The Apocalypse in a Box

First of all, this subject matter is quite creative. In terms of subject matter alone, I can give it five stars. However, the author's writing style is too poor. Good ideas are poorly written, often the words are not expressive, and the characterization of the characters is not good. In the middle period, the biggest golden finger is taken away. Pig's feet cannot interfere in the war of the end of the world. The pattern is suddenly gone, and most of the readers are gone. In the later period, he also likes to draw snakes. It is enough to create some inexplicable plots, let the main world escape the control of the pig's feet, and finally force it back to fill in the holes. It gives me the feeling that there is no outline before writing, and the author just writes wherever he thinks. It is understandable for a veteran writer to do this, after all, people have rich experience and their thinking diverges quickly, but for novice writers, this is taboo and is the beginning of ruining a good book.

I fell in love with it after just five chapters. When I was a kid, I read Gulliver's Travels for the first time and fantasized about Lilliput. The author wrote out all my thoughts and satisfied my childhood regrets. I must highly recommend it!

I have only read the first few dozen chapters, and they are full of loopholes, logical contradictions and confusion. And it is very similar to the beginning of a novel I have read, "The Ming Dynasty in the Box". There is famine, eating bark, grass roots, and then bandits come to steal food and kill people. The protagonist punishes the villain and discovers that the villain has flesh and blood. Then there is only one woman who can see the protagonist and become the spokesperson "Saint"... This is a highly similar story mode, which is very speechless. Then there are some contradictions and loopholes in the text. It's hard for me to imagine how someone with a height of 8 mm could see her eyes. Even if you hold a magnifying glass to her face, you may not be able to see it. Are there any misunderstandings about the proportions of human organs? And when the zombie virus is rampant in the apocalypse, you dare to take your hands off someone so casually and enter the real world? ... There are still many loopholes and logical problems that I am too lazy to mention. The subject matter is very good, but the writing skills are not good enough, and the logical thinking is not detailed enough, so it is very entertaining.

I really enjoyed reading it. Unlike a certain book, although it is also a villain world, there is a setting in it, that is, there are other people who have villain worlds. I am quite disgusted with this setting. Anyway, this book is worth recommending.

The male protagonist must be so hungry. The little person less than one centimeter is exposed, and I can feel strange impulses in my heart. His eyes are so good [laughs awkwardly]

Is the length too long? If it is used to write about reality, the length of the apocalypse should be increased. There is also the issue of time flow. According to the current plot, the time ratio between reality and the apocalypse is 1:1. I hope that if the prosperity level is higher later, the time will be accelerated.

Let the protagonist give his saint the already high-quality small-scale Joan of Arc costume of the moon world [smile]

There are too many self-titled articles mixed with personal information. If you can't write about the city, don't write about the city. The plot of the female CEO is really embarrassing.

I saw some comments that are indeed correct, and I will dissuade you from the first one. Then he could endure the poison in Chapter 2, such as: At the same time, a grand and mysterious sound came, like a big yellow bell, majestic and mysterious. The next second [holding the grass, the bomb exploded]

Dare to sell cars from the apocalypse! Also used as a model. Parts can also be disassembled! Aren't you afraid that others will discover the secret? I'll catch you in minutes! The author's IQ is not online! Two stars! Don't show me a four-star rating!