Planning Across the Heavens, Summoning a Young Supreme from the Start!

This book is very good, but it's a pity that it's the last one.

Five stars are not given to this book, but to the author. I have read twenty-four chapters of this book so far. According to the scoring convention, this book only deserves two stars up to that point. Reverse order and interludes account for too much weight in the total content. The transition paragraphs do not directly teleport to the scene at all, which makes the reader confused. To be more specific, the previous chapter is still about the protagonist. The next chapter begins with three brothers fighting the blood wolf. It took a lot of writing to lead out that it is the author's subordinate who passed by this place. If you look at most online novels on the market, if they use reverse order, there will definitely be a transition at the beginning and it will definitely not be used without warning at the beginning of a new chapter. To be honest, it feels a bit like reading prose in the past. Another very important issue is that although you are writing about the behind-the-scenes flow, the proportion of content given to the protagonist cannot really be as small as the perspective of an ordinary person in the bureau looking at the behind-the-scenes person in that bureau. When you write a novel, the protagonist at the beginning of the novel is who the reader brings in as his identity. If the protagonist almost does not appear in the book, all that appears are the content and scenes of the protagonist's subordinates. What do you think is the most enjoyable part for readers, right? Although these two problems are quite big and affect the perception of the book, from the use of reverse narration in writing online articles, it can be seen that the author wants to use a unique writing method that others do not use. I am also willing to point out the current flaws for the author, just like what I said at the beginning of this book review. This five-star is for you, not this book. At least it is not this book at the moment. If you have the idea of ​​writing a more exciting story, I will give you the above words. If you just write for fun and don't want to spend too much time thinking about how to write better, or if you think I am not qualified to teach you how to do things, treat the above words as if I didn't say them. Above.

The subject matter is very good and the concept is good. I must give it 5 stars.

There's nothing much to say, it must be a five-star review

Author Come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on!

Who can read this little bit? If the readers next door see it, they think I look down on it. Five hundred more chapters, five hundred chapters per person.

Not bad, a lot better than the previous one

The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like that

It's very interesting, but it's too slow. There are so few chapters and it's not satisfying. The main character is very enjoyable.

I wrote 58 chapters in one month. Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this [Petrochemical]