What? The Heavenly Dao Got Teased by Its Little Sidekick Again?

Has it been changed? My opinion is that the 50 chapters of the new book are generally good but a bit monotonous (old-fashioned). The conflict between Stone, who possesses all kinds of emotions and desires, and the heroine is relatively easy to figure out. It is nothing more than "the domineering president falls in love with a hamster", but obviously it will be difficult to write later considering the interests of the readers. It is difficult to write a high-scoring invincible article (how can you improve without releasing the pressure on yourself)? Considering that the author is a newcomer, try not to get too close to the cool article (there are too many pitfalls, there are many such cases) Putting aside the character, the new book is still very promising. Finally, don't update so fast The last 20 chapters are not very good

The author's writing is super nice, so funny. I really like the heroine's character. It's so funny. It combines narcissism, hooliganism, and a million bits of lust into one. Really, as soon as she appears, the atmosphere changes. Now when I see her talking, I can't help but imitate that mean expression, especially when she imitates the male protagonist's modern jokes. I'm so sorry. The author's writing is really good. I feel like other people in the comment area are asking too much? It's not easy to write a book, not to mention it's free. Please be more considerate. Anyway, I think the writing is pretty good. Keep up the good work and keep it up! [Top post]

In fact, it's okay to have seven emotions and six desires in Heaven. As long as you can look at things rationally and consider the overall situation, there is no big problem. Now I am still looking forward to the heroine pressing the hero on the bed😏 Now there are no major problems with the whole book, and the author continues to [learn]

This book is good, but too little. I'll keep reading it for a few months 😎 I have read Chapter 56, and overall it is quite funny. In terms of characters... The male protagonist and the female protagonist are not normal, a sinister man, and a teenage girl. In terms of plot, there are indeed many jokes, and it is funny from time to time. I just don't know why. I always feel that Duanmu Xuesheng has a knife [covers his face]. I don't know if it is an illusion.

The writing is very good, I hope the male and female protagonists will not be stabbed (even if there is, it can't be too harsh)

No, author, you only have a female supporting character after a few chapters and you still have such feelings for the protagonist, it makes people really panic😱

Author, I really like the characters you wrote.

This is also the first time I've read this subject. I think it's great [Sending my heart]

Very good, hope to keep it up

It's interesting, I hope the relationship can progress quickly