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It's good-looking, and the biggest highlight is that it's fast-paced, but the descriptions are all there should be, and it doesn't appear to be a running account or verbose. It's rare for someone to write a fast plot while also taking into account both rhythm and details. The author is pretty good in this regard. At the same time, because the plot develops quickly, there are always exciting points. The reading experience is very good, but there are too few updates. Come on, the author.

Is the author new? I feel that the writing style and writing style are very similar to those of the old author. It's so beautiful! ! !

The writing is quite good, and it's omniscient, but the pace is too fast. I can introduce technology, such as the combination of magic and technology. You don't need to just get a blueprint to create it. In terms of war, I feel like the other side can't seize the air superiority, so why not use some helicopters, planes, or aerial gunships. You can also get some missile support, such as JB-2 rockets, rocket launchers, and Katyusha, too. However, the protagonist's high-end combat power is a bit lacking. There are 7 legendaries and 2 protagonists on the opposite side. There should be a trick, such as dual cultivation.

It's well written, but don't interrupt it or make it unfinished. I'll save it for now and read it when I have time! !

I can only say good luck to you. In the early stage, buddy, you went straight to AK. You didn't consider the logistics at all. The machine tools and other things were all made by the female dragon with magic. Several military industries produce hundreds of AK per day. I read the comments and said that the artillery seems to be a breech-loaded cannon but uses solid shells👈😄

It looks good, but it's mindless and cool! It's the kind of thing that can be read with some brainpower. I just like to watch the torrent of steel conquering a magical world. However, Alicia's attitude towards the protagonist has always been weird in the early stage. This is not good, but the others are very good and beautiful! ! !

It looks good, every place is just right, everything that should be killed is killed, and nothing that shouldn't be killed is not killed. I didn't even see a woman. The only thing I'm a little confused about is that the industry is developing a bit fast. I hope the author will update it soon.

Does the protagonist want to be a dragon knight?

I like it, but not enough

This is my first time watching this type of genre. Come on, it's generally pretty good. It's quite boring. The main character can't walk when he meets a girl. If she's pretty, she'll stop [face covering]

Two problems. First, the emotional drama progresses too slowly. Second, the war is advancing too fast.

Without him, look how many hours I have been reading [Thinking]

There are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people. I personally think this novel is very interesting!

Yes, the lord writing written by a novice is indeed very good, and the pace develops very quickly. The image of each character is also very distinctive. I have read the latest chapter, there is no poison or any discomfort. Well, first of all, it's much better than many other world lord books that show a harem but are actually eunuchs. Secondly, the names of the characters are all close to Western names, and it feels strange that they can't say their names. Third, there are very few typos in the article. It can be said that the rules are ignored, which is really good. Let's talk about the bad points. The first is the title of this book. It really doesn't feel very good. It doesn't make people eye-catching or have the idea of ​​​​clicking in immediately. Second, it would be great if there could be a picture of the heroine that would allow readers to imagine it clearly. The third is that the development of modern technology or advanced technology is indeed very good and the pace is moderate. However, when developing the lord text, I still hope to integrate more with the West, or that the technology of this era will be better. The above is my opinion on this book. It is indeed a book worth reading. Although the score is indeed low now, I think the score will gradually increase in the future. I still hope that the author can persevere.

This book is very nice.

It's pretty good, please come on, author.

Come on, don't cut it

It's very interesting, good luck to the author!

Not bad, it looks fine so far.

Good-looking, pure farming writing

It's okay. I hope the protagonist is not a eunuch.

It's very beautiful and interestingly written.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The development is pretty good, but the love story is a bit too much. I give Industrial War 4 points, but I personally think that there are too many descriptions of female characters, so I'll take one point off. The overall view is a bit low, so I'll take one off.

It's okay, the style is a bit similar to the book "Release the Witch"

Carry forward the will of great men more. I really like this kind of history of struggle.

The author can be more imaginative and combine magic with technology. After all, something that can be taken continuously from the air is definitely better than something that is limited and highly polluting [laughter]

Do it quickly, do it quickly, the pace is okay, and the protagonist is not deliberately suppressed.

It's a good book, but not many people have read it. Maybe it's because the title is too discouraging.