Planar Invasion: I Have a Demon Fruit Tree

The overall details of the story are quite good, but every time the plot develops to the next stage, it is rarely abrupt. The previous descriptions of Devil Fruits were quite good. The organization that was established suddenly spread across the country, and a large number of subordinates and various Devil Fruits suddenly appeared. I am really not afraid of accepting traitors, or sneaking in as spies, or people with questionable character (people who are murderous, gangsters, loan sharks, etc.) To discover other worlds, you can take your time step by step. Suddenly, there was a large-scale invasion from another world, and secret realms from other worlds appeared one after another. This is the beginning of spiritual energy recovery, so take your time. There is always a big gap between the plot and the next stage. It is recommended to write a few more chapters so that the plot can transition to the following plot more smoothly.

It's not too much to give yourself a 5-star review!

I hope it won't be blocked, it's very nice. Why are you still cultivating immortality?

It's a very good subject and the story is okay, but it's a pity that there are a few bad points.

Generally, some poisonous points Okay, I was careless. The further I got to the back, the more my hips stretched 🍉

Although there are some things I don't like, it's okay.

So far, it's okay, although there are some minor flaws that don't affect the overall situation.

Is there no reward for completing missions? The settings should be better.

I like cheering very much

Come on, come on, come on