Liver Experience Begins with Family Cultivation

To be honest, it's unreasonable. It's bullshit for a direct lineage to kill an outer disciple and give him four years to develop. The system can still talk later, which is a failure. Looking at the system text, as long as the system is not the kind of awesome sign-in or participating in the plot that has its own ideas and can speak, it is obviously a water word count. Proficiency in cultivating immortals means proficiency in cultivating immortals. If you have to play tricks and kill your own books, so will you🐮

It feels a bit nonsense. Can't we kill the protagonist directly? We must let them develop.

The plot is a bit nonsense It's okay, I can barely watch it

Rubbish, what plot?

If the big snake wants to eat the people on the island, can't they report it to the family and no one will care about it? Even if no one cares about it, you shouldn't be the one who takes the lead. The result is that the big snake is killed, and everyone on the island receives lunch boxes. The result is the same, and you end up feeling lonely.

Not good-looking, not good-looking

Messy writing

There is a reason for the low rating;

The low score is not unreasonable

The plot is poor and the writing is poor. .

The direct descendants of my family have run away without even avenging their revenge, and the enemies can no longer be found. The more I write, the more protracted it becomes, and the more I read, the more unhappy I become.

It's a bit messy. Write whatever you want.

There is no sense of immersion at all.

I only read a few chapters and couldn't get enough of it. It really didn't attract my interest at all.