After Passing Through the Book, I Kidnapped the Villain Bai Yueguang

It's okay, the plot is also good, it's quite novel, but, after being brainwashed by the world of Ke Xue, I subconsciously felt that the bosses are all model workers like gin. I feel like, uh, Lu is like a wishing well, and everything is done by the younger brothers. As long as they provide things to Lu, Lu can explode more equipment. Xiao Xie's character design is good, but the relationship between Lu and others was not handled well. Important scenes such as getting along in the early stage were skipped directly. It looked a bit like Long Aotian in the ancient times. .

It's okay, I really like this white moonlight character design. I like the main CP very much, but the deputy CP can't figure out who is following whom at the moment. I hope it's not an np [face covering]

Dear author, can you write a few chapters about the plot between Lin Ruyan, Ye Xiao, and Little Milk Dog? It's really super exciting. Grateful! ! ! Grateful! ! ! ! Grateful! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's super, super pretty. I love Xie Mao Mao so much. It's really cute. The relationship between two people also has to pass the test of time. It requires a little intervention from the outside world to realize their most essential feelings. After all, Brother Lu originally raised Xie Mao Mao as his son [eating melon] [please update]

Fortunately, Mu Yun is not dead, otherwise I would send a razor blade to the author. A good ex should be as good as dead. Can you not write about the emotional plot between the ex-boyfriend and the second male friend? I feel it is unfair to Mu Yun. If there is an emotional plot between the ex-boyfriend and the second male friend later, I may abandon the article, so I beg the author.

Five stars, must be five stars. The genre of fantasy + urban immortality + dual male protagonists perfectly suits my taste. The good beginning is really attractive. The two protagonists are neither close nor far apart, neither close nor distant. The relationship is ambiguous but has a touch of normal brotherhood. It's so satisfying. The main line is to cultivate immortality in the city, and cooperate with the system to lead the younger brother to explore the world. With many people reborn, I feel that the plot will be exciting in the future. What I like the most is the character of the protagonist Gong. He is powerful, capable, ruffian and a little funny. I highly recommend it. It's just that the author is a bit lazy, can he update more every day?

Hehe, I like it very much. The baby is very gentle and the wife is very cute. I just hope the plane is interesting (*๓´╰╯`๓)

When will Lu get to kiss Little Lotus [Shy] I'm really looking forward to it (๑˙ー˙๑)

I like Mu Yun more than Lin Ruyan. He gave all his sincerity and enthusiasm to Ye Xiao. Maybe it has something to do with my own preference. I think Mu Yun gave more love than Lin Ruyan. I really love him after he dies. So sad😭😭😭This may be the best outcome for him. At least he doesn't have to watch Lin Ruyan and Ye Xiao show affection, and he can also leave a special place in Ye Xiao's heart. Just like Mu Yun said, he finally cried for him TT The author's content is very good, but the protagonist could be more ambiguous. I really want to see them kiss and hug each other. The copy is very imaginative. I like some of the twists and turns and I want to cry｡°(°¯᷄◠¯᷅°)°｡ I like this article very much. I hope it won't end badly. The protagonist's emotional line is well written. I love you 😘

I want to ask if Ye Xiao and Lin Ruyan are CPs or if he and Mu Yun are CPs

WC? I just realized that I haven't commented yet… I personally think this novel is quite good. I also read some reviews before reading it. The plot is indeed a bit frustrating, but not much. Oh yes, there are also typos... The author is great, it's not enough, not enough at all... I don't ask for more updates, just regular updates, but the author is asking for more updates, which is not without problems... Remember to fill in the holes you dug...

It's very good to watch. The plot and emotions are good. It's very fulfilling. The world view is also very novel. If it doesn't collapse, it's really, really good. So far, it feels like it's very good in Tomato. But one update a day is really not enough. I'm crying🥹

Overall good. Although the beginning (this article mainly focuses on the plot line, supplemented by the emotional line, the main cp 1v1 warm and sweet pet, multiple pairs of cps) is all about the plot. The bloody plot of the secondary cp can really be reduced. It is indeed a highlight. The reason is not that there cannot be a secondary cp, but the problem of emotional uncleanness. The main cp is a sweet pet with more than 100. I can't stand the bloody plot of the secondary cps, especially it feels like it should be 1v2😂 so I left it. But if you don't care about the secondary cps, you can watch it. Push push (Gong Hao likes to pick people up and take them home hahaha)

Be careful when it comes to sweets, it's not sadistic, there are too few emotional scenes. Mainly based on the plot, but the short story is not the kind of plot that makes people want to stop. Maybe in the early stage of growth, it is all kinds of training and experience, and the daily life is too detailed, it is a bit like a running account. He is not ruthless and rarely slaps him in the face for revenge. On the contrary, people are very kind!

I just saw Ye kissing his ex-boyfriend, but I haven't seen the back yet. I want to ask if Mu Yun and Ye are together in the back (I feel sorry for the little wolfdog)

The writing is quite good and the plot is interesting, but that's all I saw. The character design of the protagonist is fine, the plot line and emotional lines are logically clear, and the writing is smooth. It is this deputy CP that is really my highlight. I am not a uncle, I am an uncle in my relationship. Mu Yun appeared at the beginning, and then she had an intimate scene with her ex-boyfriend. I I thought that I was not really in love with Mu Yun. After Mu Yun died, I felt that Ye was crazy, but that would make him say that he liked him but not say anything. And the article I saw had hints that Mu Yun was not dead. I read all the comments in the comment area and found that it seemed to be true... Okay. Maybe it's my problem, I'm too focused on the uniqueness and exclusivity of true love. Because I haven't finished reading it, I don't know the specific plot arrangement of the deputy CP later. Please forgive me if I am wrong. My rating represents my great recognition of the author. Even if I don't understand the entanglement between the three deputy CPs, I choose to respect it.

Well, I have been very lucky recently. I found a good-looking book. I really like it. Although I have only read a few articles, I still can't wait for more people to discover it. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, the author has worked hard!

It feels like the ratings and scores don't match. Is there someone who lowered the score? I feel that this book is well written. Lu's feelings for Xie gradually progressed from Lu's discovery that his feelings for Xie were not just for Bai Yueguang, but also for his wife, to later Lu seduced Xie, and finally confessed that they were together [Sending Hearts] The relationship between the two of them is so sweet, they love each other so much

I just want to know if Ye Xiao is 2v1, this is really important to me [almost crying]

Why should Mu Yun die? What did the cute puppy do wrong?

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! This is no better than those mindless juvenile novels! ! ! ! I love you so much! ! ! Faster and faster! ! ! ! [Love][Love][Love][Love][Love]

It's very nice, but the deputy CP is so regretful [I almost cry], I really like Muyun the puppy, it's a pity, it hurts~ [crying] [crying]

It's not bad, but the progress of the love line is a bit slow. They got together after more than 200 chapters, but it's quite sweet. I don't know when it will be finished. I haven't even reached half of the attack and reception skills. I hope the author will update more.

It's really beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ I really love it👄 I hope there will be more [crying][crying][crying] It's not enough

Update quickly. I have been waiting for a long time and you have updated seventeen chapters. Are you worthy of our wait? [Angry][crazy][crazy]

I almost missed it, it's so good, cheers for the author

It's so beautiful. I hope my relationship will be faster.

It's good to watch, and the plot material is very novel.

It's good-looking, but why is Ye's love journey so bumpy and Mu's behavior not as simple as tenderness? They wanted Ye and Lin to be together. They had feelings before, right?

I really like the character of the protagonist and have been following it for two years. When Brother Lu was around, they could all be children and act like spoiled children, but after Brother Lu was gone, they were forced to grow up and wait for Brother Lu's return. I really like this feeling of being a top genius, and I like Brother Lu's way of raising little lotus, and his dark underbelly. The writing style of Dada is very good. As a picky reader, I am really short of books. The writing of Dada is a bit slow.