My Poisonous Tongue Green Plum and Gentleness Descend from Heaven

I didn't expect that this book would be finished after only 100 chapters. I originally thought I could write at least 300 chapters. Let's talk about some advantages and disadvantages. First of all, the advantage is that the two female protagonists are decisive in setting the tone and resolutely abandon the useless innocent character. The ending is warm and sweet, and it is worthy of extra points. The disadvantage is that the main plot is too thin and the protagonist's ability to develop abilities is insufficient. This is why the book failed after only 100 chapters. The writing is quite satisfactory, and the label claims to be humorous. Why didn't I notice it? Could it be that my point of laughter ran away from home? Author Jun Qiuqiu Ni, give me back my smile~~~[Making faces]

It's very well written, the author is great. I would like to focus on two aspects of praise. One is that Lin Ruoxue's attitude towards the male protagonist was not that she fell in love directly from the beginning, but gradually laid the foundation for it. I think this is something only a few can do. The second is about the creation of Qingmei's image. Through her voice and the supplement of the extra episode, the image of Qingmei, a tsundere with a sharp mouth and a heart, is quite well created. But there are still some small flaws that I think. One is that although the foreshadowing of Lin Ruoxue's change in attitude towards the male protagonist is quite good, it still feels a little unnatural. I suggest you watch female videos to learn about emotional transitions or changes. Secondly, after I decided to write two female protagonists, I felt that it fell apart a bit quickly. Inexplicably, both sides accepted each other, and then progressed very quickly. Maybe the author still needs to practice, or maybe he hasn't figured out how to deal with it. My suggestion is that if you plan to write a story with two female protagonists in the future, you should pay special attention to the changes in the mentality of the male protagonist or the first and second female protagonists. If it doesn't work, just split the story and write a single female protagonist. But overall I think it's still very well written. Come on, originally this should be a 3-4 star work, but I believe that the author will be able to see better works in the future, so I will give you five stars. I believe that the author will be able to produce better works in the future. [Top post][top post]

It's very sweet and good-looking, but it's a pity that it has two female protagonists, and some of the female supporting characters are confiscated. The male protagonist has very upright views and is very kind. Tianjiang is very gentle. Qingmei has a sharp mouth and a soft heart. Qingmei makes me feel bad after watching it😣. The ending is acceptable.

[Laughing]: Tianxiang: Thank you very much for rejecting Brother Hao. Without your support, we would not have met, let alone have the opportunity to get acquainted and cultivate feelings. By the way, this is the wedding invitation of Brother Hao and I. Then you, the matchmaker, must come and wait for my and Brother Hao's baby to be born, and ask him to recognize you as his godmother. I believe you will definitely like the baby I have with Brother Hao (it was supposed to be your and Brother Hao's baby, but it became mine. Fate is really unpredictable) Qingmei: No! !

It's pretty good. I personally feel that the pace is a bit fast. I feel like it can't be too long. It should be a novella. Qingmei's role is a bit small, but the look and feel is good. I recommend it [Like]

I can only say that the title and introduction given by the author are the biggest flaws in this book. Li in the book made me feel very real. In my opinion, Li's feelings for Qingmei are love and the fire in his heart cannot be extinguished, but the author cleverly resolves the misunderstanding, so the flame in Li's heart burns even more vigorously. In fact, it's because people have so many misunderstandings that they feel sad. Lin in the book also made me feel very distressed. In fact, I think Lin should get all of Li, but this way the book will have no twists and turns. I hope the author can balance the relationship between Qingmei and Lin and write a more novel and twists and turns plot.

Single heroine? By the way, is the heroine a childhood sweetheart or a top student? I feel like both of these are pretty good, and both have the potential to be single female protagonists.

It's so good. I'm used to reading sadistic stories, so it's good to get a taste of it occasionally. You write well, author. This kind of relationship develops quickly. It's time to kiss and hug, and it's time to confess. The development of the relationship without any delay is really in line with my preferences. [Blow a kiss] I haven't seen a man after reading so many chapters. The heroine doesn't even hold hands and hug. Jiang Zi's development speed is really hot, and this mode of writing daily life is so popular with me. It took me two days to finish it. I look forward to Qingmei's performance in the future. Come on, author, keep updating, I will give you free gifts every day!

It's a hot article, and the ambiguity with the female top student from Tianxiang is very sweet. Let's see if the author will let the male protagonist fight between Qingmei and Tianxiang in the future.

The male protagonist is having an affair with the top student, what do you want Qingmei to do? [Chigua]

After watching it, I feel that Qingmei just doesn't know how to express herself. I hope that the two female protagonists will give Qingmei a chance.

Ruoxue is very good, but Qingmei is also good, but she doesn't know how to express her emotions. I hope the author can handle their relationship in the end. I read many comments saying that Qingmei doesn't have a good word to say, but what Qingmei did was just to do something. As for the confession failed, I don't think so. The answer is that after the male protagonist confessed his love, Qingmei turned around and left without responding, so the male protagonist thought it was a failure. Maybe Qingmei didn't understand how to express her feelings. After reading this, I felt that Qingmei's family was not very good, and maybe there were some restrictions. I also hope that the author would give more information.

Must have two heroines [give my heart] Two heroines do look better than a harem and a single heroine. Some novels have so many harem heroines that I can't remember their names, and the single women are so ambiguous that they don't accept them. This book satisfies me who loves to watch both harems and single women [shy]

It's quite good-looking, and I like it very much\(//∇//)\. I think the setting of the two heroines is pretty good. I really hope that those who mind the dual heroines won't read it. I don't think the rating of this book should be so low. I think the most difficult thing to write about a story with two female protagonists is how the man treats the second woman and how the first woman treats the second woman. The author handled it very well. Among the many double female protagonists I have read, the author of this article can be said to have written it very well, and it is already number one in my mind. Although I envy the male protagonist in the article, I will still be a good man who treats the male protagonist wholeheartedly. Just read the novel. I hope you are like me. After all, you have no superpowers. You don't have the gentle and considerate Lin Ruoxue, and you don't have the vicious Jiang Yurou who treats the male protagonist wholeheartedly.

Good news, really good news. I love it so much, Lin Ruoxue, and so does Jiang Yurou. It's really sweet. I highly recommend it. I recommend it to Crack the Wall. This setting is really different. I don't know what you think when you watch it. Anyway, I think it's quite novel, but I think it's a bit lacking. It's really amazing that you can have super powers after saving lives.

It's good to watch. The plot at the beginning made me think it was a sad story, but it aroused my interest. The male protagonist's character design and character creation were very successful. Lin Ruoxue's emotions could be richer, but it's all over. There are some plots that I have seen on Douyin, but they are a little different. Overall, it's a good work.

The idea of ​​the novel is very good, but the writing is still relatively young. Some of the ideas are too much to be expressed, but they seem a bit messy. In addition, I should learn from the novel "My Super Powers Refreshed Every Week". The overall flaws are not concealed. Four stars encourage me, keep up the good work.

Okay, lots of inner drama

Awesome, so pretty MD, look! Why not watch it! Show them all to me! ! ! (Crazy) (Too sweet) It's a pity that this book is not very good, it is too short, but at least it is not unfinished, it is still great, the two heroines are the best, and this is the one [punch out][punch out][punch out]

The writing is very good, and the emotions are very delicate, but I feel that it would be better without this green plum. Two people who have fallen into a trough, understand each other, have entanglements, and redeem each other. What a beautiful story. I have thought about the follow-up. If you want to write about a sword, the male protagonist saves many people and lives (the profession can be written as police, fireman, psychological counselor, etc.), But he cannot save himself. He dies at a young age and leaves the female protagonist and her unborn child. In the end, when the child grows up, the female protagonist goes to find the male protagonist. If you want to be sweet, the young couple will accumulate virtue and do good deeds throughout their lives. In the end, their merits will be fulfilled and their family will be happy. After traveling westward, they will see their parents in the underworld and be reincarnated together. By the way, it can also be explained that super powers are obtained by their parents in exchange for their merits. The extra story tells that after reincarnation, the two families are happy and happy, and they become childhood sweethearts and stay together for a lifetime. To be honest, I still can't accept multiple female protagonists. The subject matter makes me want to give it a try. I hope the author will consider my ideas when he opens a new book. I'll give this book four stars and one star for my ideas [laughter]

It looks good. I hope the author will not be influenced by others and write according to his own ideas.

Today, January 20th, the author was so awesome that he updated five chapters! I hereby reward you with a 5-star review. I hope the author will continue to do so and not slack off. [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

Beautiful, love watching. Although the tsundere Qingmei I wrote earlier made my blood pressure rise a bit, the author got it right later. So far, it's good. Come on, author.

It has the flavor of a Japanese comic, they redeem each other, it's so classic, I like it.

Good looking Samsung one

As far as the length is concerned, the writing is very good, but it is a pity that it is not enough to read. I hope the author will not be ungrateful [cool] five chapters a day, thank you [punch]

Not bad, nothing poisonous

Non-toxic is the best

Good looking, not too poisonous.

6.9? I really can't stand it anymore. Five stars support the first-hand author.