Till the End of the Moon: Clothes Like Clouds

The characters' personalities have been processed to a certain extent, making their strengths and weaknesses more prominent (all characters are much more three-dimensional and likable than the original). As for Bingshang from the main perspective, the author did not weaken her selfish, cold and suspicious side (after all, her growing environment was extremely deformed and harsh, so this character can be regarded as a kind of self-protection), but it also highlighted her side of constant struggle for survival and strong vitality. I also like other characters in the article, such as Xiao Lin who is decisive in addition to benevolence and righteousness (the scene where the gentleman forces the palace is very cool), such as Li Susu who can face his own selfishness (honest about his selfishness towards TTJ, and will do things that are not in line with his identity and mission for this love), etc. Compared to the original work with all the villains, this fanfic has no competition, the characters are three-dimensional, not limited to small romances, and each has its own way, which is very interesting. The second time I read it, I realized that there is another great thing about this fanfic, that is, there is a real "dialogue" between the characters standing on opposite sides. In many novels (not just fan fiction), the point of view of the main character becomes the author's mouthpiece, overriding the opinions of all other characters (the protagonist is justice). But many of the dialogues in this fanfic are very effective. The most typical one is the dispute between Ye Bingshang and Li Susu, which revolves around "selfishness, Taoism, divinity" and so on. Readers can see their two different viewpoints and positions. As the daughter of the First Phoenix and a monk, Li Susu is destined to find it difficult to transcend class and truly understand the suffering of mortals; similarly, as a mortal, Ye Bingshang also finds it difficult to understand Li Susu's Taoist heart. They may not necessarily or may never reach a complete reconciliation, but they have some understanding of each other's point of view during the dispute. This is a "dialogue" between the two characters, rather than the author's unilateral output of opinions. The girls in this book all have their own highlights, and their interactions are also very exciting (Bingshang, Susu, Sang Jiu, Tianhuan and the younger sister in the article). This is what I like very much. In the original work, the female supporting characters (Bingshang/Lanyin/Zhao Yun'er, etc.) Are obviously written as buffoons or foils, used as tools to reflect the protagonist's strengths. Of course, some Bingshang fans also have similar problems. Not in this article, but I really like the interaction between Su Su and Bingshang.

No, is the layout of this book so big? [Shocked]

This book is really well-structured. I am not good at writing and can only say "good". I highly recommend reading it!! Ye Bingshang in it is a, um, somewhat contradictory person, but his character really poked me. And it mostly talks about the great cause of the family and the country, and the pattern is really big!! Nice

It's quite different from the show, but the characters have distinct personalities. The story is told with clear logic, and there is a sense of compassion between the lines. I especially like the tenacity of Ye Bingshang's struggle to make progress!

Author, you write so well. This is the most wonderful Chang Yue Jinming fanfic I have ever read. There is love, but it is not just love. Especially the female characters, you can feel the depth of the characters [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Awesome. The writing is really good, as if you have read a book.

Very well written, I like Tian Huan very much

Very good, my Bingshang is fine in another world and has a different life, but Xiao Lin is still dead 😢

This book is well written and the characters are well-developed. I hope to read more.

The angle of the story is quite novel, and the portrayal of human nature is quite outstanding.