[Female wearing man's clothes | Cultivation of immortality | Upgrade flow | Weak system | No cp]
The day before Shen Xiaoyu completed her small goal in life - buying a house, she was summoned to the world of immortality by an orange cat who claimed to be a system, and transformed into the male protagonist of Shuangwen.
She said she had three points to make. First, let this talking cat go away.
Second, please mail compensation for her house.
Third, emphasize the above two points.
At first, he held the sword just because he thought it looked cool and wanted to try immortality. Later, he held the sword for his master, his senior brother, his fellow sect, and for the world.
This world is full of chaos, which is not a good thing, but I want to keep it alive because the people I love are all here.
(Demining: 1. If a woman wears a man, she will become genderless at the beginning, physiologically!
2. The system has no special cheats or backdoors, it is more like a pet that accompanies the protagonist.
3. The early content will be more focused on daily life and practice. )
Reader comments
Ambiguity with men is really delicious! Especially in line with my xp. I hope Sister Yu can have more heroes to save beauties. It would be great for sisters to help each other! Friendship is also extremely delicious [admiration] I hope I can continue to have no cp
The teacher's writing style is still very good, but when I read the article, I also noticed a little bit of a flaw, that is, the author and teacher can describe the battle scenes more fully and richly. Just like the battle in the secret realm, the spirit root of the immortal cultivation interface is still very important. (It's just a suggestion, everything is subject to the author's intention, and this battle is so cool!!!)
The character design is also very well created. The protagonist loves money, is chic, and is a little bit lacking. Other aspects of his personality are also very interesting, very unique and interesting. I am looking forward to what interesting things will happen to the protagonist next. The author must give more updates! ! ! (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ*
But I still have some doubts about Xue and Xue's classmates. The protagonist didn't give the protagonist a good look even though he saved Xue. This shocked me (((o(*ﾟ▽ﾟ*)o))), although later My attitude has improved, but as a firm protagonist, I feel that even the rude language is still offensive. I am not the protagonist. From my own perspective, I may forgive people who have no big effect on me. I will also in the future. Ignore it, already, many people really don't know what they are saying. It is very obvious that the protagonist has no affection for Xue (referring to love). Xue occupies the identity of the protagonist's fiancée, which not only affects Xue, but also affects the protagonist. The way forward (gives people this feeling), I hope that the issue of the engagement can be solved early, giving people a feeling of wanting and wanting. On the one hand, it describes Xue's love for the protagonist, and on the other hand, he continues to use the protagonist. Who is her, friend? ? ? I have no problem with mutual aid, but we can change the description to make Xue look better.
If you open a book, Xue can be regarded as a proper heroine. With the sign of awakening, you can open a book alone and then have no mood to love to cultivate immortality all the way to success. But in this book, Shen is the protagonist, so Xue's role can be less. I think that Xue is not that important to the protagonist, that is, he is a tool who gives a lot of money. Looking forward to the subsequent characters and plots
How can I put it, the writing is okay, quite daily, but it doesn't write much about the male protagonist's training, and the protagonist's character is okay, a bit too bland, but I almost thought that Xue was the heroine [facepalm] [facepalm]
Shen Xiaoyu/Shen Yanwen Zhenbu poke
Good-looking [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] It's really pretty, nothing poisonous or anything like that.
Ambiguity with men is really delicious! Especially in line with my xp. I hope Sister Yu can have more heroes to save beauties. It would be great for sisters to help each other! Friendship is also extremely delicious [admiration] I hope I can continue to have no cp
The teacher's writing style is still very good, but when I read the article, I also noticed a little bit of a flaw, that is, the author and teacher can describe the battle scenes more fully and richly. Just like the battle in the secret realm, the spirit root of the immortal cultivation interface is still very important. (It's just a suggestion, everything is subject to the author's intention, and this battle is so cool!!!) The character design is also very well created. The protagonist loves money, is chic, and is a little bit lacking. Other aspects of his personality are also very interesting, very unique and interesting. I am looking forward to what interesting things will happen to the protagonist next. The author must give more updates! ! ! (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ* But I still have some doubts about Xue and Xue's classmates. The protagonist didn't give the protagonist a good look even though he saved Xue. This shocked me (((o(*ﾟ▽ﾟ*)o))), although later My attitude has improved, but as a firm protagonist, I feel that even the rude language is still offensive. I am not the protagonist. From my own perspective, I may forgive people who have no big effect on me. I will also in the future. Ignore it, already, many people really don't know what they are saying. It is very obvious that the protagonist has no affection for Xue (referring to love). Xue occupies the identity of the protagonist's fiancée, which not only affects Xue, but also affects the protagonist. The way forward (gives people this feeling), I hope that the issue of the engagement can be solved early, giving people a feeling of wanting and wanting. On the one hand, it describes Xue's love for the protagonist, and on the other hand, he continues to use the protagonist. Who is her, friend? ? ? I have no problem with mutual aid, but we can change the description to make Xue look better. If you open a book, Xue can be regarded as a proper heroine. With the sign of awakening, you can open a book alone and then have no mood to love to cultivate immortality all the way to success. But in this book, Shen is the protagonist, so Xue's role can be less. I think that Xue is not that important to the protagonist, that is, he is a tool who gives a lot of money. Looking forward to the subsequent characters and plots
How can I put it, the writing is okay, quite daily, but it doesn't write much about the male protagonist's training, and the protagonist's character is okay, a bit too bland, but I almost thought that Xue was the heroine [facepalm] [facepalm]
Shen Xiaoyu/Shen Yanwen Zhenbu poke
Good-looking [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] It's really pretty, nothing poisonous or anything like that.