He Is Clearly Devoted to the Plot, but Why Is There Something Wrong with the Male Protagonist?

I really like this book. In the first world, Su showed the original owner's pursuit of profit. I really love it. Especially when the protagonist promised to be the financial sponsor later, the protagonist's humble and praying look was different from the previous one where the protagonist felt that the protagonist was superior and made people (the original owner) unhappy. It made me feel happy [smile] Then I saw some people in the comment area who felt that it was not worthwhile for the two of them to fall in love for the original owner, but I think if the original owner could take this approach, I think he would definitely climb up. It is not because of the appearance of the protagonist that he hates capital and does those things. If another person uses similar methods in the future and hits him, he will do it, because in essence, the original owner is a very ambitious person. What's more, when Su played the role of the original protagonist, he did not fall in love with the protagonist directly, but let the protagonist start as the financial sponsor. Looking at the follow-up, you can see that it took several years before the protagonist's relationship was acknowledged. I think it was handled well here. I can only say that when I read the article, my feelings for the original owner were a little more pure. When I read the article, I marked the original owner from the beginning as being extremely ambitious. Ambition is something that the original owner of the first world cannot ignore (just like the arrogance of the original owner of the second world). After all, looking for the sponsor behind the original owner means that he can use everyone, including himself, for profit.

This is a book that takes a different approach. I don't like abuse very much. In this book, the abuse in the plot makes it unexpectedly sweet. The plot is very funny and makes people want to continue reading. The Crisp Sugar CP is really awesome! I hope I can always look this good! ! The only drawback is that there are too few and not enough to see! ! !

It's been a long time since I've seen something like this and I'm hooked. The entanglement between the two protagonists really touched me. Xiao You is not the kind of stupid and sweet person who has his own considerations in everything he does. The author wrote so deeply that it touched my heart [Send my heart] [Send my heart] This little bit is simply not enough! ((٩(//̀Д/́/)۶))

Super super pretty! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! As a Tomato, I have read more than 2,000 books, and I have left more than 900 books on my bookshelf, but I have only read four of them. Let me tell you, this book is really, really good! ! ! I also keep up with updates! ! ! ! ! The protagonist is not greasy and refreshing, nor does he insult or degrade the original owner or the original protagonist (after all, the original protagonist is the attacker). In the small world, the protagonist Shou plays the original protagonist according to the personality, and because of the original male protagonist, who is also the protagonist Gong, the plot collapses, but the role of the personality is super high! ! ! In addition, I have always read this book while diving, and I don't comment much, but when I saw this book, someone maliciously left a bad review! ? I will protect such a good book! ! !

In my opinion, this novel is quite good, and I also like the character of the protagonist. [Thinking] Although there are some minor flaws in some places, a work cannot be perfect. Overall, it is good and can be easily accepted [Love] Maybe the first two worlds are a little bit sadistic (it doesn't seem to be very sadistic [Thinking] [Thinking] Accept it well), but the setting of the third world is very interesting, twins (disco on my XP)! ! ! Great love [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]! ! ! The third world is super sweet from the beginning! ! ! (I still prefer Tiantian's plot [shy]) And the protagonist is very cute, not silly, doesn't know how to burp, doesn't hold back, and is not aggrieved! ! Looking forward to future developments! Come on [please give me more updates] [please give me more updates] The next few worlds are so beautiful! ! It's really super sweet! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

It's really good-looking, very sweet, because Gong is a love brain, so he doesn't feel abusive, sweet and reassuring, but the pit is too shallow now [crying]

This two-male protagonist quick travel novel is indeed just like the introduction written by the author. The introduction and content are still true to this day! Although there are only two worlds now, the second world is not finished yet, and I believe the follow-up will not be bad (will review later)! This is not an ordinary quick wear, and it is not the kind where you need to gain favorability points. Su just wanted to make the male protagonist behave (~(￣▽￣~)~). The author has said it all, including Jack Su, and the author related to lightning protection also said it at the beginning. If you can't accept it, you can change it. There is no need to leave negative reviews or anything. But I'm a native dog and I love watching. Su flirts without knowing it, and her writing is really good! Overall, the story line of the article is clear, and the interaction between the two male protagonists is also smooth. From the moment I didn't know it at first, to the moment I realized it and jumped right in, I was laughing all the time. Big cheers for the author!

Ah ah ah, it looks so good. I'll update it soon! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] It's so beautiful and beautiful that I can't stop watching it. It's not enough. The emotional lines are delicate and very eye-catching.

So far, the latest chapter, the author has maintained a very good standard. The writing is just right and no unnecessary ink is wasted. The characters of the main characters in each small world are very full. In each small world, Youyou changed the tragic fate of the original owner on the basis of fitting the original owner's character, creating a better world and a better life. I really like Youyou who has both career and love! I also love his companions in every little world! What a perfect match! I would like to mention something by the way. The small system and related settings in this article are still unique. When you arrive in each small world, Youyou needs to play the role of the original owner. All the skills possessed by the original body must be obtained by Youyou yourself first, instead of directly getting a golden finger through the system. This setting feels great. Very, very great. It's quite sad. When I re-read it this time, I found that many places have been modified, and the changes have changed beyond recognition. It is no longer as enjoyable as it was when I first followed the serialization. Especially in the world of companion reading. When I see Bigan even writing a reminder before the chapter to let everyone skip this world, as a reader I really feel very sad and regretful.

The plot is not rigid due to character design, and the plot is quite good. The system will also promote the plot appropriately. Some of the jokes are indeed funny, and the character creation is quite vivid.

The author's writing style is good. The first plane easily aroused my cp heart. However, there is one thing that the author should pay attention to. Every character is important and worthy of respect. He should not ignore them just for the sake of further strengthening the relationship between the protagonists. The unfair neglect suffered by a supporting character, the characters are all alive, they will also feel pain and discomfort (for example, the original owner of the first plane, his own hard work is not comparable to the power of capital, while he is grievances for himself, he is not resisting the entire capital society, even if it is clear that He knew it was impossible to succeed, but he still did it. Isn't this a kind of bravery? ) Personally, I prefer to treat every novel character equally, and don't regard a character as a villain just because of his shortcomings and paranoia. There is a saying that this kind of "have" It's quite interesting to read the novel "Colored Glasses" (I recommend the author to give it a try [blowing kiss]). Finally, I finished my short composition. I still like the author's writing style very much. The pink bubbles between attack and pain are vividly displayed. It feels like it will kill me [laughs]

I really have to say that this book is simply the best book I have ever read, bar none. The stories told in the first plane are very interesting, either very cliché or completely beyond my expectation. Every story written by the author is very original. It makes me unable to guess the direction. Every time I see that shit-yellow button, my heart feels as uncomfortable as being scratched by a cat's paw. What exactly is the next chapter like? The key is that the author is very good at writing! I prefer Yangwen. I only read it when I finished a new level. But I accidentally clicked in and read a chapter and couldn't help myself. What I look forward to most every day is the update of this book. Who knows? ! The second world is also very interesting. It is a theme that I have never seen before. The black panther and the big white lion are so cute! ! ! All in all, I hope there will be more updates! ! !

Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong short as possible, I'm sure it will reach 9.5 Or above in the future. I just finished watching the first world. I love it so much. I also like the setting. Every time the male protagonist's coolness increases, I smile like an auntie! Hahaha! Come on! Don't hesitate!!!

It's really beautiful! The contrast between Jiaojiao and Jiaojiao makes me really love [love] pure cookies! There are not many people competing for love rivals, but most of them give up~ There is no such kind of male partner who stalks and fights hard. The overall evaluation is super great! I hope the author will update it soon, it's not enough! ! ! ! ! !

Really worth seeing! The tsundere but soft-hearted feeling is really super delicious, and the self-braining and self-strategy strategy is so delicious! The plot also impressed me a lot. The book is new. If you join the branch, you must not be dissuaded by the rating! Super fragrant, a good bowl of rice [give heart][give heart][give heart]

It's not bad, it's logical, it focuses on the emotional line but the plot is also arranged reasonably. This is not the kind of mindless cool story. When Xiaoyou arrives in each world, he will first undergo special training before acting, and he will also act according to the ideas of the character. The interaction with Gong is the most attractive point. I won't go into detail about the unimportant supporting characters, and it's good to explain all the setting issues in detail. Basically, when it comes to pursuing career highlights, the pace will obviously speed up. The first and second worlds have ignored the follow-up efforts of the two of them to be together. In fact, it can be written in more detail. There is a lot of pursuit process, and I want to see more of the happy life of the two after they confirm their relationship. It can be seen that the author attaches great importance to this book and loves these characters (including the original protagonist), but there is actually no need to explain too much. People are logical and self-consistent. It may be much better to let others think about it than to explain it all.

Looks good! It's been a long time since I've seen such a top-notch article about fast travel! The plot is novel and logical, the emotional scenes are overall very sweet, getting sweeter and sweeter√ and the small world written in it is very interesting. I have never seen the same thing about Killer Whale. I originally thought I might be repulsed by it, but it turned out to be really good-looking! Killer whales and octopuses (? Branches?) Are super sweet and easy to chew! ! ! All I can say about the twins is exciting! The one with the young master and the idol looks good too! Up here! Each of Xiaoyou's characters is well maintained (career-minded), and the small world at the beginning is honestly following the plot, so it may not be particularly sweet. But the plot is really good! Xiaoyou opened up more and more, and then he was sweet and sweet with his lover√Hehehehe And! Pay attention! This is very unusual! He will post the process (meat) of that thing as a benefit to our readers! The writing is really good (introverted) [shy] I love you so much! Overall, it's worth watching, the quality is very good٩(•̤̀ᵕ•̤́๑)ᵒᵏᵎᵎᵎᵎ (Obviously I planned to save the whole world before watching it, but in the end I couldn't help but chase it. The killer whale is so beautiful! [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart]) [Love] [Love] [Love]

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The point! 🍅It seems to be very strict about this book, and some of the blocked places are really strange. However, you can search the original text online, and I also put the original text I searched in the corresponding paragraphs and comments (but there seem to be some typos, and I made them based on the progress I read. I have only seen the third world now). Fortunately, the author has marked the deleted places, otherwise I would not know where to add them. Very nice! The emotions are very delicate and the characters are very well written and really strong. I like Gong's character very much, he really deserves to be the protagonist of the original novel. I love Youyou very much! Youyou is an immersive interpretation (the author writes very well, clearly describing the character of the original owner and Youyou's own character, and the transition is not abrupt). The second world recognized Gong at the beginning, very quickly (and very reasonable). The plot is also very compact and does not drag out, and the chapters in each world are quite appropriate. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the author's next book.

The dual strength is my favorite setting in my life. I want to fight side by side with you. I want to tell you that you can be brave enough to do what you want to do. You are neither someone's dodder nor someone's troublemaker. Not only can you be my supporter, but I can also be yours. Believe me, we trust each other the most in the world. As long as everyone mentions one of them, others will immediately think of the one who is fighting side by side with him. Every time they fight side by side, they will default to being invincible. This feeling is invincible. It's really touching! The writing process, the subject matter is novel, the plot is neither cliche nor nonsense, there are no misunderstandings, no blood, and the sexual tension is full and absolutely perfect. Please update a hundred chapters and bring in some fresh blood. I haven't had such a delicious meal in a long time (fainted to the ground with happiness)

I love the author so much~! ♥[][](｡￫V￩｡)♥[][]. I like this book so much. It has a different taste and relieves my pain of being short of books (I almost cry). And even though it's a quick story, so far I haven't had the feeling that the ingredients are different and the formula is the same, which is really great! ! ! 🎉[But it still needs to be improved] What attracts me most is the overall arrangement of this book, ① the writing style is fresh : Fearless of the bitterness and gloom of the past, based on the present, presenting a bright picture ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨, (I don't know if you understand, but to put it in layman's terms, I have not received any negative emotional influence from the author,,,) ② The writing style is natural: I read books without thinking, but This is just my subjective consciousness, which does not mean that my subconscious will do the same, but this time I did not feel my own rejection, which shows that the connotation and logic in the writing style are acceptable to me (this is rare, and I will not talk about the reasons [petrification]) ③ Let's talk about the shortcomings, forget it, let's not talk about it. Keep up the good work, author! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart Heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

This book is really beautiful [Blowing Kiss]. It is one of the few Kuaishou articles on Tomato that made me fall in love with it the more I read it. The author deleted a lot of it due to review, but it still looks good. Yubao's character design is really super three-dimensional and sober. The character design of Gong is also very cute. The settings of each world are also super interesting. It is really a fairy tale [Adoration]. I just have an inexplicable feeling that this book was censored. When I read the end, I really regret that the author hastily finished it because of the censorship [crying]. I feel so unwilling. I feel that there are still many holes that I have not been able to fill in. I hate you for being such a rotten persimmon [angry]

I like it very much. When the author updated it, I followed it all the way. In the later stage, the update of the last two small worlds may have been slower, and then I delayed reading it for a while. After he finished it, I came over to look at it and found that the later stage of writing was very difficult because Persimmon changed a lot of requirements. There were many settings in the past that I was not told not to write when I started the book, but when I was almost finished, I asked the author to change them. Moreover, it is not a harem but a slice of plot, and it was labeled as a harem and said that it needs to be changed. It not only makes the author exhausted mentally and physically, but also makes the readers feel uncomfortable. I even suspect that this book was targeted. But I still like Xiaoyou very, very much, and I am very grateful to the author for insisting on finishing it. Finally looking forward to the next one.

The story is wonderful and the writing is excellent. The only thing I don't understand is what exactly is the review doing? Some very normal parts are also banned. I don't understand what Tomato's reform means this time? The book is good, the author is great, the review is bad.

I have finished reading it. The writing is clear, the plot is smooth, and the character descriptions are very charming. I like Youbao very much. It's a pity that due to censorship reasons, the ending was changed beyond recognition. There is no complete ending. It's so uncomfortable. This is the longest double-male protagonist story I've ever read.

Well, I personally think it's very beautiful, I like it, I like it very much. Whether it's the characters or other aspects, from what I've seen, I personally feel pretty good. So far, my favorite must be the cute little white lion. Wow, it's really true. How can it be so cute? ! Ahhhh, ahhhh, I like it so much, I like it so much! ! ! Another point to note is that the author will update it as soon as possible. Woohoo, it's not enough! ! ! Come on, come on, come on! ! !

Perfect, ultimate perfect! ! This book is the cure for my book drought! ! Xiao You is not very powerful from the beginning. He starts to become stronger step by step as the mission world increases. Because it is an immersive mission, many places can give people a strong sense of substitution, including some practices. Why Xiao You does what he does and says, the author will explain in the narration, and it will not make people feel abrupt. The only bad thing is that I watched it too late and found out too late. When I went to look for Rourou, I found that everything was gone, woo woo woo.

The plot is light and funny. The two protagonists have a positive outlook on things. They are not the kind of people who just give up for love. The original protagonist of the plot is also very good. They are both clear-headed and ambitious protagonists. It is only because they are supporting characters that they have such an ending. So I think the final ending arranged by DaDa for the original protagonist is quite good. Okay, at least it didn't make me feel unhappy when I watched it, and I didn't deliberately write some brainless supporting characters. They are all people with brains. Although there are also bad guys, they don't let those scumbags keep jumping around. They are basically killed after a short time. This is really great. The author will continue to work hard and update. This is completely unsatisfactory [shy]

There are no meal replacements on the entire network. Let me briefly introduce it, World 1 focuses on tasks, and you can survive only if you succeed. (Serious) Play tricks on each other with the system (but the system is not bad). The protagonist is immersed in the game (without jumping out, he is relatively calm and self-possessed). The three views are upright and the character is not arrogant. The plot is very attractive and the pull is great. Reviews were mixed. You can watch it or not. But I recommend watching it. Because this is the first world where we know each other. World 2 is a transitional period for the protagonist to explore the plot. Exploit bugs. Proud young master. Double strength! ! Whistle guide fairy product. All the worlds behind are very beautiful. You will never lose money if you get in. Be it twins or killer whales. There is also the high priest behind. The writing is very good. Fascinating. Let's start with the review. There are also many high-quality comments in the comment area. Really good

Push, push, push, push, push, push, push, push, push, push This is a very authentic and honest view. I give my wife five stars. I personally really like this style. No one is perfect. Everyone has shortcomings. It is not the kind of description of one of the protagonists. The two male protagonists have many shining points, as well as the supporting roles, and the wife is really very interesting [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]