[Fantasy, Relaxed] [Slow pace] Intermediaries, please beware
Travel to the world of immortality and become a citizen of the Immortal Dynasty.
Because he was so good at eating, he bankrupted his family.
So I decided to do some business.
But on the first day he served his special dish, he was reported and was about to be arrested and sent to the Yamen.
...
Later, because of his strength, he was favored by the yamen and became a prestigious young yamen servant.
But the good times didn't last long, and not long after, people from the yamen ganged up and kicked out...
Reader comments
This is a bit biased. Seriously, the ratio of points added is 3:1 or 2:1. You only practice physical exercise but not Dharma. What potential do you have? What's the way out?
It looks good. My personal opinion is that the system shouldn't be too powerful and don't have too many functions. Don't let the protagonist become invincible casually. To be strong, you need perseverance, adventure, meeting a noble person, a master, etc. It would be best to have a beautiful female protagonist.
This is a bit biased. Seriously, the ratio of points added is 3:1 or 2:1. You only practice physical exercise but not Dharma. What potential do you have? What's the way out?
It looks good. My personal opinion is that the system shouldn't be too powerful and don't have too many functions. Don't let the protagonist become invincible casually. To be strong, you need perseverance, adventure, meeting a noble person, a master, etc. It would be best to have a beautiful female protagonist.