Travel Through the Stolen Pen and Haitang Knows What I Mean

It's good to watch, but the relationship between the male and female protagonists is very abrupt and the progress is very jumpy.

It's beautiful. 6.9 Points is a bit too low. It deserves 9 points. The logic is clear, the sentences are smooth, the frame structure is very good, the character settings are not deviated and are very good-looking, and the final ending is not bad. It would be nice to have a few more children. I want Xiaohua to have more children to make up for the regret. After all, he is the only one in the Jie family's generation, and his life is not very good. It would be great if he had more children and grandchildren! ! ! ! !

I think this book is okay overall, but I'm a little disappointed that some of Jie Yuchen's actions in this book don't match his character, and are very OOC. However, the heroine's inner words and Xie Yuchen's interaction are quite interesting. I haven't finished reading this book and only read about twenty chapters, so the evaluation may not be accurate. Maybe the author's subsequent plot will be more interesting. The above only represents my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it, thank you! I hope the author will continue to work hard ＾0＾~

The detailed arrangement may be a bit inappropriate. I feel that the description of the relationship between the heroine and Xiaohua is average, but it is also very interesting. It is a very different fanfic. Come on!

Very nice, come on

Why is the rating so low? I think it's pretty good? The heroine is originally a sweetheart character. I haven't had any affairs with other men either.

Please keep updating the author, it's very interesting, I like it [laughs]

Overall, it's very good-looking. Although it has some flaws, sometimes it makes it even more brilliant. The author is great. I'm glad to meet you here. I hope I can meet you again next time.

It's good to read, good luck to the author [like][like][like][like][like]

It's so beautiful, please give it a thumbs up, author

Big, come on! Another different version.

Very beautiful, cheers!

It's nice to look at, but there are very few details about love.

It's nice to watch, but there's too little description of the emotional line. I can't feel that they are a couple.

The subject matter is very novel. This is the first time I read a fan fiction as a bystander, but I don't interfere too much with the original plot. Listening to the heart is the core of the whole novel + bugs. The heroine is not a virgin, nor does she do evil. She is an ideal and suitable partner for Xiaohua, which is good.

It's good-looking, but I think the emotional lines are a bit lacking, but it's still very good-looking [Blowing Kiss]

It's very nice, but I give it four stars. Finally someone feels sorry for me, Xiaohua

The book "Family" is really good. I like this book very much. I hope the author can add the interaction between the heroine and Xiaohua. I also hope the author will not rush the ending, otherwise I will be really sad😢

Not bad, good-looking, good-looking

Good-looking, big ✿✿ヽ(°▽°)ノ✿

Beautiful, warm and exciting

There are a bit few emotional scenes between Mr. Krabs and the heroine, but everything else is okay.

I feel like the ending is the heroine's fantasy. In fact, they didn't come back.

Finally there is a book with a happy ending for ordinary people

For someone like me who loves skipping chapters! I didn't skip this one! Very, very beautiful

Come on, Dada. I like it very much. The ending is also very heartwarming. I hope Dada will update it soon.

The author's writing is super good! The author should be more beautiful! Love to watch.

Gaga looks good! The author will update it soon [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

It's not bad. There aren't that many emotional scenes, but the conversational scenes are okay.

Super pretty