Star Railway: Aha Praised Me for Writing a Great Diary!

The writing is not bad, there are some typos but it is okay. Although the plot is not very novel, it is still good. The character of the protagonist is also relatively clear. I personally like it. If it is updated continuously, this will be a good book worth reading. Personal complaints: Ever since I started playing Star Path, I have been obsessed with the star vaults. An ordinary treasure chest gives five star vaults, and the highest level 30. For a player who started from Genshin Impact, the shock is huge. Maybe the benefits are too good, and Genshin Impact no longer wants to log in [smile] Maybe it's because of my state of mind. Sixty draws of the one-life Dragon Girl, ten draws of Silver Wolf (I clicked the wrong one when I drew the Silver Branch), 0+1 Silver Branch, and I never thought that my first six-star full life would be Asda, which makes me wonder. I recall the difficult days in Genshin Impact. I worked very hard every day to open anchor points and treasure chests. I only saved a few hundred rough stones. I took a group of four-star characters to explore the snowy mountains. Whenever I froze to death in the snowy mountains, I was thinking, why? I want to come to the snow mountain and suffer this? Then I realized it, ran to fight Xumi, and was beaten like a dog in the dead zone [I almost cried] I wonder how long it will take to get breakthrough materials for characters and weapons in Genshin Impact? One day or one week? I can't remember clearly, I only remember that the damage at level 36 is only 3000... (All four-star characters, no explosion, can only rely on grinding) Is there something wrong with my training? Is it because I don't have enough energy every day? I only remember that when I first entered the pit, I spent more than six hours online every day, but even so, I needed more breakthrough materials one by one, and my physical strength was becoming less and less used. With 160 points of physical strength, I could fight up to four bosses. Well, I could only get eight breakthrough materials, and I needed 12 for level 70, and there was more than one character. I was so tired.

Don't talk about whether it will collapse or not. Wouldn't it be fun to follow the plot of Star Iron? Fans must create something and magically change the plot.

Come on, the author, please don't stop updating! [Cry][cry][cry]

Very interesting. It would be great if there was only one female protagonist or 2 to 3 female protagonists, but it would be easy to collapse if there were more.

I finished reading it in one go. You, the author, are so imaginative. I was laughing so happily in the middle of the night. But when I saw what was said in the comment section, it became confusing and I was afraid that I would not know what to write next. Harmful, we can look forward to the future. It doesn't matter if it doesn't follow the main line of the game. It doesn't matter if it's a strange journey alone. What's important is that it reads fresh, happy and joyful [laughs][laughs]

At the beginning, I saw that the main character's diary was too perverted, and I felt that athlete's foot was completely unacceptable, so I gave up. Later, I couldn't find any other Xingtie to read it, so I came back and found that it started to get better in the back, a lot of logic started to appear, and the plot started to get better. I think if it weren't a bit toxic at the beginning, the score could be given to 8.5 Or more. Appropriate perversion makes people happy, but excessive perversion is unacceptable (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on, and please update the author quickly♪

This book is really enjoyable, I am a fun person, the plot and story are generally interesting, and overall this is a good book.

It feels pretty good. It's a good choice to watch for fun. The rest of the story feels like it's all interactive. After the main plot related to Beloberg's elimination of the star core, the part of the emotional line is a bit abrupt? In my opinion, some characters always feel a bit OOC in the later part, but it is not serious and can be ignored. Later, after the protagonist tells Qingque that he "believes in the same harmony", it feels a bit broken (lol). In general, if you like to read for fun and interact with each other, and are not too strict about the character settings, this novel is worth reading for you.

My evaluation is no evaluation [laughing evilly]

This book is quite good. It was quite fun to read. I couldn't live without laughing in the middle of the night. There are also some jokes about protecting everyone in front of me [laughing evilly]. There are many female protagonists, but the only ones they kissed were Heita and Fu Xuan. Others are a bit ambiguous. Just read this book for fun.

It's okay, that's why it was exposed so early. Although it is quite interesting to interact with the characters in the plot, writing this at the beginning will make the characters' personalities too confusing, and then I have to make up my own later. After all, the game line is gone.

The characters are well done, the plot is a bit confusing, and it's a pity to abandon it because the plot is tasteless. It's very enjoyable, and the world view setting is quite confusing, and then Advantages: Fun comes first, the characters are good, and there is a lot of interaction without crashing Disadvantages: The Riddler, a fan of the setting, the plot is vague, the emotional line is complicated (it's just subtle, not confusing), not a good novel

It looks good, I love watching it (I like the female imp Aha [laughing evilly])

It's well written. What I like most about this book is the reactions of the characters when they read the diary.

Come on come on come on come on

Why? Why would such a fun book have such a low rating?

Oh, author, please don't finish it, please give me more and more points, please don't finish it and give me more and more points. [Smile]

Noisy chicken is good-looking, but the corners of my mouth are harder to suppress than Pharaoh Wutuo [sneered laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky smile]

I have read this book, to be precise, I have only read about 50 chapters. I think it is very in line with my taste, and the character of the protagonist is also in line with my feelings. It is not like those books that give me a protagonist with the same temperament as a diaosi. So I hope the author will not stop reading and continue to work hard. I think it is very well written, and I am a reader who likes to read more female protagonists. I think it is good. Because I like to read every word of a book and experience the emotions of the characters, so I read the fifty chapters for three hours, looking forward to the subsequent development of the plot and emotions, as well as the advancement of the emotional relationship between the heroines.

It's okay to have fun and be a little perverted

When will the author release a new book? I want to read it ~ I want to read it ~ [Sending my heart]

It's pretty good, basically just for everyday use.

Okay, the heroine's reaction is not like some novels. It's just that I don't mind sharing my boyfriend with someone else.

It was really fun, but it did fall apart a bit in the later stages.

This is the third novel I have read in its entirety. Although it didn't let me see the parts I wanted to read the most, such as marriage. The book was broken and not completely completed. I was quite satisfied with it. But thinking about it, I still got more and more angry when I thought about it. However, I said so much within the acceptable range in order to post more words for evaluation. But there are not that many words, so I'll post an equal sign and two thousand words. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ,,,,,,,,,. ,,. ,,. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Forget it, I'm too lazy. More than 500 words are enough.

I haven't watched it for just a week. It ended 8 days ago? Didn't the author write the plot of Pinoconi? @Flandoluscaret What else has the author written? Why was it lost? @Flandoluscaret

Big discovery! After re-installing the software and searching again, it still can't be found? (I clicked on past book reviews to find them!) Is it restricted? Ask the author quickly Don't believe it, it's true, there are pictures Posted in the book review of Chapter 1

Come on, author, it's rare to find someone so understandable. You must hold on.

Overall, it's good. It's a bit off in the later stages, but it's not bad, so it's well written.

It's not bad. Maybe the reason for the low rating is that there are not many readers for fun-loving people like me.