I Transmigrated into a Fantasy World and Became Invincible, Making the Reborn Doubt Their Lives

I've read Chapter 7, and I feel like it's just average. Did you change someone to write the book? This protagonist smells like a protagonist. I remember your last book seemed to be about a villain protagonist, right? How did you rewrite it as protagonist versus protagonist? When you accept your first apprentice, why don't you use some special effects to make her think you are a living immortal? Just bring two cannon fodder boys up to tell their names, just like the cannon fodder villains in the novice village. The price is reduced, and the words are a bit white. You, the protagonist, must be elegant and domineering. It's not serious + a bit funny, which makes me feel a little uncomfortable. I've seen too many villains and protagonists, and I feel a little uncomfortable with the protagonist. The training system is a bit messy. It feels like martial arts + traditional immortal cultivation. Did you really change the writing? Small families are outdated, right? There is a problem with this kind of small family at the beginning. What will happen after the protagonist wakes up? Leave directly? Isn't it a bit heartless? Become stronger with your family? It would be a long time in the novice village, and it would be okay to accept a female apprentice and just be a master and apprentice, but it would be a bit uncomfortable to accept a male apprentice. The protagonist feels that he is neither the opposite nor the right. He is not like a villain but has a reborn protagonist. In the end, the protagonist wins. This kind of thing is like a villain again, and it becomes chaotic 🤦

How can the protagonist be sure that his uncle will not be killed by his enemies if he does not have the power to monitor the entire town? The courage Liang Jingru gave you? And let the protagonist's father pretend to delay the enemy to invite the protagonist? Rub the villain's IQ on the floor. This is