[Soul Time Travel + Ancient Times + Immortal Cultivation World + Romance + Imagination + Abuse] There will be more abuse at the end.
The heroine uncovers the injustice in her world and becomes stronger step by step! !
"Li'er, I'm sorry, I really have to leave this time."
"No, don't leave me. How can you be so selfish and let me stay alone in this world?"
"Li'er don't cry. If there is an afterlife, I will return your wish and be the one who protects you."
"No, don't," Li'er cried out in pain while holding her dissipated body, "Come back, I don't want an afterlife, I just want this life."
"I'm afraid I will break my promise in this life."
It's not finished yet, so stay tuned! !
Reader comments
This book is so beautiful, the writing is exquisite, and the characters are wonderfully created. I give it five stars!
Only a very attentive author can carve out so many beautiful sentences. The protagonist in the story dares to love and hate, and his brave and persevering character portrayal makes people empathize. I hope he will continue to work hard in the new year!
[Thinking] I suspect that the author majored in Chinese, and the frequent use of golden sentences is surprising.
As a new author, of course you should give your novels a boost! Shangguan Li is not Li Xinli, she is herself, and she wants to live her life as herself. Not the so-called cowardly Li Xinli. She has her own rhythm and she will live well every day.
As a newcomer, I feel that my writing skills are improving. I no longer only have dialogue expressions, but also start to have scenes later on. I will continue to work hard.
I like this kind of story where the heroine becomes stronger step by step. It's very beautiful. The author will update it quickly. It's not enough! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]
The use of language in this book is excellent, and every word shines like a carefully crafted gem. It's pretty good to watch, the plot is pretty good, and it's already great for a newcomer to write it like this. Keep up the good work. Very good, I will continue to follow up!
It's beautiful, I'm addicted to it, I highly recommend it [got it]
After reading more than ten chapters of the novel, I can see that there are still many difficulties for the protagonist Shangguan Li. She should be a brave and resolute girl who uses her knowledge before time travel to solve all problems. The plot is good and the language is fluent. Come on.
The ancient sayings and rhymes, the literary talent and the vivid characters are vividly displayed on the page one by one. The readers will have endless emotions in their hearts, and they will pursue it all the way to the end.
Alas, not enough, really not enough!
Waiting for the update, come back tomorrow, hehe😜
The first time I read the ancient novel "The Soul Passes Through the Immortal", I felt like my eyes were brightened.
The characters are vivid and flesh-and-blood. The descriptions of various thoughts and details are also in place and make people empathize.
The introduction says this is a new author. Oh, did I find a treasure? This is my first time writing so well!
Keep up the great work, first give me my five-star praise, and continue to pursue [love][love][love]
What can I say about this book? It seems that the author is a novice, and the writing style is a bit immature, but he is able to describe the characters very vividly. The heroine Xinli is smart and smart, the hero Xuan Sheng is calm and resourceful. The other supporting characters are also well written, very distinctive, and memorable, and the story line is also very rich and fascinating! Please give me a five-star review!
It is a book that I like very much. The author uses exquisite writing to describe the wonderful plot. The plot has ups and downs, the concept is clever, and the characters are vivid and full. It is hard to put down. I look forward to the subsequent development to be more exciting! Come on٩(๑ᵒ̴̶̷͈᷄ᗨᵒ̴̶̷͈᷅)و
It's very nice, it's as good as anyone else. I love this book. The protagonist has very upright views. He punishes evil and promotes good, and he doesn't blindly help others. The content is also very good. Come on, it will be better if it is faster.
This ancient Chinese novel about the soul traveling to immortality has a thrilling and ups and downs plot. It's a good read. It's on your bookshelf and you're ready to catch up!
A very wonderful novel. The author's writing style is very good and the writing is fluent. I can't stop reading it. It's very attractive [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]
The novel is good, but in reality there are many unfair things that can only be solved by allowing pig feet to travel through time! The author's writing is smooth and the characters are described in detail. It's worth a read!
A very good novel, the writing is outstanding, the characters are well drawn, the plot is ups and downs, and the writing is great.
The plot is heart-touching! Very exciting! The context is clear! The writing is smooth! The characters are vivid! Great article, addictive to read! Recommend!
The writing is very good, the male and female protagonists are vividly portrayed, the plot is exciting and beautiful😊, the author gives you a lot of support [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]
The more I look at it, the more I get it. Let me comment again.
Love the article, the plot is good
The emotional pull and tangle is written very vividly, and it feels like the author has experienced it himself, so I'd like to call you!
It's really beautiful. She must be a beautiful writer. Her writing style is smooth and the storyline is coherent. It must be praised with five stars.
Yeah, it looks good. I like the male and female protagonists. The plot is compact and not procrastinating. I like it. The author will try his best to update it. It's not enough to watch. Please give me more updates!
Yes, what I have written so far is pretty good. I hope I can continue to write well if I keep up my efforts. The writing style is also good, and the character Li Xinli in the novel is also very good. She dares to love and hate.
Keep chasing! Really like it!
This book is really good, I personally like it.
This novel makes people's eyes light up
It's so well written that I couldn't help but indulge in it and read it all night long. I guess it will be a hit.
This book is quite nice. The writing is smooth and the logic is clear. It is a good soul-traveling novel.
The story set by the author is relatively detailed and fascinating, and the content described is really moving. Highly recommended!
The writing is very detailed and good, and the updates are fast. You can take a look.
Li Na's character is interesting and the plot is cleverly written. Very nice looking.
The heroine is cute, the plot is compact, and the writing is relaxed. It's very good. Five-star praise, recommended! Recommend!
This book is so beautiful, the writing is exquisite, and the characters are wonderfully created. I give it five stars!
Only a very attentive author can carve out so many beautiful sentences. The protagonist in the story dares to love and hate, and his brave and persevering character portrayal makes people empathize. I hope he will continue to work hard in the new year! [Thinking] I suspect that the author majored in Chinese, and the frequent use of golden sentences is surprising.
As a new author, of course you should give your novels a boost! Shangguan Li is not Li Xinli, she is herself, and she wants to live her life as herself. Not the so-called cowardly Li Xinli. She has her own rhythm and she will live well every day. As a newcomer, I feel that my writing skills are improving. I no longer only have dialogue expressions, but also start to have scenes later on. I will continue to work hard.
I like this kind of story where the heroine becomes stronger step by step. It's very beautiful. The author will update it quickly. It's not enough! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]
The use of language in this book is excellent, and every word shines like a carefully crafted gem. It's pretty good to watch, the plot is pretty good, and it's already great for a newcomer to write it like this. Keep up the good work. Very good, I will continue to follow up! It's beautiful, I'm addicted to it, I highly recommend it [got it]
After reading more than ten chapters of the novel, I can see that there are still many difficulties for the protagonist Shangguan Li. She should be a brave and resolute girl who uses her knowledge before time travel to solve all problems. The plot is good and the language is fluent. Come on.
The ancient sayings and rhymes, the literary talent and the vivid characters are vividly displayed on the page one by one. The readers will have endless emotions in their hearts, and they will pursue it all the way to the end. Alas, not enough, really not enough! Waiting for the update, come back tomorrow, hehe😜
The first time I read the ancient novel "The Soul Passes Through the Immortal", I felt like my eyes were brightened. The characters are vivid and flesh-and-blood. The descriptions of various thoughts and details are also in place and make people empathize. The introduction says this is a new author. Oh, did I find a treasure? This is my first time writing so well! Keep up the great work, first give me my five-star praise, and continue to pursue [love][love][love]
What can I say about this book? It seems that the author is a novice, and the writing style is a bit immature, but he is able to describe the characters very vividly. The heroine Xinli is smart and smart, the hero Xuan Sheng is calm and resourceful. The other supporting characters are also well written, very distinctive, and memorable, and the story line is also very rich and fascinating! Please give me a five-star review!
It is a book that I like very much. The author uses exquisite writing to describe the wonderful plot. The plot has ups and downs, the concept is clever, and the characters are vivid and full. It is hard to put down. I look forward to the subsequent development to be more exciting! Come on٩(๑ᵒ̴̶̷͈᷄ᗨᵒ̴̶̷͈᷅)و
It's very nice, it's as good as anyone else. I love this book. The protagonist has very upright views. He punishes evil and promotes good, and he doesn't blindly help others. The content is also very good. Come on, it will be better if it is faster.
This ancient Chinese novel about the soul traveling to immortality has a thrilling and ups and downs plot. It's a good read. It's on your bookshelf and you're ready to catch up!
A very wonderful novel. The author's writing style is very good and the writing is fluent. I can't stop reading it. It's very attractive [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]
The novel is good, but in reality there are many unfair things that can only be solved by allowing pig feet to travel through time! The author's writing is smooth and the characters are described in detail. It's worth a read!
A very good novel, the writing is outstanding, the characters are well drawn, the plot is ups and downs, and the writing is great.
The plot is heart-touching! Very exciting! The context is clear! The writing is smooth! The characters are vivid! Great article, addictive to read! Recommend!
The writing is very good, the male and female protagonists are vividly portrayed, the plot is exciting and beautiful😊, the author gives you a lot of support [Sending my heart][Sending my heart] The more I look at it, the more I get it. Let me comment again.
Love the article, the plot is good
The emotional pull and tangle is written very vividly, and it feels like the author has experienced it himself, so I'd like to call you!
It's really beautiful. She must be a beautiful writer. Her writing style is smooth and the storyline is coherent. It must be praised with five stars.
Yeah, it looks good. I like the male and female protagonists. The plot is compact and not procrastinating. I like it. The author will try his best to update it. It's not enough to watch. Please give me more updates!
Yes, what I have written so far is pretty good. I hope I can continue to write well if I keep up my efforts. The writing style is also good, and the character Li Xinli in the novel is also very good. She dares to love and hate. Keep chasing! Really like it!
This book is really good, I personally like it.
This novel makes people's eyes light up
It's so well written that I couldn't help but indulge in it and read it all night long. I guess it will be a hit.
This book is quite nice. The writing is smooth and the logic is clear. It is a good soul-traveling novel.
The story set by the author is relatively detailed and fascinating, and the content described is really moving. Highly recommended!
The writing is very detailed and good, and the updates are fast. You can take a look.
Li Na's character is interesting and the plot is cleverly written. Very nice looking.
The heroine is cute, the plot is compact, and the writing is relaxed. It's very good. Five-star praise, recommended! Recommend!