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I really like what my wife wrote. It's short and cruel, and it really pokes fun at me. Drool drips from the corners of my eyes [crying] [crying] And the writing is short, so I usually read longer... It's okay at first, but I'll get tired of it later. So this article really hits my mark, I love it! Wife got married [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It is very in line with my taste. I prefer be literature and this kind of rational and firm protagonist. However, I have been looking for so long and I can't find one that satisfies me. Either I feel soft-hearted halfway through, or I can't bear to get back together later. I can't bear it and then the character collapses. Or I am cruel on the surface but secretly treats people well and then I am found out. I am so cruel that I am sorry for you. It really broke my mentality. This is not the feeling I want at all! ! ! It wasn't until I accidentally opened this book that I opened my heart. This is the protagonist I want and the plot I want! The perfect one in my opinion! ! My heart was beating fast and I was reading books all night long, and my mood was up and down. I was so satisfied! ! So cool~ Author, I love you! Sweet one~[Sending Hearts][KISS] Thank you very much for satisfying my XP and creating a masterpiece in my mind! Looking forward to big updates~ From now on, I will be Dada's most loyal fan~no one can compare with me! No one! ! ! (Dark crawling, roaring and screaming)

Not bad, the idea is quite good, but the writing power is still not strong enough. I want to write about all the plots in the first two worlds, but I only have so many words to write. Each plot point is a little bit unclear, but the details are not very appropriate, and it is very dull to read. The writing style in the next few worlds will be smoother than the previous ones, with a little more ups and downs, and I have tried to cut out some unnecessary plot branches. I think all plots should revolve around character creation, and what kind of plot highlights what kind of characters. The previous ones were too dry. I'm quite fond of ruthless stories, but lately I can't stand long novels. This book is suitable for wandering around the world when you are bored My favorite is probably the character Sui Xin, who is the second son of the General's Mansion. I really like the character of this character. The plot in the early stage is also good, and the character design of Sui Xin is very lovable. Later, it should be for the sake of plot. Many points are relatively weak. In such a short space, at most two characters can be created. The other characters are either not three-dimensional, or their plot lines can be cut off directly, and the multiple plot lines of multiple characters can be integrated into a small number of characters. Like a perfect outline article, I can't imagine how beautiful it would be if it were written as a middle-length article with about a hundred chapters and the details of the writing style are online. Very well written. The more you write, the better. I really like the short story "Please Don't Forget Me"

Looks good, looks good, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... Let's just say one thing, if it's good-looking, it's really good-looking, if it's awesome, it's really awesome ୧⍢⃝୨

It's just my personal opinion. I think the author's writing is quite good. Anyway, I recommend reading it. I saw the place in Miao Village before, and then I didn't read it for a while. I read it again after reading the previous book. I've been reading it until now, and I liked the previous book very much. I can only say that writing this article is also a progressive process. When I read this article, it was actually a bit strange sometimes, and I didn't understand the plot. , But when I looked at it later, the introduction said that one of the subjects may heat up faster, but I still felt a little bit awkward. Although it was done according to the previous life, the same method, but the effect was different, but I didn't particularly care about it. I was also attracted by some of the character traits of his character in the plot and some of the roles he played. I have also read so many Kuai Chuan articles and found that the subject matter of this character is still relatively new. This book is also It's worth watching, and I'm also attracted to this kind of semi-immersive fast-travel. It not only retains the characters of the original world, but also has its own thoughts and can accurately complete the tasks. In fact, when I read this book, I only had a slight emotion when I was fighting against each other. It was more about the characters I played casually. Sometimes it gave me a deep feeling of powerlessness, especially when they quarreled. It was brought about by the original plot, which was very real and helpless, but in the end Hou Suixin can always complete the task in his own way, and it can be said that he comes back with revenge. This place is really attractive. You may only know the feeling after reading it. I hope the author can write better and better, and the writing level will continue to improve, and he can bring us more plump characters and more exciting plots. I heard that the author's next article will be the kind of heart-throb novel. I am very much looking forward to it. I have no choice but to control it. This one (´´ิ∀´ิ`) is booming and trance-like.

It's very interesting \(//∇//)\, the main character is not a love-minded person, and his personality is very annoying to me [blowing kiss], but I am a bit glassy, ​​and I feel sad [crying]. The stories in other worlds are very interesting, especially the world line of the stand-in and Neptune [heartfelt], but the seventh and fifth worlds are not very interesting to me, so I skipped it [currently in progress]

It's very interesting. I like this kind of careless protagonist recently, with clear goals and no love brain. Come on! !

Super pretty! I don't like that half of the chapter is talking to the system. It's really worth it! Sui Xin is not an idiot. My wife is a good baby who has a plan and knows what to do! Specially recommend Xixin Miaojiang! (I think this one is the most beautiful)

The two books written by the author are very, very, very beautiful [Sending Hearts] [Blowing Kisses] [Blowing Kisses] Good luck to the author [Blowing Kisses] I really like the two books written by the author [Sending Hearts] [Blowing Kisses] [Blowing Kisses]

After reading Zhendu, I recommend it [Sending Hearts]. I hesitated after reading the comments that it was very sad. After reading it, I felt that it was basically a good story. I was frustrated by the fact that the main text did not focus on the task, and the person who was abused throughout the whole process was Gong. Although it was a bit hard to let go of Gong's reformation and not being together later, but it is normal for the scumbag things Gong did in the first part of the story to have such an ending.

I really like it. The characters are very unique and the plot is so interesting. A bit cruel, but very interesting, not just for this reason

Super super super super super nice (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Come on, update soon

I really like the sadistic novels, and the writing is not a novice. The plots in each world are also very interesting. I have also finished reading the other sadistic book. I really like Sui Xin, but in some worlds I really feel sorry for Sui Xin. Fortunately, the quick travel is also really fast. After a few chapters, I can abuse the scum, which is super cool!

I like it so much＼（＾∀＾）メ（＾∀＾）ノ(*^.^*) Kiss~ Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good

It's quite good to watch, and the plot is not draggy. Although I feel that the scumbags in the ending are relatively weak and not as powerful as in the early stages, but they deserve their punishment. Nothing is left in the end [Explore]

The author's words are bold, and the protagonist is free to do as he pleases. Unlike other novels, which are very deliberately rejecting and welcoming, it feels very unpretentious. Anyway, I think the author has a lot of future. I hope the author can write a novel a day, okay! ! ! ! [Like][Like][Like]

Good-looking (the kind that makes you reluctant to let go even if you don't sleep in the middle of the night)

I've read half of it. The stand-in chapter is a bit long. I'll take a break and read it again. So far, except for the first world where the writing feels a bit stiff, the later chapters get better and better. I love watching this kind of sadistic, heart-wrenching and a little bit satisfying. Recommend [top post]

Sadomasochism story, great acting, great looking! There are endings with or without cp and with cp. The author's other quick travel book also has the same theme, and it's also very interesting. Little h (system) is very cute, Sui Xin is very good, smart and kind, and Xie also loves Sui Xin very much. Everything is fine, except that the small world is be

Good-looking, a bit sadistic, every article is be. The emotional line in the unit article may be a bit inexplicable. The extra love line is that Xie Yubai has been secretly in love with Shou and Lu Suixin for seven years, but because Shou is a vegetative state in the real world, he uses stimulation therapy to let Shou wake up after experiencing every sadomasochism in the story. The ending is HE

It's so beautiful. I couldn't stop crying late at night. I like that the plot doesn't drag out and doesn't have so many tedious words to describe beautiful actions. It's crisp and clear. I love it. It's so exciting that it's all linked together.

The author's story is not cliché and interesting, but the protagonist's mood changes sometimes are a bit too fast and cannot keep up with the protagonist's mood changes. This aspect feels a bit new. Some areas still need a lot of practice, come on

Great! Oh wow… why is it so beautiful? Woohoo… It's been a long time since I've read a piece of writing that appeals to my taste! (Shui Lingling kissed him) Yes, it's this sour and refreshing smell! Just let me have another bite, I will do anything😭😭😭 (Oh my God, be is simply the best among the best, the most delicious among the delicious, and the indispensable seasoning for a scumbag counterattack. Master, I will not allow anyone to disobey you...)

It's pretty good, I just like sad stories. The only bad thing I think is that the small world is too long. It would be better if it was shortened. I think another book written by the author is shorter than this chapter and is also a sadistic novel, which is more to my liking.

It looks good. If you like it, I want to read more. I suggest you publish more similar quick-travel articles.

Super pretty, loves to torture, a lot of torture [shy] hee hee hee hee hee

I have read so many books, and the ending of this one is really unexpected. I didn't expect it at all. It is a bit long, but fortunately the plot is rich. For a person who prefers meat, I hope it can be more meaty. Who said that the platform cannot serve meat dishes? This story is paired with meat dishes, which is definitely comparable to a Manchu-Han banquet! Sorry, sorry!

It's so beautiful. This book is exactly what I'm interested in. Every world is very beautiful and not boring at all. This is really the best fast-travel novel I've seen this year. I can't get enough of it. I hope more people can read it [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

Not bad, not bad. It gets better and better as you go to the back. I feel like the author is getting smoother as he writes [adoration][adoration][adoration]

It's quite good to watch, the small world is short, I can't stand it, it's soft, and it's a death escape, which means I'm a little bit imprisoned by Xiao Lei, but everything else is great [Thinking][Thinking]