The Incompetent Me Turned into a Beautiful Girl

The book is very good, but I can't understand the first volume: In Chapter 33, the protagonist watched a person die in front of him, without any fluctuation in his heart? Then I personally think it's better to describe the author's words in the third person.

It's great, but the volume about the bones of giant beasts didn't have the heroine, which made me a little uncomfortable. I always felt that it lacked some human flavor.

I have never read a novel on this subject before. The plot setting of sexual transformation is very confusing. The author handled Xiao Jiang's transition from shock to acceptance very well.

The writer writes very well. Come on, come on, come on, don't stop updating [Like][Like]

I rarely give four stars, but there are many more books that I have not reviewed, and you need to know that this is not a criticism but a hope for better things in the future. I read about half of this book and skipped to the end. I could feel the emotion and special world view described by the author. The advantage is that some of the ideas are relatively novel, and the storyline relies on details rather than routines. But the shortcomings need to be mentioned. For example, the connection is too fast, there is not enough buffer part, the story is taken to the next location and the next event in a few sentences, and the readers are not given enough reaction time. You must know that reading online articles is basically ten lines per page, and if there is too much information in this ten lines, it will disrupt the reader's rhythm. While attracting attention, the reader will also read the content seriously. At this time, if the writing is not in place, it will greatly affect the reader's evaluation of the book. Many times, my subconscious told me that I wanted to see certain plots, which would obviously make readers more happy. But unfortunately, the plot did not develop in the direction I expected, but drifted to an unknown place. In terms of the depiction of other characters, the writing method is okay, with a relatively mature narrative technique, but the final effect is immature, because the focus of the group portrait must be around a major event, and this event must be related to the protagonist many times, and the more scenes the other characters have, the corresponding growth and experience should be related to the protagonist many times, so as to achieve the role of contrasting the protagonist. There must be a solid center point, so that the story can be completed without excessive imagination. Originally I could not make a review, but the explosive plot of the protagonist shooting a nuclear bomb made me see something special, but it was a pity that I couldn't see it when I read the middle part, so I didn't read the middle and last parts of the book. I hope the author can keep up the good work. [Like][Like][Like][Like]

It's pretty, so to speak. Unfortunately, the author's writing style is not suitable for today's readers, so it is not popular.

The theme of the story is good and very innovative! The author's writing style is smooth and his words are clever. A very good book!

After reading it, I feel very good. There are two large paragraphs in the middle that describe other people's perspectives. Although this is also part of advancing the plot and describing the world view, I feel that it can be slightly less, or indirectly participate in it from the perspective of the protagonist. Finally, the ending is a bit unclear. Did the protagonist successfully break through to another universe or go back to the past to complete a closed time loop? I hope the author can give me some answers

The content is good and the writing is good. I like it very much. Kudos to the author.

This book is so imaginative. I read it in one go and my eyes went blind. Please keep updating, I'm waiting for it! ! ! !

It's very interesting, but what's the main character's stance in the future? [Chigua]

The writing is quite good, and I feel like the protagonist doesn't appear very often in the end, and is all about telling other people's stories.

I like this story [adoration] [blowing kiss] [smirk]

It's very imaginative, very exciting, and the characters are perfectly portrayed. You must support it.

Very good, worth recommending, keep up the good work... Keep up the good work.

The plot of the novel is reasonable and it is a rare masterpiece.

The content is novel and the storyline is very natural and watchable.

It must be because the author didn't work hard enough to get 18 reviews! ! ? !

I was a bit confused after reading the first volume and then started to hit the road. I always feel that Xiao Jiang is getting stronger

I feel like I did watch something, but I feel like I didn't watch anything at all [Thinking]

Let's talk about it later

Interesting, very attractive at first

Not bad, let's open the next one (not for reading on this phone) [Thinking]

Can write, have strength, and be scientific

It's a bit amazing, but the ending is too sudden and not enough to watch.