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It's really good, the subject matter is first-rate, but the outline content is not done well. Otherwise the rating would be very high.

The novel is quite new. Although the setting name is old-fashioned, it is just a name. The personalities of the characters are quite obvious. There is no personality change between the funny guy in the front and the serious teacher in the back. They are all quite fun. Although there are indeed more people who die, they are all insignificant people. I have not seen anyone die in the protagonist group. Of course, it is best not to die. The protagonist's abilities are also relatively new. It is mainly very exciting and quite European. However, this book also has an uncomfortable point, that is, I always forget the plot.

In fact, it's really beautiful, with flesh and blood, and I'm fascinated by it. It's two o'clock, I finally finished watching it, please don't give up, this is a concubine that I have never had in my harem [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

It's good, it's wonderful, but the title of the book is a little delayed, and the writing style needs to be improved. For example, the plot should be less funny and more serious. Sometimes it is too exaggerated and contrived to have funny scenes in serious plots. The funny plots can be more in the leisure and quiet life. When fighting, it should be hot-blooded and reckless rather than nonsensical. The characteristics of the two aspects should be distinct, so that more readers can get involved.

Hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey, so beautiful, hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey Why do so many people say they don't have a sense of agency? Sense of immersion. Do you still need a sense of immersion when watching this?

The protagonist is kidnapped and travels to a cosmic world filled with all kinds of strange ghosts. The ghosts are all transformed by ghost energy. The ghost world is immortal and the owner of the ghost world is immortal. This breaks the traditional idea of people turning into ghosts. There are creatures from various planes and creatures from all over the world. The Gods and story concepts I have seen are eye-opening and refreshing. Drawing Ink Boy is awesome. The descriptions of characters, items, weapons and plots are very interesting and interesting. It opens the door to a new world. It is fascinating and cannot be stopped.

This book is very beautifully written, has good content, is refreshing, and is also very funny. There are a lot of laughs. The world view is also huge. Invincible

What a great book, looking forward to the next development

After reading it in one go, I started to lose a sense of immersion. The plot later is quite good, and the setting of Zero is also quite novel. It's good to build a world view, just don't turn it into a Machiavellian plot later.

This is a very fun book. It's never funny just for the sake of being funny, and I don't make jokes for the sake of being funny. When I write somewhere, it will naturally become a joke. Mainly because the plot is not cliche. Just read a few chapters and you'll know what the book is like. Recommend

It's okay, but like what was said on the first floor, there are too many nonsensical things. When I should be serious, I keep being nonsensical. This is the reason why I can't stand it. It's better than the novel subject matter.

The overall score is 4.9. The writing is smooth and the overall rhythm is good. What makes it less traditional is the background. The remaining 0.1 Is probably because I personally don't like daily life. It always feels a bit bland. I finished a section yesterday and I have no motivation to read it anymore today. Overall, it is a very good novel and worth reading.

Growth, salvation, different world, partial group portrait, world consciousness version system As soon as the protagonist's abilities came out, what I thought of was that starting from the shadow and mutating, it all feels like a black cub extending from the self. The world is being violated, and there is help from the gods. Fight monsters layer by layer and constantly challenge levels. The whole structure is still good, but I have read too many articles of the same type, and it was weak in the later period and has no new supporting points.

Not bad, the subject matter is innovative, the world construction is great, and the writing is humorous, but the increase in combat power is a bit out of the ordinary. Sometimes the combat power is overpowered by the plot. In addition, the setting of the old family is a bit unsightly, and it is always dusty [face covering]

Very good subject matter! The content is nice but a bit short! Keep it up! ! !

Let me go, this book is well written, how few people read it yesterday, the author please update it [please read it carefully]

Not bad, the subject matter is new, the plot is compact, come on

It's a good book, the rhythm and writing are good, and the content is also interesting. [Thinking] The author is probably a funny guy with literary talent [laughing]

The story is quite good, the world view is well developed, and occasionally I can find that the author is in great condition and is the best among all the public servants. If I have any suggestions, the scene changes can enhance the immersion.

On this subject matter, it surpasses the 9th level of writing on the market.

It's so beautiful. Come and read it. I'm really afraid that so few people will read this book.

It's well written, and it's suitable for people like me who are a bit mentally disturbed. I don't know why the rating is so low.

It's really good. The subject matter and writing style are both excellent.

The subject matter is good and the writing is good. It's worth reading when you're not reading.

The plot is very innovative. This is the first time I have seen such an interesting book on Tomato. It's a pity that the score is too low and there are so few people watching.

Four stars for the novelty of the subject matter

The author's writing style is very sexy, I like it very much, keep up the good work!

It's very interesting. Why is the rating so low? Let's increase the rating. This is a good book not to be missed.

Very good, worth reading, I hope you will continue to read it^O^

It's pretty good. This can be considered a high-quality article.