love]

This is the first time I see such an independent character. People who have been practicing immortality for hundreds of thousands of years have their own resilience. After experiencing so many people coming and going, life and death, and moving up step by step, the spiritual roots born in the world of immortality determine a lot. I think of the sentence "Genius is made up of 99%." It is made up of sweat and 1% of talent, but without that 1% of talent, nothing is possible." Ling Hua is really a talented and hard-working person. After trying hard, she decided to change careers after finding that it was useless. Hahahaha, choice is more important than hard work, but her descendant Liu Ruyi is quite interesting. She spends resources to encourage eugenics to find good seedlings to improve their Liu family genes hahahahahaha. The other characters around her are also very humane. There are all kinds of people, with more or less advantages and disadvantages, including that sentence, people will change. Some go farther and farther in the vicissitudes of life, and some stop and fall. Fortunately, the right person will stand on the road and catch up step by step. The real companionship is not to be by your side all the time, but that I am always there. After cultivating immortality for tens of thousands of years, Yuanyuan is lonely but not lonely

Great author! Although there are some minor flaws in writing this article for the first time, it is still very good overall [Like] It's been a long time since I've seen such a considerate female protagonist practicing fairy literature. Big cheers for the author! I still want to read the fairyland chapter~