On a Stormy Night

The writing was a bit scattered at first, with too much pen and ink in some places. If the plot of the story develops simultaneously and the protagonist is more prominent, it will be fascinating and exciting! However, your author may also have grown up in a rural area, and may also have experience in military life. His writing is more down-to-earth and artistically reflects the real life of that era. Many places are written in reverse order, which is great! It must be a debut novel after all, and I wish the author will write better works in the future!