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Okay, pretty good. Bland details can actually highlight a better feeling. I think this is the advantage of this work. Maybe he doesn't highlight the more crazy situation of a yandere, but the melancholy and elegant feeling is also good. Rather than being crazy, it is also a pleasure to enjoy flower viewing if you try this occasionally. At the same time, I think I can add some more details to it. For example, facing a pool~water, I think I can describe it more accurately. The protagonist's feelings towards Chi Shui and Sister Luo are completely different, you know? There are some minor quirks. I hope the author will continue to work hard and fill in the gaps. Come on!

The front part is too complicated to write, but the back part is quite interesting. There are too many descriptors in the front part, so I suggest you skip reading. The protagonist's personality is still very awesome, and the portrayal is very good.

The plot arrangement can be said to be very good. This book can be said to be good in every aspect, except for the slow update and the author writing too many unnecessary descriptions. Although it looks very good and very gorgeous, if there are too many of these things, it will feel very cumbersome. Some places you describe are not very correct, such as badminton. Sometimes, don't describe too much, as it will reveal your own lack of understanding of something or some words. There is also the issue of spelling the wrong name that I have been complaining about.

So in the final analysis, is it a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists? [Thinking][what]

The writing is very delicate and beautiful!

Although this book has few chapters, it has been on my bookshelf for 140 days. The author has rarely updated or even stopped updating for a while, but I still keep it. This just shows that the author's writing is not bad. It really suits my taste and the details are very good.

Me who has lost my feelings? [What] looks similar, the writing is okay

The author writes a good book, come on, don't work too hard [laughs][laughs]

Generally speaking, it's okay

Isn't this a bit explosive?

Well enough. But I still like the third person. It's awkward to see it in the first person

This novel has been deleted and a lot of content is missing.

I really like the protagonist who is able to survive, is alive, can resist, and can resist.

The author writes well, keep up the good work [eating melon] [like]

Can you write less songs? That song takes more than one chapter to write.

Hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey

It's super beautiful, the details are well written, and the male protagonist's personality is also very good. I quietly said that he is a scheming yandere.

If you insist on updating it every day, it will definitely be a good book. If the update speed were as fast as before, I would have given up long ago. Update faster and it will definitely become popular.

How can I put it... The description part of the song always gives me a feeling of icing on the cake. Then as for the plot, it's more ordinary and dull, with long and flowing prose, which is okay.

It's okay, Xuan

Author, you are too slow to update, damn it. Why are you acting like a great God? Damn, this card is so accurate.

Good, good, good, good

Come on yeah yeah yeah

Very interesting. I like this book very much.

I remember there was a sister character, but why can't I find it? Did I remember it wrong?

No matter what, at least it looks good when I see it now, good luck to the author! And worth recommending! [Blowing kiss]

It's a little dull in the early stages, but after 900 pages it starts to get a bit OK, come on kid [OK]

It feels actually good