After Our Breakup, I Marry My Proud, Gorgeous Long-Legged Boss on a Whim!

I actually really want to know why my ex-girlfriend Qin Yao made the male protagonist so miserable?

I would like to give some suggestions to the author. Take the chapter updated today as an example. There is a large paragraph in it that introduces the administrative structure of Milo Company [Chigua]. However, it is too detailed and completely unnecessary. It is all nonsense that overshadows the main topic. Firstly, it cannot enrich the character image. Secondly, it cannot promote the development of the plot. Thirdly, it cannot heighten the atmosphere. So many words are just a waste of words 🧐 As for the long paragraph before Chapter 112, it is useless to write it in such detail, it will only reduce the desire to read. But I still like this story very much, but the author sometimes writes too much about irrelevant content.

Not bad, but the ex-girlfriend has other reasons, but no matter how you say it, she is out, and she still smells like a tenant

It was too depressing. What happened to the ex-girlfriend was worse than real cheating. The ex-girlfriend thought that this would be good for the male protagonist, but the male protagonist ended up having a flash marriage. Then after the ex-girlfriend did what she did, the male protagonist found out and said something pretentious, "Why do you think I won't accompany you?" The ending [sneaky laugh], and then the comment section began to divide into two groups, one One faction said, ah ah ah ah ah ah ah, two people have been together for ten years, so they should share weal and woe. The ex-girlfriend thought she was right and ended up committing suicide, so she deserved it. The other faction is a bunch of nonsense. The last love I give you is to let go of my hand. If you truly love someone, you won't let go of him. He will not suffer any harm. The ex-girlfriend sacrificed herself to become the male protagonist. It is really great love. Hahahahahahaha, I'm going crazy reading a novel with a special number.

Although it's a bit bloody, the plot is still good

The book felt like too little was written and ended in a hurry. I think it must be that while generating electricity with love, I am also affected by readers' comments. The author's income is too little, which is why this book is like this. Does the author have any other works?

It's really good, but it's not completely enjoyable. The author's writing style is also very good. It's a pity that it only has 300,000 words. Now that I've read half of it, I feel like the story has just begun but it's about to end. I feel like I'm watching a female tenant in her twenties. Although it's not a first-person perspective, it's really well written. It's not that. It's a conventional book, and it's a book that I don't have any desire for at first glance. I feel that the author must have wanted to write this book very well and spent a lot of thought on it. It's a pity that I just saw this book today. It's really well written, but it's a pity that it was buried. It didn't produce good results and lost money, so I only wrote 300,000 words and ended it. Keep reading and leave a comment after you finish reading

Why aren't many people reading such a good-looking book? Maybe it's because the recommendations and traffic from Tomato are too little. Book friends who saw this comment strongly recommend giving it a try.

Good-looking, not good-looking

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