The Waiter at the Da Song Store Starts by Summoning the Frightened Salamander
大宋店小二，从召唤惊鲵开始
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 326k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Fantasy High-Concept
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
15Reads
89Chapters
2Listens
26kReads · all time
The writing is really messy. If you write about mixed martial arts, just write about mixed martial arts. If you write about modern times, it's even more of a hodgepodge than a hodgepodge. 😪😪😪😪
Not to mention a hodgepodge, with no connection at all. Not good-looking
What happened in the end? Why did I write about the city again?
Wouldn't it be better to write about mixed martial arts? Don't add anything randomly
Good mixed martial arts suddenly became in the name of the people! The writing is not that good! Stop writing!
Selling dog meat on a sheep's head
The writing is messy.
When writing about mixed martial arts, it's about mixed martial arts. Why did it suddenly go off topic?