Ye Lun, who is in college, has been living with her younger sister because her parents are working. Her younger sister is lazy and thought she would live an ordinary life until she discovered this secret...
Reader comments
Okay, very good. I think it's very good to live a yandere life in daily life. It's quite detailed. It would be better to add more psychological descriptions, which will make the senses better.
But there is one disadvantage, that is, the articles are in long paragraphs, which may have some disadvantages for reading, because most of Tomato's articles are one section after another, which makes it a bit cumbersome to read.
I hope the author can improve it, come on. [Top post]
It suits my taste very well. I feel like my sister could be a little stronger.
The author has a very good idea, but it doesn't make sense when reading it. It feels like he is really narrating an event rather than telling a story. It's weird. I hope the author can work harder.
Great support for the author, the book is very beautiful
Single girl or multiple girls, hope to strengthen the male protagonist [Like]
It's a yandere novel with a bit of suspense, and I always feel like the author is going for a big setting, similar to The Truman Show. But updating once a day is a bit hard to handle. . .
The author is actually a chef! ! !
I feel like I almost learned to cook after reading your novel.
Not enough. Not enough. Not enough.
The author can read more other campus works. The general direction and story of the novel are good, but some details and writing style are a bit poor. The scene transition is too abrupt. More foreshadowing can be added. It is best to write the characters' action language longer. I feel that the story flow develops too fast [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] Some suggestions
OK OK! Very nice!
The author originally wrote about high school, but later it was corrected and changed to university. However, some details are still about high school and I didn't notice it.
The author should be bolder and write [blowing kiss]
Has this book been sealed?
So is it a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists?
The content is wonderful and interesting, but there are too few authors. When will it be updated twice a day? [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]
It's very good-looking, really good-looking, but it's too short. I update it at least once a day. It's not enough. [Sending my heart]
If you are uneducated, you will only be deducted 666
It's okay, the plot is pretty good
Come on, fight for the unblocking
The front is fine
The back is perverted enough
There are a lot of daily routines in the front, I prefer the yandere sister, but the ones in the back are really perverted
Do you call this a yandere? I don't understand!
It's very interesting, but can anyone explain to me the male protagonist's parents? I look so scary.
I checked the eyes, it's a science fiction movie, the writing is a bit white but it's pretty cool, I can give it four stars.
It's pretty good. One of the few people I've ever asked for a gift.
It's pretty good. I'm a local dog and I love watching it. [Laughing]
Hold on, author, this book is so well written. I'm still looking forward to whether others will have a chance to find the protagonist, whether the sister's character can be changed, and whether the number of readers will increase [almost crying] [almost crying]
Okay, very good. I think it's very good to live a yandere life in daily life. It's quite detailed. It would be better to add more psychological descriptions, which will make the senses better. But there is one disadvantage, that is, the articles are in long paragraphs, which may have some disadvantages for reading, because most of Tomato's articles are one section after another, which makes it a bit cumbersome to read. I hope the author can improve it, come on. [Top post]
It suits my taste very well. I feel like my sister could be a little stronger.
The author has a very good idea, but it doesn't make sense when reading it. It feels like he is really narrating an event rather than telling a story. It's weird. I hope the author can work harder.
Great support for the author, the book is very beautiful
Single girl or multiple girls, hope to strengthen the male protagonist [Like]
It's a yandere novel with a bit of suspense, and I always feel like the author is going for a big setting, similar to The Truman Show. But updating once a day is a bit hard to handle. . .
The author is actually a chef! ! ! I feel like I almost learned to cook after reading your novel.
Not enough. Not enough. Not enough.
The author can read more other campus works. The general direction and story of the novel are good, but some details and writing style are a bit poor. The scene transition is too abrupt. More foreshadowing can be added. It is best to write the characters' action language longer. I feel that the story flow develops too fast [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] Some suggestions
OK OK! Very nice! The author originally wrote about high school, but later it was corrected and changed to university. However, some details are still about high school and I didn't notice it.
The author should be bolder and write [blowing kiss]
Has this book been sealed?
So is it a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists?
The content is wonderful and interesting, but there are too few authors. When will it be updated twice a day? [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]
It's very good-looking, really good-looking, but it's too short. I update it at least once a day. It's not enough. [Sending my heart]
If you are uneducated, you will only be deducted 666
It's okay, the plot is pretty good
Come on, fight for the unblocking
The front is fine The back is perverted enough
There are a lot of daily routines in the front, I prefer the yandere sister, but the ones in the back are really perverted
Do you call this a yandere? I don't understand!
It's very interesting, but can anyone explain to me the male protagonist's parents? I look so scary.
I checked the eyes, it's a science fiction movie, the writing is a bit white but it's pretty cool, I can give it four stars.
It's pretty good. One of the few people I've ever asked for a gift.
It's pretty good. I'm a local dog and I love watching it. [Laughing]
Hold on, author, this book is so well written. I'm still looking forward to whether others will have a chance to find the protagonist, whether the sister's character can be changed, and whether the number of readers will increase [almost crying] [almost crying]