Liu He, the son of Liu Yu in the Three Kingdoms period, is unsystematic and his style leans towards ancient prose. A sense of history! I hope you all like it, a novice writer. If there are any shortcomings, I hope you can correct them.
Reader comments
I can only say that it's okay, but I guess it's similar to other books about traveling through the Three Kingdoms. It's not interesting. It's just the same as before. It's boring to just do things after traveling through the Three Kingdoms. It's uncomfortable to read the article in sections.
The dialogue doesn't even have punctuation, it's tiring to watch, and you can't even segment it?
A written account! Sometimes the writing is clever, and sometimes I think the protagonist is too stupid! ! The layout, the paragraphs are too long, hard to read, and the punctuation is misused! !
You can bump into whomever you look for, and the people you bump into casually are historical celebrities.
I don't understand. If you want to dominate the world and you don't learn martial arts, how can you fight with your mouth? I can't stand it anymore.
I can only say that it's okay, but I guess it's similar to other books about traveling through the Three Kingdoms. It's not interesting. It's just the same as before. It's boring to just do things after traveling through the Three Kingdoms. It's uncomfortable to read the article in sections.
The dialogue doesn't even have punctuation, it's tiring to watch, and you can't even segment it?
A written account! Sometimes the writing is clever, and sometimes I think the protagonist is too stupid! ! The layout, the paragraphs are too long, hard to read, and the punctuation is misused! !
You can bump into whomever you look for, and the people you bump into casually are historical celebrities.
I don't understand. If you want to dominate the world and you don't learn martial arts, how can you fight with your mouth? I can't stand it anymore.