Quick Travel: Danger! Passerby a Is Too Beautiful!

Please don't mind if I complain a bit too much. The main reason is that your writing is so good and it's so easy to arouse emotions. I like this development direction very much. It's straightforward and clear and doesn't hide anything. It's great. It's a lot fairer to the heroine. Come on!

I'll give it a perfect score myself first, everyone can do as they please (dog's head sticks out tongue)

Pretty good looking! But it's so scary in reality

The setting of the male protagonist is very exciting, I like it so much that I can dance on XP, but the female protagonist...,,, It's really hard to comment, her character can't match the male protagonist's character at all,,, it doesn't seem to be refreshing at all, the feeling of being entangled by a yandere and unable to escape is not written at all,,, she ran away from him and chased her. That's it? ? ? I felt lonely after watching this yandere... How should I put it? It's like a domestic horror movie. It was really interesting and exciting at the beginning, but as the story unfolds, it becomes more and more boring. The most speechless ones are the readers at the bottom of the comment section. Are they all idiots? ? ? ? The author's introduction makes it very clear that they are all crazy about male protagonists, who are willing to live and die for the heroine. You don't have eyes to see, right? [Smile] If you can't stand it, don't click in to read it. [Smile] After reading it and tearing it away from reality, how about it? Are you crazy? If you love reality so much, why don't you go to realist literature? What kind of online romance are you watching? Dian Po [smile] [OK] He also said that the male protagonist is a pervert and should be caught without cp. What about me? If the male protagonist is not like this, then he is not a crazy person. If he is not like this, his character will be ruined. [Smile] No one clicked in this book for the yandere character. If you can't stand it, let me ask you, why did you click in? ? ? [Awkward laugh][OK][OK] You have to show off your three views in the story about the yandere male protagonist, right? [Face-covering][Face-covering][Face-covering][OK] I am convinced and invincible [Face-covering][OK][OK]

It's so good. You, the author, are my god. You can write such a yandere and dank man who loves the heroine so passionately. I feel so touching. There are many such crazy male protagonists in Tomato, but they don't have the right control, and they will appear very greasy, but the male protagonist in the author's bold strokes completely touched me, and I will never be able to refuse such sticky feelings. Maybe it's because love in reality lacks exclusivity, so I'm keen to find the "one and only" that only exists in novels. Among the few novels I've read, there are very few authors who can write about the male protagonist's sense of insanity in a very touching way. The one I followed even stopped updating... The only consolation now is that I'm waiting for the update of this book every day. It was originally very interesting. It's sad that there is only one update every day, but I am so diligent that I can actually write four to five thousand words every day. I don't ask the author to write a lot, I just hope that you can keep writing and not stop updating. Also, I really want to read the book I wrote before. Is there any other way to see it? I can't see that I am going to be dark and twisted.

Very good-looking, such a perverted male protagonist, but the first world was unfinished, and it stopped when it was exciting, and he passed on to the next world [fear][fear]. What to wear? Put it on after you finish writing! I received it on the bookshelf first. The author continued to write the first world for me. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

It's just good to read. I can't say a lot of comments, but the author's writing is very in line with my taste. I've finished both books. Does the author have other books? I want to read them. I love reading them.

Nice! ! ! I really like the heroine's character and character

The character of the male protagonist has been mentioned before in this article. He is a pervert. He is a real pervert. He is the kind of pervert who is particularly perverted. I focus on a pervert. This article is really good, and it's really suitable for being in Begonia.

I'm a bitch and I love watching this kind of Mary Sue. The female protagonist is extremely beautiful and the male protagonist is very crazy [licking the screen] It's just that the author is too slow to update.

I just like the perverted male protagonist [Adoration] [Shyness], but I was transported to the next world halfway through the book. It felt quite uncomfortable because there was no ending.

Very nice, I like it very much

Love to watch! ! ! I really love this kind of craziness [licking the screen], perfectly hitting xp Sihasha [adoration][adoration][adoration]

It's rare to see a real passerby who logs off the system after completing a mission. The system I looked at in the past was like being a bastard, letting the protagonist do everything, and being called a passerby, and it was really annoying to go to work on his behalf. There are currently two small worlds in it. After completing the mission system, the protagonist will leave and enjoy his own life. Although because it is so good-looking, the male protagonist clings to the female protagonist like a licking dog. Not bad, let's see again

The writing is okay, and the heroine is also good. But the male protagonist is a crazy person, which is a bit unacceptable. I hope the next male protagonist won't be like this.

The main theme of Xiaobai's novel is robbery. The female protagonist has no characteristics and is just a gardenia-like female protagonist. She looks down on the male protagonist pua. The male protagonist wants to be paid one million a month for employer's insurance. Okay, no emotion. That's it. I feel lonely after reading this.

When reading heartthrob novels, what I dislike the most is the yandere novels, where they are imprisoned, forced to restrict dodder flowers, and so on. They are like raising a canary and have no sense of individuality. But this article is different. The male protagonist forces the female protagonist to give himself a knife or cut it on the wrist. Hiss, the bet is the sympathy and mercy of the female protagonist. The female protagonist is smart, hard-working and has a good legal awareness. If she finds someone with evil intentions, she will call the police immediately [Like] We all know that beauty without force value is very dangerous, but this article mostly writes about the good aspects. Everyone exudes goodwill, and some individuals with bad intentions are killed by the male protagonist. The male protagonist goes crazy from time to time. The system task is one sentence, one scene, and the task is simple. I really like such heart-throb stories, but this one is too new [crying], I haven't finished the second story yet, hurry up! More updates! !

The progress is too slow. Thirty or forty pictures are the most in a world. Don't write about quick travel if there are more.

I'm a little disappointed. The heroine is a bystander throughout the whole process, watching the hero live and die for her and bang against the wall for her. The heroine looks at it from a god's perspective, and occasionally gives some sweetness, just like a scumbag, which makes people uncomfortable. Maybe it's because of different concepts, so I don't like it very much!

I don't like her inexplicably. The heroine is too pretentious, which makes the author seem to be rebellious. She knows that ordinary people can't keep her appearance, so she is most suitable with the male protagonist. The male protagonist still likes her so much. It's not like ancient times. If you don't like her in the future, just leave. It's hypocritical. Why, you think in ancient times, you have to stick to it when you get married. What are you afraid of? If the male protagonist treats you badly in the future, just leave. This pretentiousness seems like the male protagonist is not worthy of her, and the female protagonist just has a good appearance, which is not born, and there are no other advantages.

It looks good, it looks good~ Is the author on annual vacation [I'm about to cry]

The writing style is really clean and neat, and beautiful🤩🤩Looking forward to the update [Love][Love][Love]

It's so well written, "his" character is so impressive. The male protagonist in the first world, the stalker, made my scalp numb when I watched it. Then the depression in this newly updated world also shocked me. Wow, has the author really seen it? Why did he write it so realistically?

This is a very nice book. The description is very detailed. The heroine becomes a beauty buff. It satisfies my stupid point of view and is biased towards men. The heroine is my own daughter. The writing is very good. The description of emotions and inner activities is very delicate. There is no particularly big conflict. The hero is self-guided. They all love the heroine deeply. I really like to read this kind of book with a little toilet. The writing style is very immature. The rating is 9➕. How can the teacher's score be so low? Woohoooooooooooooooooooo teacher update me soon

Great writing! Super delicate, but mass production is less!

It's very good-looking. In addition to being a heartthrob, the female protagonist has her own independent thoughts. She's not competitive with women, and the male protagonist's personality is also very attractive. But in real life, sisters must be careful. When encountering this kind of situation, the first thing to do is call the police. The main theme of the novel we read is exciting and perverted [cool]

It's super beautiful! (There's no way to describe this novel in simple words). It's another book that I've never finished and I love to read. This makes me feel more uncomfortable than having a shark.

I like stories where the heroine is in a high emotional position, and I hope they don't all end in HE. The hero is so lost in love that he can't get to the beach, which is my eternal XP.

It's very beautiful. The author has a good grasp of the scale. I especially like the enthusiastic and straightforward expression of the male protagonist, but it is not annoying and only feels sincere. There is also the second world where the female protagonist draws a small portrait of the male protagonist. I personally feel that it is just right, but the review is too inhumane. The wonderful description must have been deleted. I support the author very much. I hope you will never stop updating... Come on, come on, you are the best.

Wow, it's well written, at least it doesn't have any weird points about me.