Bite! Conditions have been met]
[Ability acquired: System]
Liu Yuanfeng: "The world is just a larger system. System-view helps me correct this wrong world."
[Ding! Conditions have been met]
[Ability acquired: Textile Machine of Destiny]
Liu Yuanfeng: "Don't worry, your destiny is as beautiful as silk thread, spun by me into a painting."
[Ding! Conditions have been met]
[Acquired ability: Civilization fire]
Liu Yuanfeng: "Knowledge is a kind of wealth, but it has all flowed into my hands. Very good, your knowledge belongs to me."
[Ding! Conditions have been met]
[Acquired ability: God's right hand]
Liu Yuanfeng: "The ultimate in alchemy is that everything in the world is for my use, and the world is perfected!"
Traveling through a different world and starting a new life, Liu Yuanfeng from the Emperor Star has gained the ability to constantly awaken his abilities. What is the truth of this ability, and what kind of future will he write here.
Reader comments
Since this is my first time writing a novel, and because I have the blessing of the author's filter, I don't know whether the book is good or not, but the reviews and data are indeed not ideal.
Some people said before that the male protagonist has the same thoughts as a child. This was actually a foreshadowing for the later period. This was done to allow the protagonist to start growing up in a new life, so as to integrate into a different world more quickly and reshape his outlook on life.
That's why the protagonist seemed inexplicably middle-aged and un-adult-like, but I didn't expect that most people wouldn't like such a protagonist, so around the 60th chapter, I speeded up the protagonist's growth and abandoned some excessive emotional portrayals, as well as some sensational plots that I'm not good at.
But this may seem like a change in style, making it difficult for readers to read on.
I have been reading novels since I was in school, and now I want to write a novel of my own, so I hope you can help me find out what is wrong and tell me, thank you all!
It is worth recommending. It ranks among the top novels I have read recently [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
Surprisingly not bad, although there are some flaws, but these can be ignored. Come on\^O^/
A very interesting two-dimensional light novel, the writing style is very good
One of the few novels I have read in one sitting
I personally like this. Please write it in more detail. For example, what do different races eat? What style of clothes do you like? The noisy environment of the guild. I will write it more vividly.
Since this is my first time writing a novel, and because I have the blessing of the author's filter, I don't know whether the book is good or not, but the reviews and data are indeed not ideal. Some people said before that the male protagonist has the same thoughts as a child. This was actually a foreshadowing for the later period. This was done to allow the protagonist to start growing up in a new life, so as to integrate into a different world more quickly and reshape his outlook on life. That's why the protagonist seemed inexplicably middle-aged and un-adult-like, but I didn't expect that most people wouldn't like such a protagonist, so around the 60th chapter, I speeded up the protagonist's growth and abandoned some excessive emotional portrayals, as well as some sensational plots that I'm not good at. But this may seem like a change in style, making it difficult for readers to read on. I have been reading novels since I was in school, and now I want to write a novel of my own, so I hope you can help me find out what is wrong and tell me, thank you all!
It is worth recommending. It ranks among the top novels I have read recently [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
Surprisingly not bad, although there are some flaws, but these can be ignored. Come on\^O^/
A very interesting two-dimensional light novel, the writing style is very good
One of the few novels I have read in one sitting
I personally like this. Please write it in more detail. For example, what do different races eat? What style of clothes do you like? The noisy environment of the guild. I will write it more vividly.