My Yandere Sister and I Aren’t Blood-Related

Okay, very good. I think it's very good to live a yandere life in daily life. It's quite detailed. It would be better to add more psychological descriptions, which will make the senses better. But there is one disadvantage, that is, the articles are in long paragraphs, which may have some disadvantages for reading, because most of Tomato's articles are one section after another, which makes it a bit cumbersome to read. I hope the author can improve it, come on. [Top post]

It suits my taste very well. I feel like my sister could be a little stronger.

The author has a very good idea, but it doesn't make sense when reading it. It feels like he is really narrating an event rather than telling a story. It's weird. I hope the author can work harder.

Great support for the author, the book is very beautiful

The author is actually a chef!!! I feel like I almost learned to cook after reading your novel.

Single girl or multiple girls, hope to strengthen the male protagonist 👍

It's a yandere novel with a bit of suspense, and I always feel like the author is going for a big setting, similar to The Truman Show. But updating once a day is a bit hard to handle. . .

The author can read more other campus works. The general direction and story of the novel are good, but some details and writing style are a bit poor. The scene transition is too abrupt. More foreshadowing can be added. It is best to write the characters' action language longer. I feel that the story flow develops too fast 🤔 🤔 🤔 Some suggestions

Not enough. Not enough. Not enough.

OK OK! Very nice! The author originally wrote about high school, but later it was corrected and changed to university. However, some details are still about high school and I didn't notice it.