Don't Be Close to the Red Beans and Embrace the Lovesickness

After reading it, I listened to the first four chapters and read the rest. I really hope that the heroine's life after falling into the human world will be like "Menghualu", and she will meet the immortal king who is willing to fall into the mortal world for her, and at this time the other person is also an ordinary man. The author's diction is beautiful and his prose flows smoothly, and his daily writing is particularly lovely. Next time, make it longer... Put some pressure on yourself. After all, the setting of the Three Realms of Immortals and Demons is quite large. You can write a long story, and the more you write, the more powerful it will be... I love you [love] [love] [love]

The author's writing is smooth, and with a single word of love, the male protagonist and the female protagonist experience three lives. Although it has a sad ending, fortunately, they still have a daughter. The story has twists and turns, the plot is compact, the characters are three-dimensional, and the content is full of romance. The red bean design at the end reminds people of Wang Wei's poem: Red beans are born in the south, and a few branches will grow when spring comes. I hope you will pick more of them, this is the most loved thing.

The thinking is clear and delicate. The writer is carefully painting each ink painting. The story is wonderful. It seems that you can see the writer's heart, or you are carefully creating each wonderful plot beside you. Such a well-intentioned story will definitely be updated. Writer, thank you for your hard work. Take care of yourself [Like]

After reading this book I can only say nb! The author's writing style is so good. Both the character description and the plot transition are perfect. The passage from immortal to human is really invincible. Learned writing! ! [Top post][top post][top post]

Good works are always like a clear pool, which can not only reveal the texture of life, but also reflect the folds of the human heart. The most rare thing about this work is the exquisite attention to detail - perhaps the curvature of the protagonist's fingertips unconsciously rubbing the rim of the cup, or the smell of sunlight floating in the air in a certain scene. Every part is so solid that it feels like you can reach out and touch it. The plot is neat and concise, with no unnecessary side branches, but the story is told with ups and downs in a limited space, as natural as breathing. The protagonist is no longer a name on the paper. The lines in his frown, the habit of tilting his head slightly when speaking, and even the hesitations of unspoken words are all as vivid as if he will walk out of the page in the next second and sit across from you and sigh. The most poignant thing is those delicate emotions, not outbursts, but undercurrents hidden in the movement of eyes and the weight of footsteps. As I read it, I laughed with him and became sore with him. This kind of work makes you feel entertained when you read it and is unforgettable after reading it. It is really good. The description is delicate and true, and the details are well grasped; the storyline is also concise and not sloppy; the protagonist is very vivid, as if he is a real person, with delicate and rich emotions. Super pretty

This is an excellent novel. The author depicts a world full of fantasy for readers through delicate writing and wonderful plots. The fascinating emotional story in the novel is one of its highlights, and it is also what I think is most worth recommending. The emotional line between the protagonist and the heroine of the novel is even more touching. The two encountered countless hardships and obstacles along the way, but they never gave up their trust and support for each other. This sincere emotion left a deep impression on people. In addition, there are many other story lines in the novel, each of which is well described. The author strings together a rich emotional line through these other stories, organically connecting the various characters in the novel together, making the whole story more full and three-dimensional. Overall, this is an emotional novel well worth reading. It not only has a wonderful plot and profound cultural heritage, but more importantly, it can bring readers thoughts and insights about the novel. If you like fantasy novels and are interested in emotional stories, then this book is not to be missed.

Nice! ! ! Very nice! ! ! The author writes very well! ! ! Really, this book is so beautiful, the writing is very good and beautiful, and the author's level is so high! ! ! The plot is also very compact. To be honest, I have never read such a good novel! ! !

Langxuan lost half his life for the sake of the sentient beings in the three realms. The Emperor of Heaven was a fierce general, Langxuan, and he also performed the courtesy of a monarch and his ministers. Langxuan eradicated future troubles for the Emperor of Heaven. Finally, he returns to the mortal world and knows his destiny - the author's wonderful writing is still full of ideas, and he continues to prepare to read new works.

The author's writing style is delicate, and when you read it, you feel like a long stream of water. Sometimes love does not need to move the heavens and the earth. It feels good to simply tell a story with this kind of eloquence [Sending Hearts] [Learned] [Learned]

The author's writing style is very good. When I read it for the first time, I felt that I had entered a mysterious and mysterious realm. In short, it was just two words. "Awesome!"

This is my first time reading a novel about cultivating immortals. The author's descriptions are very detailed and beautiful [Love] It's really good, but the ending is very emotional. The male protagonist is a god and has responsibilities that need to be shouldered... In short, it is highly recommended.

The characters are vivid, the writing is beautiful, the emotional and psychological descriptions are delicate, the picture is strong, excellent! After reading it carefully, I still have more to say!

A very wonderful novel, both in terms of character creation and plot design. I must give the author a big thumbs up.

This book is good. The author is knowledgeable, the writing is fluent, and the story is compact. I like it!

This article is very delicately written, and the plot and narrative are remarkable, but the number of words is too few. I'll catch up when the new book is released. Come on, author!

It's so good that I stayed up all night watching it

A rare good book, the writing is first-class, the reading is smooth, the characters are full of pictures, and the plots are one after another, which makes people want to stop reading. Keep reading.

It's a very interesting article. I read it in one sitting. Come on! [Smile][smile]

The writing is very good, the reader is very real, and the author is attentive [Like]

The novel is very exciting, why doesn't anyone read it? I am the first comment to make the author popular and cheers for the author. The plot is very exciting and the protagonist is vividly described. Highly recommended.

Wow, another excellent book. The writing is delicate and the rhythm is tight. I think it will be popular. I will take a seat first.

I haven't read enough. It's a pity that 100,000 words is finished. I'll write another one. I still want to read it.

Zhu Yuren is so good, I look forward to seeing him turn dark.

A very nice novel. The author's writing style is very good and the plot is compact.

Cultivation to immortality and love, if the two love lasts for a long time, how can it last day and night? The love story of cultivating immortality is delicate.

The author's writing is good, the plot is compact, the logic is clear, the characters are vividly described, and the characters' morphological characteristics are well grasped, which is very contagious.

The plot is compact, not verbose, and the writing is exquisite. Good writing is rare.

Starting from the origin, it is very interesting, with novel ideas, smooth and delicate writing!

The story is exciting, the writing is smooth, and the characters are well developed. I look forward to subsequent updates.

The author's writing is beautiful and his descriptions are delicate. The plot of the novel is compact and the structure is logically designed. Good luck to the author, I recommend it.