Ryuya Souei

Ah, I can see the ratings. I can give myself a score based on everyone's feedback. And I would like to respond to the questions that have received more responses here. The most difficult thing to do is the Yecang mission [laughs crookedly]. I also knew it would be difficult to do it when I wrote it. If Ye Cang is not sent back to report information, the plot of Sunagakure will not be able to unfold. I can only say that I sacrificed it for the sake of the plot, and I was mentally prepared when it was released. The pitfalls will be filled in later (or in other words, I have already filled in the pitfalls, and the relevant chapters will be available to you this month). I can't think of a better way to address my own deficiencies and accept criticism. Then answer some of the more frequently asked questions. 1. Regarding the age of the protagonist. As for the timeline, I specially sorted out one chapter among the 50 chapters. I have a personal opinion for reference. Originally, Kirigakure's timeline was very messy. 2. CP is currently not locked or scheduled. 3. The protagonist is too young and his combat power increases too quickly. Ah, I only realized this after I posted it, because I started writing the story from Konoha 42 years after setting up the world view according to the timeline of my own understanding. In terms of combat power, it is more appropriate to set it to about 12 years old. It can't be changed. That's all for now. If you have any questions, please leave a message below [top post][please pay attention] ps: There will be three updates per day in January! Please watch and collect! The Star Recruitment Act is open!

Personally speaking, this novel is really thoughtful, and there is no nonsense about time-travelers, especially the plot of watching the fire from the other side of the three stations. Yagura wants to copy the successful case of Laomei, but unfortunately he cannot give a proper method due to experience. At this time, the third generation uses his own death to teach Yagura the last lesson. It is perfect. The ending of the third generation is perfect, and Yagura's growth at this time is also natural. Generally speaking, Yagura is better at the intelligence and unique perspective of the time traveler, and Sandai is better at experience. The complementarity of the two will eventually make the Mist Ninja strong.

I have rarely seen articles like this, it's very nice. The content is clear and unique. I have never seen it before. And I would love it if this article wasn't a harem article. After all, a girl shouldn't like to watch a harem, come on! (ง ˙O˙)ว[adoration][adoration][adoration]

Yagura, hehehe, Shota hehehe is so cute. ． Hey hey hey

It's very interesting. Apart from Yagura's weird age, the writing is quite good. I really like watching the interactions between the little ones [Sending my heart] I hope Yagura will be as short as the original and become a cute and adorable group pet [Adoration]

It is rare for me to review a novel seriously, and my evaluation is very good. It is different from previous Naruto fan fictions, such as "starting in Konoha", "following Narusa's plot line", "having Sharingan or Byakugan", "it is difficult to deal with the original character changing the meaning of the original", "wanting to be a rebellious ninja", "developing a relationship with the original character or protecting or saving an original character" Ah wait, the starting point of this novel is not even Konoha Village, but Kirigakure Village. Moreover, the protagonist himself is a Jinchuuriki. There are some plots that are not in the original novel. All in all, I recommend [like]. The only flaw is the update speed. I finished it in one go. Alas [face covering]

It's a very good book. The main character, the Holy Mother, wanted to kill her own people, but she only wounded them and let them go after telling them not to come again. Then her information was leaked. The enemy killed hundreds of fog ninjas, but the protagonist just said "don't come" and let them go. It was very well written and I loved reading it.

This is my first time writing a review, so I apologize. I clicked in because this is the first one I saw in Tomato that wrote about Kirigakure or Yaso. I personally like Yaso very much. After all, who doesn't love Legitimate Shota (?). And the plot is also very good and complete. Although there are not many foreshadowings (you can also say that there are not, although this is a bit heartbreaking), it is better than those that have too many foreshadowings but are difficult to recover in the end. The only thing is that the timeline is a bit messy. It feels like all the useful people have been forcibly mixed together at one time. Although it is a private setting, it still feels a little bit inconsistent. Overall, it's still well written (it's not like I write a beginning every time and then delete it), and I hope it won't be as aborted as other articles I've read.

[Blowing kiss] It's really nice to watch. There are no messy cheats. It's very consistent with Naruto. The protagonist has obvious growth. The death of the third generation is a clear dividing line when he takes up the role of Mizukage. Originally, Ye Cang was a bit offended before, but here he gives perfect explanations. The protagonist is very good at taking advantage of information gaps and standing from Kirigakure's perspective without violating his own ideas. But it's such a pity. First, the ending ended too quickly. In fact, there could be a lot more, but it's understandable. Second, the line between the protagonist and the full moon is the last secret to give the answer [laughing]. I was right. There is no extra story [crying]

The protagonist has flesh and blood. Although he relies on his identity as a time traveler to gain opportunities, he does not rely too much on his identity as a time traveler. He still maintains half of his soul that belongs to this world. The writing is quite nice and makes readers feel deeply involved. Moreover, this round is a slow-burning novel. , To be honest, I am growing little by little. I generally can't say that I am particularly good, but I am not bad enough. I slowly started to burn out later on, and it is a slow burn. The slower it gets, the better it gets. I hope the author will stop being arrogant and impetuous, and continue to work hard. It is best to be a full-time author of eight chapters a day [Sending Hearts]

Objectively speaking, the writing is really good, the author is great (≧∇≦*) But I feel that the time is a bit messy. Except for the time being a little bit messy, there is nothing wrong with it. Everything else is very good. This book is highly recommended! ! ! This book is really well written, and it doesn't do anything. It just lets the enemy go for no reason, and it also does something, such as the protagonist's identity and combat power. Well, if the position is not done, there will be so many enemies to attack the protagonist in the future, and it won't work. As I said before, the protagonist saves people once and only lets them go once, so in the future, he probably can't beat them but can't beat them. He tries to find cooperation and then escapes if he can't beat them. These are just a little joke for readers. Don't take it to heart. That's right, hehe, don't take it to heart either (ºº) All in all, the writing is really good, and sometimes hey hey hey you all know it's true, I can only say that I'm a little in love with this author Marry Me! ! Haha (●°u°●) "The author, please keep working hard and never become a eunuch (ﾉД`) This book is really well written, very good, I like it very much! ! ! I also ask the author to continue to persevere and there will be success in the future. As long as the author never gives up on the future, it won't end badly I am sure this book will not work for anyone! ! ! Ababa, Ababa, Balabala, okay, there is nothing more to say, everything that needs to be said has been said. Hey, by the way, you, the author, didn't mark anything, but I just wanted to ask if you have any CP? The author is just watching and please be sure to answer!!!!!! At present, I don't think there is one. I don't know if there will be in the future⊙⊙

A very favorite fanfic! ! Calculating the time, the first time I watched it was on December 23. I grew up watching it anyway (*´◐∀◐`*) Ya and Mangetsu were originally my favorite characters when I read the original novel, but they both died early and had little role. This book by my wife has made up for my wish. The writing is very good, and Xiao Yagura's writing is very cute and adorable! ! ! Seeing Ming's indirect confession to Yagura and Mangetsu, I really want to know which couple the author's main CP is (I like Mangetsu!! After all, the two little ones are considered tame and even slept together) Finally, I really hope that my wife can finish it, no unfinished work! ! !

It's okay, the text is okay, the killing is quite decisive, basically he is a kind-hearted village chief who set out for the village. (Although it was a bit naive in the early stage) Well, the side story is not very interesting. The male-to-male CP is really good, but there is only ambiguity. (I really don't think those extras are very interesting. It's better to write CP-oriented IF lines in the extras, such as full moon/scorpion...)

It's very interesting, and it can be considered as a daily sweet article. The author also writes a lot of extras (in the book circle). Currently, the protagonist is with Scorpio and Full Moon (the relationship is not clear?)

It can be said that this is one of the few Naruto novels that I have finished. I love Mankura CP [Adore] very much. I like this novel with Kirigakure as the protagonist. From the perspective of Naruto, Yagura is indeed a genius ninja, but there is too little information. I also watched my wife put the original The originally barren Kirigakure became bigger and stronger. Yagura is not a saint. He just wants to protect Kirigakure. Everything he does is for Kirigakure. From Yagura's perspective, he is doing it for Kirigakure Village, so the plot changes in the later period are acceptable [Thinking] Good review [Like]

The beginning is good. The main advantage is that the protagonist has a good personality, is infectious and can be beaten to death, occasionally gets upset, and the various jokes are moderate, which is good. Let the plot flow! The protagonist probably likes boys! Disadvantages: Whose reform is a fantasy and is a bit abstract. The farmers in the Naruto world are all poor. The protagonist secretly controls the monopoly. Like a clown, if a supervisor is captured and his memory is taken away, all industries will be taken by Naruto. This is not legal. Or even simpler toll protection fee! Your fist is so big, how dare you not give it to me? The protagonist, the butterfly, is already so strong, and the plot has not changed accordingly. It is still exactly the same as the original work! Black Zetsu is dead, White Zetsu should notify Ban as soon as possible, take control of Nagato, and Ban will be resurrected! There are advantages and problems! In the world of Naruto, force is paramount, and the protagonist begins to enjoy life in the middle and later stages

I have read it several times sporadically. This book is amazing. The characterization is surprisingly awesome. There are not many bad points in the plot except for Yagura, so if you can endure it, you can watch it with confidence (I will just skip that part when I re-read it later) Yagura is awesome. The emotions of the characters are also portrayed superbly. I personally feel that Yagura's image is still very three-dimensional and not unfinished. I hope to see the author's updated extras in my lifetime, although it is no longer possible () The author is awesome, and the writing style is also amazing. When can we see new pits like this? , I personally still like Manya a bit (), so I personally feel that the expression of emotional lines is also very good. The two characters who were a bit flat in the original work (the genius without a line of dialogue and the Mizukage who was controlled and had no expression at all) are also surprisingly well created, and the plot is not very cliched. , Holy shit, I want to say that the author is awesome again Mitsuru was right. Regarding the extras, I personally think they are pretty good. Whether it's the Four Wars, the original fire linkage, or the original world line, each has its own advantages. The first four battles: Yagura died of a heart attack, which made me laugh. His calm look during the battle was so handsome. Yuanhuo linkage: This wave of real double chefs is ecstatic, Genshin Impact is awesome Original world line crossing: I personally feel a bit like Narcissus, but I have made up for my regrets, Haraya has not been persecuted by gangsters, and everything is developing towards a good place ( This is the first time I have written such a long book review, and the author is still awesome. I also have to read this book twenty or thirty times.

The content is very good, and very surprising. I thought it was okay in the early stage, but I felt that the age of the protagonist was not related to his strength. Even in the Chuunin exam scene, I felt it was a bit strange. The protagonist did not seem to have graduated from the ninja school, but was specially approved to graduate early. It only takes a few years in total. I admit that if If it is in some invincible books, it may be very powerful in a few years, but this book gave me the feeling that it was a slow-burning one, with no ignition in the early stage. There were many exciting parts during the Third Ninja War, especially when the Third Mizukage and the protagonist discussed whether Kirigakure would fight Konoha or the Three Kingdoms Alliance, and the Third Mizukage died. When I read it, I had a very empathetic feeling. I cried while watching it. Maybe it was because my tear point was a little low, but at that moment I really saw the admiration of an old man who was ready for the future generations. At this moment, I felt that the height of this book had risen. Overall, It's still very good. I don't know why the rating is so low. I don't think it has any bad points. I read other comments and said that there is a bad point in the Ye Cang clip, but I didn't see it. Finally, I hope the author will update more, strive for 1,300 chapters a day, and show the energy of a production team.

It's rare to see someone who doesn't write about Konoha. He is unsystematic, has an online IQ, and is not brainless. This must be a five-star review. Brothers, you can really read this book. The author is really good at writing. He writes seriously. Must support

The writing is good. There are no bad points except for the protagonist who is a bit crooked. If you remove the plot that is a bit crooked, it can get about 9.5 Points on Tomato. Fortunately, there are not many crooked characters. Occasionally, it is more like a bit of teasing for your partners!

It's very interesting. It's very novel to write it from the perspective of Goju Yacang [Blowing Kiss], and the characters are vividly depicted [Like]. There is growth and setbacks, and the plot is reasonable and orderly. At least in my opinion, there are no big problems. I like it very much [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss]

A very good Naruto article, with excellent battle descriptions without too much poison. As for the comment about letting Ye Cang go, it actually doesn't matter, because she probably hasn't killed too many Kirikage before the third war. I could have written about how to cooperate with the Sand Ninja. It's just too little. In fact, I could write some small plots to overdo it, like the plot of Takumi Ninja Village or the small escort fight.

Mrs. Mrs. Mrs. Mrs. Is so beautiful. It's the first time I've seen a book about Mizukage. I think it's really well written, especially the part about the death of the third generation, and the game between the protagonist and several other Kages. I really, really, really like it. I hope there will be more, and I'll try to get ten of them a day. It's really rare to see a book with no Sharingan, and no protagonist with Hashirama's physique or whirlpool body.

It's a very good book. Yagura is so cute. I love Shota the most. She is very close to the full moon. It doesn't have a lot of emotional drama. It mainly focuses on career, and it doesn't have the bad habits of other male videos (the male protagonist always smells like a loser). I think 80% of this book is good because the character of the male protagonist Yagura is very well written. The real character makes me feel very comfortable and cute. I want to read it again. When will the author write another book?

Love it, love it, there is so much love between these young ladies.

A rare infrastructure article (the similar book is {Kazekage Ninja}), a very comfortable reading experience, you can read more There is a poisonous point that caused this book to drop a lot of ratings (it does not affect the subsequent plot but it is slightly unfavorable). Otherwise, this book could have been 9.3 Or above [eating melon] good grass

There are no flashy cheats. The whole book is very peaceful. Ye Cang is a bit poisonous. Everything else is very good. The most important thing is that I also like Yagura, but I haven't found any books related to Yagura before. All in all, it's finished [love]

This book is still very good. It is different from others because it is shallow and you can feel it from tasting bit by bit. There is not so much sugar and there is not so much artificial vine. It is more natural, just like tasting tea. It is very refreshing. Perfect match.

It's good to watch, and the plot line is very exciting. First, develop personal combat power, and then fight economic war + village war. I keep winning and never feel aggrieved. The protagonist is strong, but not exaggerated to the point of distortion. There is no CP, no emotional lines, and there are many single-arrow protagonists (both men and women). The protagonist only treats everyone on his side as a sneaky chicken. Both the full moon line and the scorpion line are delicious

It's rare in Naruto that I can follow it all the way to the end, it's really beautiful!