After Falling Into a BL Comic, I Was Kept by a Powerful Man!

Very nice, thank you to the author!

Although the author has always said that his writing is not good, the article itself is actually very distinctive, and there are many small points that are good. It is also rare to add a system to the original characters in comics. The protagonist can also see the joy, anger, sorrow and joy of an ordinary little character. However, I feel that some of them can be refined, such as the change in the attitude of the protagonist's attack to the protagonist's acceptance, and the conflict between the original protagonist's acceptance and the protagonist's attack. You can try to give some specific examples to illustrate. Including that the protagonist Shou is a straight man (in fact, most straight men in life are a bit resistant to Nantong. The author can actually describe in detail the protagonist Shou's gradual acceptance under the careful care of the protagonist Gong). Overall, it is very interesting. I support the author greatly ❤️ and hope that future works will be more perfect! (I don't know if you are interested in writing about two men cultivating immortality) I hope the number of words in the next work will be more ❤️

Big cheers for the author! The book is very beautiful

Nice! But my feelings about this book are very ambivalent and complicated. Every character gives me a very complicated feeling. Each character is not a good guy in the traditional sense, but a bit like a bad guy. So do I like the characters in it? I have no idea. Makes me feel very complicated. For example, the separation from Chi Ran, who was quite controversial, How should I put it? In the early stage, he was really good to the protagonist, and he doted on the protagonist. He was like a biological brother to the protagonist. But it's really bad in the middle and late stages. When I saw him falling out with the protagonist, I felt a little heartbroken. So my feelings towards him are very complicated, I don't hate him but I don't hate him, I like him but I don't like him either. I also have quite complicated feelings towards the protagonists. I didn't like the protagonist Gong at first because I thought he liked Chi Ran (I'm a bit of an emotional mysophobia). However, this misunderstanding was explained clearly later on, but I still felt a thorn in my heart. Bear with it... The protagonist feels very miserable. I can't say it's a small misery, I can only say it's very miserable. Since I came to this comic, I have been miserable every day. Although there are happy moments inside. (For example, when I was with Chi Ran in the early stage, and when I was with the protagonist Gong in the middle and late stages.) (Of course, in the later stage, because of Chi Ran and the others, I was only happy at that point.) "Sometimes I hope that the protagonist will go home quickly and fly alone, but seeing that the protagonist loves him so much and uses him so miserably, I don't think so. (But don't worry so much, the protagonist will go home the day after the mission is completed.)"

I stayed up late reading this book. My ability to empathize was so strong that I burst into tears. I wanted to jump in and kick someone. Finally, I saw the two confirm their relationship, and it was over! ! ! ! ! No can't be like this! ! Author, I will be really sad<(ToT)>

I just feel that Chi Ran is weird, maybe he is not as kind as he appears, right?

The author writes very well, looking forward to the next chapter

It took me a whole day to read it, and overall it's pretty good; it's just that sometimes there are some words and people's names that are misspelled, but that's not a big problem. The before and after comparison of the protagonist is still great. Recommended Recommendation 😘😘

No, no, this is really good to watch🤩 It's really cool, but it's only a little bit I really like this kind of plot 🥰

Awkward and condescending, every word is beautiful. I beg the author to update it quickly.