
When Jasmine Blooms
当茉莉花开时
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- Eastern Fantasy
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As of Chapter 267. It's a very good Japanese-style Western fantasy novel. There are no major flaws, and the writing style is very close to that of Nikkei. Out of 5 points, I give it 4 points. One point for Jasmine, the healing little lolita. The author's description of Jasmine in the article is spot-on and completely in line with my beautiful fantasy about lolita. One point for Xiaomi Congee, my favorite character, innocent and lively, ignorant loli and so on are the best! (Cross out) One point to Luminara. She is worthy of the name of a brave person. She is confident but not arrogant, humble but not inferior. She is in line with the setting of the brave central air conditioner in traditional novels. She can be said to be a real virgin. One point for gluttony, simple bad breath, and witty enjoyment. But I have to deduct a point because of the main character Su Bei. To be honest, I didn't find anything interesting about the protagonist, or in other words, there wasn't any merit. It's not that the protagonist is not strong enough and is not good for everyone in the protagonist group. This guy's ability to withstand pressure is really outrageous. Paying tribute to the legendary pressure-resistant Wang Laosu is not a joke. But what I'm talking about is the core of the protagonist. A novel can be fascinating and make people want to read it because readers will have a sense of involvement in it and become involved with the protagonist, heroine, supporting characters, and even villains, passers-by, and bystanders. The core of a good novel is to make the character "alive" so that the reader feels that he is not a character written by the author, but a living person. Among them, supporting roles such as Jasmine, Luminara, Xiaomi Porridge, and Gluttony are all very good. But I can't feel any "characteristics" from the protagonist Su Bei. For example, from the very beginning of the novel, the protagonist has been leveling up and trying to survive, assassinating the Demon King, until he meets Jasmine. Then because of Jasmine's "breaks" time and time again, he changes from killing the Demon King and surviving to protecting Jasmine and becoming stronger to survive. How should I put it? You can't say that he did not do well. On the contrary, he did very well. If it were me, I might not be able to persist. But the protagonist is so persistent. He was like a piece of cold iron. He was warmed only when he met Jasmine. The rest of the time he was cold and not like a human being. Like those featureless assembly line protagonists in novels. I forgot which chapter it was. In it, the hero Luminara's evaluation of the protagonist is roughly that he is a cold and heartless person who regards everyone except Jasmine as a tool, whether it is millet porridge, Gluttony, or Elena. It can be seen from the return of Xiaomi Porridge in Chapter 264 and the completely different Elena in Chapter 265. To be serious, the protagonist does not regard anyone other than Jasmine as a human being at all. "Thank you for your hard work." Su Bei was the first to express concern. Elena sat carelessly in front of Su Bei, drank the tea poured in front of her, and turned her head to look at Su Bei. Chapter 265 describes it this way: "Thank you for your hard work." Su Bei was the first to express concern. Elena sat carelessly in front of Su Bei, drank the tea poured in front of her, and turned her head to look at Su Bei. Suddenly he laughed. This smile made Su Bei feel that the old Elena was back. "It's so perfunctory. If you really care about me, why don't you go to the medical team to see me? Is it a long way?" Elena didn't look at Su Bei, but stared straight at the tea in front of her, and suddenly asked. "Is it possible that I can't find time for a week?" Su Bei was stunned, paused, and seemed a little speechless. This is the reason why I don't like the protagonist. I know that he is difficult. He faces greater difficulties than anyone in the protagonist group, but he carries everything on his own first, instead of thinking or trying to rely on others. Of course I know that the protagonist is socially anxious, and I am also socially anxious in reality, but the key point is that if the protagonist cannot change his character and blindly depicts the image of social terror, sooner or later it will be over. Of course, I also know that it is inappropriate for me to evaluate this novel without reading it. What if the protagonist changes in the next chapter? So I'm also looking forward to seeing what kind of tricks the protagonist can do for me. As of Chapter 472. The supporting characters are perfectly portrayed, and the protagonist is a mess. I really don't understand. Author, do you think the male protagonist's tough-minded, straight-hearted character is really lovable? From Chapter 1 to Chapter 472, the protagonist will utter some outrageous remarks from time to time. Whether it is "Your father is dead" when facing Elena from the beginning or "You are crazy" to Jasmine from time to time, it is very speechless. Yes, I know that the protagonist you set is social fear, but social fear is not this kind of social fear, right? This is a complete lack of emotional intelligence. You would only say something like "your father is dead" in that situation if you are crazy, right? This is the first poisonous point. Not everyone likes this kind of character with no emotional intelligence and no brains. Second, as I said in the first evaluation, the male protagonist is a bit too inappropriate as a human being. Except for Jasmine, he doesn't treat anyone else as a human being at all, right? The male protagonist has been trying to use teammates like Lilizi, Lin, Elena, and Xiaomi Congee from the very beginning, but using them at the beginning is using them, but you can't keep using them, right? Is Ririko good enough for the male protagonist? That means giving him everything. Although he complained, he never refused the male protagonist, but what about the male protagonist? Throw it away after using it. Whether it is Ririko or Lin, they are both good enough to the male protagonist, right? But what do you think the male protagonist's attitude is? What are you going to do with your non-active, irresponsible, and non-rejecting attitude? Even if you, the author, want to write a drama where the protagonist actually lacks emotion, you have to reconcile the contradiction a little bit, right? You can't catch that, okay? If you are not prepared in the early stage, even if you reverse in the later stage, the reversal will appear too abrupt. If it is handled well, it will be an advantage. If it is not handled well, it will be a big poison. What is the difference between him and those male protagonists in ancient times? Let me put it more seriously. You say that you don't like them, that it's just a cooperative relationship, and you have no feelings for them, but later you accept all their benefits and kick them away after using them. What does your character of being both responsible and upright mean? What's the difference between you and those scumbags? Just use them all, except for Jasmine, no one is human. The final interpretation right of this evaluation belongs to me.
It's a very good book, and it's well handled in all aspects. There are no inexplicable plots, and there are foreshadowings. But I don't know why not many people have read it. It's a highly recommended book. The author's logic skills are pretty good. If you're tired of reading novels produced by assembly lines, you might as well give this book a try.
The author's writing style is excellent, and the subject matter of this article is also relatively novel. The character's personality is well established and the personality changes are natural. What I want to say most is that I hope Jasmine will always be so cute and never stab her [pouts]. The character of this character is too similar to the female goose in a game I played. She shouldn't be too cute, okay? [Shy][shy][shy] It was too bland and made me feel like I had seen everything at a glance. I can barely pass the time without reading, but I already have better books. Let me talk about another question I have, why can Jasmine and the brave have a direct discussion and shake hands peacefully? Why does Jasmine think it would be better for her to vote for her original country? If the current country has suppressed everything, is Jasmine important? What does she have to make peace with the Empire? By the protagonist? This is my puzzle
On Tomato, I think this article is very good. After getting used to reading all kinds of clichéd articles with extremely poor writing skills, it is definitely an unexpected surprise to find this book in the sea of books. The characters are not likeable, but at least they are normal. They have a good feeling. I will keep up the good work.
Each character is well developed. Su Bei is really the king of resistance to pressure! Fifty thousand years of redemption is heartbreaking. The beauty within reach cannot be grasped in the palm of one's hand, and one can only watch the gems hurt themselves like glass. At the end, I also congratulate Su Bei and Jasmine! However, there are still some flaws in the ending, which can be forgiven. However, I still have to praise the author's foreshadowing throughout the entire text.
The plot is light and compact but not tense. It feels a bit like a light novel. It's good to read for leisure. I haven't seen any weird flaws so far. I found out that there was no rating so I clicked on it after reading it.
I have to give it now... The traditional hero fights the devil, but it's different The intervention of the protagonist as an outsider opens the "second episode" of the story From living for yourself to living for the people around you, redeeming yourself while saving others, making her the light in your heart, this is the true two-way redemption! "There are no coincidences in this world. Everything is a decision of fate. I will meet you. It is destined." I don't know if it's one or more at the moment, but as far as I'm concerned, it's very comfortable for me to watch, so it doesn't matter if it's one or more, it's just good-looking~ Recently, I really like IPs like Demon King and Heroes, and the books also suit my taste. The author's writing is very good, worth reading @ a waste a (You are so rude, the position of the next dragon is mine~)
The plot is not bad, and there are both bright and dark pits. People will not be confused while watching it, and they will not directly guess the ending. It makes people interested in watching. The only bad thing is that there are too few and not enough to watch (author, please update soon!)
He is really, so gentle, not all the coldness is underneath the emptiness of nothing. Still has the softness and skill of warm water The book is really beautiful. What's even better is that I've had it for a long time and can read it happily again. How should I say good night to you, wanan, why not wa ai ni He warms and I cry, The details are appropriate in the exquisite plot, just like on that sunny morning, under the locust tree, old friends for many years have made tea, laid out chess, and are waiting for you to play chess and chat. Or at night, you and your lover lie in bed, listen to his/her breathing, and fall asleep slowly and quietly. It's beautiful and comfortable, just like gentleness should be. Highly recommended, five-star rating.
A good book that exceeds the upper limit of five points, and is currently in the part of ending and continuing to daily life. All reincarnations are for meeting you. My heart, body and soul are all born and exist because of you. Even if I lose all my memory and strength, I will find you at all costs. Our future does not only belong to the present, it also exists in the past and the future. The fragrance of jasmine flowers blends with the smell of green grass and sawdust, spreading throughout the space, flowing in the long river of time and destiny. Complex emotions are born from love, possessing the wisdom of a lifetime, transcending death, creating life, blending in light and darkness, freely appearing in Wherever the heart desires, it brings luck to all living beings. There is also each other in the reaction of the elements. They are at the pinnacle of martial arts. The fate of people from other worlds intersects with this world. The brave man and the devil no longer fight. The world is not afraid of external pollution, just to write about the encounter between you and me. Know each other, know each other, and love each other. The story of Jasmine and Su Bei will be passed down forever. It is not only about saving the world, but also about two people falling in love and sharing the world. Finally finished, finished with flowers
The writing is solid and the descriptions are detailed. This is by no means an ordinary article, you can give it a try. The author is very nice. To add more, more, more. This book is in a vigorous posture, ready to spread its wings and soar. I invite you to enjoy the colorful writing.
Generally speaking, there is nothing toxic. The protagonist is sober, the supporting characters are also sober, and there is no emotional line that is forced by misunderstanding. It is very good. And then, this is the first time I have seen a book written by an author that has not been rated enough by thousands of people [laughing] I forgot to give you a bad review. My friend saw that the protagonist will only marry one person, and the others are just for teasing. [Laughing]
The talented writing style, golden situations that can be seen everywhere, the interesting plot, the creation of characters, and the advancement of the story all reflect the author's strong writing skills. The interaction between the princess and the male protagonist reminds people of other novels, but the language in it brings back this novel and makes people sink into it. All in all, it is very worth reading. It is quite rare in Tomato. I will regret it for a day after watching it, and regret it for a year if I don't watch it. It is very good to watch, the plot is very vivid, and very interesting. The only flaw is the plague. The early and middle stages of the mainland are not that interesting, and it is easy to give up. As long as you survive this short period, you can basically continue to watch. The writing of that short period is a bit strange. I can only say that the character setting is very distinct, and the process of the protagonist's transformation is very anime-like. It makes people feel like watching anime. The ubiquitous memes give a strong sense of substitution. It is a masterpiece worth watching.
Very good. I can use this word to describe this book. From the beginning of the male protagonist holding a tetanus knife to holding a magic sword pointing at the demigods and plotting against the gods, it seems that the male protagonist's transformation from a socially fearful personality has gone smoothly. The shortcomings in the front can also be transformed into advantages in the back. It really makes me feel comfortable. Although the foreshadowing is sometimes not very clear, the mystery of how it develops is also filled in. To be honest, the goddess of wisdom in this chapter is definitely the best one to describe (personal opinion). From the beginning, she has made many sacrifices for the male protagonist to leave safely. Who is not moved by this? Also, if the author of this lineup gives a single female lead, I will take back all my praise.
Let's make a long review. (I have read it for the second time and the reading time can be checked) This book is not a traditional brave devil novel that involves reincarnation and other aspects, so I won't spoil the details. This book has a lot of foreshadowings and twists, and the main theme is relaxed and daily life, but the main plot is also quite exciting, and the interaction between the male and female protagonists is also wonderful. The plot is quite creative, and some of the main pitfalls have been filled in. According to the author, the extras will be filled in. Generally speaking, the logic is self-consistent, but there are no particularly big poisonous points. It just needs to use the brain more in the later stage, but this does not mean that it is quite high quality. In my opinion, this novel is really one of the best in the western fantasy genre. I have read countless light novels, and few of them can be read thoroughly. But this novel left me haunted, and I felt so lost after reading it. It is very strange. I hope the author will write more extras. The extras are really good, but if it doesn't work, you can just write a highlight post. Hey, it would be better if you complete the protagonist's life experience. Everyone has their own preferences for radish and cabbage. If it doesn't suit your taste, you can choose not to read it, because this is a relatively niche novel type. Don't attack wantonly in the comment area.
It's a good book. Well, the author writes it well. The only shortcoming may be that there is only one female protagonist in the new year. It's not a shortcoming. Some people like it. In fact, I also like the single female protagonist. Just this book, because it is a theme of a time-traveling second game, um, the author writes all the female characters quite well. From my perspective, seeing multiple female protagonists, it may be a little more comfortable for the senses. That does not mean that she has a problem with a single female protagonist. It is absolutely fine. I have also read this kind of subject, um, it is also a demon king and warrior type. Um, the big difference is that most of the female characters in that book are either, um, paired with a partner , or the comparison of character creation, unlike those who like male protagonists, it is the obvious kind of single female protagonist, but there are also many female characters. What can I say about this book? In fact, it can be seen that the male protagonist only likes Jasmine. But in some descriptions, such as the idiot saint, and the Brave Holy Light incident in the recent chapter, it makes people feel that there is a possibility of multiple female protagonists? And cats, cats like it, hehe. Hmm, no, Maomao's writing is pretty good, and she relies more on Jasmine. Well, in terms of look and feel, she also has the potential to be a heroine. I feel like she might be writing in the style of wanting to be a daughter. From a subjective point of view, I feel that it is completely okay to have multiple female protagonists in this book, and it is relatively unconventional. There are very few people who have a harem and can write more naturally. Of course there is no problem with having a single heroine, Jasmine is cute. Maybe the two-dimensional nature of charming men requires more interactions with female characters, and it doesn't mean that they need to keep a distance from the male protagonist. I just hope that more aspects of her character can be portrayed. You can write about the relationship between other characters. The stupid saint is basically redeemed by the male protagonist. Then you may open a harem like other themes. You have a single heroine with only Jasmine. What should you do with this saint? It is to create a feeling in people's hearts. She has feelings for the male protagonist. It does not mean that she likes or is grateful, but at least she has special feelings. And this kind of redemption is difficult to turn around, either by treating it coldly (downplaying the character and emotions. However, in the author's setting, the saint is half-human and half-god, and has no emotions. It seems that she can just ignore it, or it can be called adapting to the development of the plot. What to write if there is no special emotion? There is no emotion in the author's setting!) However, the author often writes that the saint also has some real behaviors, which are obvious human emotions. I think the single heroine should have to deal with her, right? Of course, if you write about her posting with a brave man, that would be acceptable to everyone. Who doesn't like girls posting? Also, in the newer chapters, the hero is happy and is seen by the male protagonist. Well, in other books, this is an obvious harem expansion plot. Here, it may be necessary to promote the development of the plot, but it is a classic, a classic within a classic. I subconsciously feel that there is an emotional line, uh, it should be something that needs to be dealt with. In short, it is very troublesome and a very troublesome thing. If you want to have a single female protagonist in the second game genre, you need to be able to deal with the emotional direction of other women. If you don't write it from the beginning, it will be a muddy content, which is easy to say without misunderstanding. Or, like the Amani at the beginning, although there is some content, the character is downplayed, and people will not take this character seriously at the beginning. But for these subsequent characters, the main plot accounts for a large proportion, and if it involves emotional involvement, it feels difficult to handle. Of course, the male protagonist's feelings in this book are very clear, he really likes Jasmine, so maybe that's easy to handle. After all, it's completely okay not to deal with other women's feelings. The male protagonist doesn't feel like dealing with them. Damn it, when I think about it, it's a magical book about a single heroine. Well, then there won't be many female protagonists. The single female main event is high!
The title of the book is like a fairy tale, it is cute and romantic, and the content is fun to read and read. It is a rare snack. There are almost no character flaws or weird personalities. It tastes good, but it does not reach the threshold of soul excitement, so it is a snack, eh. It tastes good, I hope it's better [love] I can't find any loopholes or anything like that. It's a delicious snack with many advantages. It's just missing something. It's quite full. It may be the excitement of passion, but it's more real. Should I say it's a slow burn or something, or should I say it's the same with swords and magic? Again, it's a delicious snack. Thank you. These comments may just be due to personal taste, so don't take it too seriously. Well, after all, we are just catworms who eat books, hahahaha
It's great. I started following this book very early. This is the first novel on Tomato that I look forward to the author updating every day. I really like the characters and stories in it. I have been looking for similar novels since I read this type of novel written by the author. It seems that this one is well written. It is not boring and does not become like some novels that become farming novels after writing. Now let's talk about an issue with this book. To be precise, it's an issue with the circle. Ever since this book started, there has been a debate about whether there should be one female protagonist or multiple female protagonists. I don't know why the author hasn't clarified it. This book has a single female protagonist. The author himself said: "Single female protagonists are the best" and then he did not label a single female protagonist. The problem is that some female protagonists are really well written. I tend to prefer multiple female protagonists, but there is nothing wrong with authors writing single female protagonists. This is my own problem. I put aside my own expectations. I thought the author could write like that when writing other female protagonists. I will open an if line in the future (other female protagonist stories). From the results I saw in the group, there is a high probability that this will not happen. This is also the reason why I gave up the book. I can't bear to think about it when I read a book in the future, and I think that I am the ultimate clown when I rush to give advice to someone who asks questions without authorization. But regardless, this is a good book that may have some minor issues but is really well written. Although I haven't watched it, I still look forward to Su Bei and Jasmine becoming successful. Well. The defense was broken again, so I came back to watch my hand and read the commentary. I'm not a buddy, but it's hard to write Lin. Isn't it a little bit weird to say "I hope it will be a single female protagonist" in the comment? What did you think of Lin? If you are worried that the author will have too many female protagonists, then I can only say that if you go to the group circle to find out more, you don't have to worry so much, it looks really eye-catching. There is also a comment that probably means: "It feels like Jasmine's cloak is more important to Su Bei than Lin." This really broke the defense. I was so happy to finally see Lin again when I watched it again. Duan Ping made me dumbfounded when he saw this sentence. What is this thing called? There is also a question here. I don't know if it's because of my personal filter or something else. I feel that Lin has always been humble, even if she looks tough. Some people in the circle ask or say that they hope to have more female protagonists, or at least make up for the regrets of other characters, and there will be some people who want a single female protagonist. I don't know if some big brothers really like Jasmine or if they insist on fighting for that "single heroine" To be honest, I feel that single female protagonists have always had the upper hand, while multiple female protagonists appear later. I am considered an early follower, and I am considered a Jasmine Chef. I loved Jasmine when I first watched it and even now. I had posted about Su Bei Lin and Lilizi in Plague Continent have this tendency, and I really hope that Su Bei can pay more attention to them. But I didn't insist on changing it to multiple female protagonists. After all, the author said there was a single female protagonist and there is nothing wrong with having a single female protagonist. I just kept clamoring to write an if line about them, just like different heroines have different lines in galgame. This single female protagonist and multiple female protagonists really made me want to abandon the book (I came back to read it like I was addicted to ice skating [face covering]). I still want to ask when the author will clarify it. This is a game where the single female protagonist is guaranteed to win, but it's really too much to have to show off there [crying]
The rare and good-looking article with a western fantasy color is very well written. The psychological description of Jasmine's relationship with Su Bei is very detailed. In addition, Su Bei's emotions or attitude towards other supporting characters are not very good and a bit cold. I hope there can be more interactions with other supporting characters. , The emotional line can be stretched a bit, the basic logical world outline is complete, it is good to have gods and ordinary people competing, and the close combat process between Su Bei and the gods is very exciting, the author greatly cheers up and keeps updating [angry] [top post] [top post] [top post]
I only read the beginning, and it is really well written. All the characters have three-dimensional images, and the right rendering of the atmosphere makes people feel a little sad in the warmth. It is difficult not to sigh - it is really a "novel".
Different world, single heroine, adventure, daily life. The main plot continues to advance, and the interaction with the heroine is also constant, which can combine the two very well. The heroine has a lot of roles. Although she is a drag most of the time in the early stage, her actions in the mid-term make her permanently exempt from pvp. This kind of story in which the male and female protagonists go on adventures together really fits my xp. The general fantasy is basically just a solo show of the protagonist, and occasionally there are group portraits. The heroine does not have many scenes, and she will not always be with the hero. The general love novel is just about falling in love, there is no main line, and it is boring. This novel very well combines the advancement of the main plot with the interaction between the male and female protagonists. It is very comfortable to read. Although there are occasionally some things that feel unreasonable (not clearly explained, lack of necessary reasons, etc.), It is still acceptable. Full of faintness! The plot in the middle where the male protagonist is separated from the female protagonist for some reason is very interesting. The male protagonist's behavior is inconsistent with his character. It's okay to pay attention to Jasmine all the time. It's okay to be impulsive because of Jasmine, but it's very problematic to let others bear the price of the impulsiveness. It's fine once or twice, but it's weird to make impulsive and reckless actions many times and then calmly let Ririko pay the price to protect herself. The male protagonist should not have the character to let his partners pay for his impulsive behavior. The male protagonist's personality is clearly to resist all the pressure on his own, and then say "it's okay". It feels fresh once or twice, but it only makes people feel vulgar after so many times. Part 2: Later, the male and female protagonists acted together again, but the female protagonist's XX (involving spoilers) did not fully recover, only partially. As a result, it is difficult to overlap the current Jasmine with the previous Jasmine. There is always a sense of dissonance in the intimate interaction between the two, as if seeing flowers in the fog is not realistic enough. Part Three: It was not particularly obvious in the early stage, but in the later stage it has been on a tightrope, and it will be sent if you are not careful. Although it has been saying "pay tribute to the legendary anti-pressure king Subei", it has been in a tight state, not comfortable, and lacks a sense of security. In this case, the author still wants to maintain a certain proportion of daily interactions, but in fact it is not handled very well, which makes the daily interactions interspersed with it have a strong sense of violation (similar: the gods are already about to capture the protagonist, and Jasmine is still saying: I will give you a hug to help you, if you don't hug me, you will have no strength). And as if this wasn't the limit of pressure, the end of volume three said that volume four would be even more stressful. Afraid. Jpg Summary: 5 points in the early stage, 3 points in the late stage, and an average of 4 points.
The writing is very good, and the various foreshadowings are recycled. The emotional line is also quite good. It is great to read it in one go. However, I prefer the ending of the first version mentioned by the author. This ending has an indescribable feeling. As expected, I still prefer the pure happy ending. In short, it is worth watching. Also, I'm not a lolicon
There are also the last 200 or so chapters, which are very interesting. It is a novel that I couldn't bear to finish. I even wanted to cry a little bit when I saw the gradually decreasing chapters (), and then I found that there was no one around me who could discuss the plot ≥≤. I could feel that the author loved the characters he created and was very responsible for the stories he wrote.
It's very good. The relationship between the protagonist and Jasmine doesn't feel forced and artificial, and the relationship mode is also relatively pleasant. There is no stomachache plot, which surpasses the love part of many books. Although I haven't read it for a long time, this aspect really attracted me [Like] It's very comfortable, really comfortable, and it's not awkward even if you're playing tricks [Like]
Chapter 354 (the latest chapter, The Third Quill Game), scored 9.7 Subjectively and 9.4 Objectively, which is really good. ① Cute loli (should be a single female protagonist), many loli, many, many cute loli. ② (Only for the second volume, the third volume (Chapter 281) will be better) I don't really like this kind of story. The protagonist basically lives in the cracks and has basically no power to resist the gods. There are many time-travelers (God also knows their identities), and the protagonist is only relatively "useful". There is no sense of omniscience and Long Aotian at all. ③The third volume is more exciting, a little bit sharper. Thief, reality game (key link), apocalypse, time traveler Laughing and laughing --> being tortured --> turning point (semi-invincible) --> gentle (9.9 Points invincible) --> extra To be honest, apart from Loli, I can't put this aside, apart from Jasmine, this book is also very well written, mainly because I think it's good at filling in the holes at the end, and the framework is very good. To be honest, I almost couldn't tell whether it was a single female protagonist or not.
This is a thoroughly good book. It can be seen that the author is very careful, the outline is well planned, and the various logics are very clear. Putting aside the XP of lolicon characters, everyone is well-characterized and there is no absolute bad guy. Compared with the sinister people of the apocalyptic style, the enemies everywhere in the immortal style, and the terrifying darkness of the weird style, the world of this book is more warm, colorful and unique. The stories of the characters getting along are also very interesting, and relationships and attitudes will change over time. This is better than many books that only try their best to create one-sided personalities of the characters. Note that the concentration of lolita in this book is extremely high. If you can't adapt to the water temperature, please rein in the situation and hold on to your XP. This book also has a very good advantage! He really fills in the pits! The smooth and smooth ending of the novel simply beats 80% of Tomato novels.
This is the only book that made me have such a strong withdrawal reaction after reading it. I always have a feeling of regret for "Lin" from time to time. "Lin"'s feelings for "uncle" make me feel a little complicated. The word "complex" is hard to describe. She relies on him very much. He was the first person she met who was kind to her when she was ignorant. He was still the one who accompanied Lin after being deceived and hurt. When she was at the lowest point in her life, her only thought was him. When "Lin" was struggling with death a long time later, it was he who saved "Lin" with the initially hidden means. Although he did not always accompany "Lin", he was there for every key of "Lin's" life. In the end, "Lin" still failed to realize her little wish for him, and I felt sorry for "Lin". I have regrets, but this regret is very reasonable, so reasonable that I can't make up my own plot to make up for the regret. The plot of the whole book is interesting, link by link, and the pits dug are basically filled in. The characters have distinct personalities. Some people who did not appear much left an impression on me, making people feel that they are not just NPCs used to advance the plot. I seemed to be watching their adventures from God's perspective, rather than looking at dry words. The writing style of this book may not be in the top of the list of books I have read, but it is definitely the book that I will remember the longest after reading it once, have the strongest withdrawal reaction, and have read it the most times (this is my first time writing a book review, please tap lightly, please please) Highly recommended! ! !
There is nothing to say, I just like this kind of setting. This is the first time I have reviewed it without reading it. The title of the book tells everything from the beginning. It's so funny that the devil is my own setting. It's so perfect. The poor socially fearful little protagonist never thought about the man who appeared at that intersection that night and himself. He thought he had traveled through time to change the plot, but it turned out that he came here to change the plot. Why the game has poor reviews? It's because this is a game that should be played from the perspective of the devil! I can't help but laugh. I don't have much else to comment on. This character design that struck my heart is enough and perfect. 🙃🙃🙃
This book was read by a real person. The chapters were a little confusing in the real person. I don't know if it was because I misunderstood or because the author didn't write it clearly. Now that it's over, I just don't want to think about it anymore. The sound of the real person is very nice, and it's good as a lighthearted and funny daily article. I think the best part of the plot and characters is Lin, in the Plague Continent, which perfectly fits the theme: if you can't beat it, then go to the strategy. Seeing Lin, I really can't relax and feel a little sad. Fortunately, Lin has Lilizi, which makes me feel better. I think the author should be very satisfied with the character of Lin. It felt like the ending was a little rushed, and I wasn't very satisfied with it personally.