Midwinter***********

It's not cool enough. I really can't feel the difference with this talent, whether it's fighting or statistics. Being surrounded and beaten by a bunch of ordinary people is quite frustrating. But the portrayal of the heroine is the highlight! ! Tsk tsk.

The writing is very average, there are no details where the details should be, and the details are very detailed where they should not be. It is simply too much nonsense~ The plot cannot be pushed forward at all, the logic does not make sense, and the outline is not there at a glance. I don't know how the reading amount is so high. Compared with the protagonist, this is useless. The charade is rubbish, I guess the next charade may be very strong. It doesn't feel good to call it a cool novel. I like to read cool stories about people trying to persuade them to quit. The protagonist is too fw. He can't survive more than two chapters or 50 chapters without being hung up. It's outrageous to run away when you see a zombie who can run away. The key is that your charade makes you a stupid zombie.

Generally speaking, there are enemies who know how to unlock the house and then run out to find supplies. They also leave the woman behind to see if others come to steal the house. You stabbed your brain every day at home, right?

With a physical fitness that is four times higher than that of ordinary people, he could not defeat more than a dozen ordinary people and was even injured [laughter]

I'm sure the protagonist is not Qin Peiyao. This male protagonist is such a useless foil. He is completely the supporting role of this woman.

It's not bad, even if pig's feet are systematic! Men can't say no, but pig's feet are still really not okay if they have a system! It's too weak, and it's so annoying! The plot of forcing Zhishui to fall was so embarrassing! The system is too awkward. A pig's trotters flying with the system is not as good as a wild native!

It won't work until you reach Chapter 8. Just act faster. Why do you like talking nonsense so much? Don't you know that the enemy dies by talking nonsense?

It is said to be a zombie apocalypse. There are not a few zombies in dozens of chapters. 80% Of the world's population has died. There are survivors wherever you go. It doesn't matter if you don't see a decisive killing. In the apocalypse, everything you write is about human feelings and sophistication. You might as well write a modern novel. There is no need to wear the coat of an apocalyptic novel. The more I watched, the more uncomfortable I became, and I couldn't stand it anymore.

What the hell did you write? The 3s talent is like shit.

Not bad, a normal post-apocalyptic story about having many children and many blessings, without too many bloody plots I retract my normal comment, more children, more blessings, but if you have a man in your family, it is normal to have a man if you are in a doomsday team, but in your family story, you have a man who is not related by blood, because he is very talented, and the setting of the heroine is also all kinds of weird.

Writing dozens of chapters with one heroine is great, but having multiple heroines with depth is top notch!

Third SSS has been written as trash by you. It's been several chapters and I haven't seen the young woman taken in. The system's products must be high-quality, but it's only been three days and it hasn't reached the full level yet.

Can anyone write a book now? [What][What][What][What][What]

Are you planning to write tens of thousands of chapters? The level 5 base vehicle is just rubbish. Do you want to stand out from the crowd?

The system is too rubbish and the protagonist is too boring. It's a shame that we can become bigger and stronger in the last days.

I'm really tired of seeing this kind of thing. You want to accept a vase and the vase will fight. Why don't you go to heaven? If you don't accept a woman you don't like, what will your son do in the future? Self-produced and sold?

It makes me sick. There is only so much stuff in the largest supermarket in the city. A person with 5 times the attributes of a human is besieged and beaten by a group of gangsters. Don't write a novel like this. No one will read it.

Not bad, suits my taste

Nowadays, the threshold for authors is so low. I really can write whatever comes to my mind without even making an outline.

I think this plug-in is most suitable for scientific research and improving one's various abilities. If the protagonist is willing, he can control nuclear fusion, anti-matter weapons, artificial intelligence, and space elevators.

Anyone can write a novel, right?

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue Baili Tusu has waited for 900 years, Nightshade has waited for Long Yang for 1,000 years, Bai Niangzi has waited for Xu Xian for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan has waited for Yu Shu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer has waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao has waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, and Zixuan has waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. On a certain day, a certain day, a certain month, a woman was lying weakly on the bed, her face could not hide the paleness. There was a slight smile on his lips. Her outstretched hand trembled slightly, and tears shone in the corners of her eyes. The hoarse voice murmured: "Don't forget to update...". .

Why is the rating so low? Is it because some guy plays basketball?

I've read a lot about the apocalypse, and it's basically all about wretched development!

It's very good. It's one of the better post-apocalyptic novels I've read so far [Chigua] [Chigua]

Yes, although it is an old theme, the writing is quite innovative, plus serialization. I hope the author will continue to work hard [I learned it]

Four stars support it

Come on, author! The characterization and plot added from Chapter 17 are pretty good. Can be improved. Come on!

Well written, worth recommending

Hahaha, red and hot, in a trance